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Old 09-13-2009, 05:34 PM   #1
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Default Amor eterno

Hay un dolor en mi corazon
que no me deja vivir
Tus recuerdos toman todo mi sentir
Jamas te e olvidado, y nunca lo hare
Sigues en mis pensamientos
y en mi corazon
Quema dentro de mi,
Como el fuego de un dragon
Siempre me acorde de ti,
No importo el tiempo
Nunca te deje ir
Tus labios en mis labios,
y tus dulces tiernos besos
Fueron el veneno,
que entro hasta en mis huesos
como hacer para olvidar?
Para sacarte de mi ser?
Como hacer de cuenta
Que solo seras mi amigo?
Se que es imposible,
tan distante estas de mi
Pero juro que nunca,
me e vuelto a sentir asi.
Asi como en tus brazon,
en las noches de amor
Sin tener algun temor
Me pregunto muchas veces,
si tan solo soy yo,
quien siente este fervor.
Y si asi es, dime que hago?
Como hacer para olvidarte?
Quisiera creer,
que aun piensas en mi.
Que lo que fuistes tu,
yo lo fui para ti.
Mi primer amor, eterno....
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Old 09-13-2009, 06:16 PM   #2
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Default Re: Amor eterno

very cool brownie.....took me a while to read it though.....since im a mexican(dumbass) that cant read spanish that good.....props....
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Old 09-13-2009, 08:47 PM   #3
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props;;
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Old 10-21-2009, 03:33 AM   #4
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Default Re: Amor eterno

Originally Posted by ThronedImmortal View Post
very cool brownie.....took me a while to read it though.....since im a mexican(dumbass) that cant read spanish that good.....props....
THANKS! JUST TO UPDATE, THIS AMOR...THE ONE I TALK ABOUT, LOL...........I GUESS DREAMS DO COME TRUE...CATCH MY DRIFT? BROWNIE BLISS IS IN LUUUUUUUUUUUUUUVVVVVVVVVVV...LMAO...SORRY, JUST HAPPY
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Old 11-02-2009, 08:42 AM   #5
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THat was actually pretty awesome... I can totally relate In never forgetting one's first love or getting over all them magical moments. One juss leanrs to move on and fall in love again without even knowing it =)
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