BATTLE CALL "THRILL"

[J-Gunz! "F.O.E. Cru"]

HEY WE NEED TO BATTLE, LETS DO THIS!

16 BARS
NO FEEDING
FIRST TO 5 WINS
3-0 = K.O.
DUE THE SAME DAY YOU EXCEPT MY CHALLENGE. NO EXCUSES!

[THRILL]

Checkin in

Droppin too


im checkin this fool, lil joey tha cru
a foe to who? he been here for months and still he a noob

what he gon' do, battlin niggas i already wrecked
put that lil pistol down homie you'll be needin a tech

he shootin at me in his avy cause he'll never get close
nigga my bread's a whole loaf and u just buttery toast

BP hates me tha most, but still they kno im tha man
i was on stage wit ESG ur an invisible fan

i wouldnt call u a stan, cause u aint doin a thang
but on yo bitch my dick swang, she was screamin my name

how u gon' step to tha THRILL, i got alot and u got Nil'
lookin at tha screen i can see ya tears spill

nigga im a big body and u road kill
yo name is J-Gunz but u never Hold Steel

if it was up to me lil homie wouldnt even drop
before his fans see him like a fish and watch him flop

and we wanna kno what F.O.E. is but i bet
That shit Stands For a Faggot On the Enternet

and i know its Internet but i dont give a shit
u kno why? cause i can do that, but i aint flip

and i would stop but makin u cry is so temptin
u aint gon' do nuthin u mo yella belly than homer simpson

a battle call to THRILL is like a Gun in ur mouth
u better hold ur toung for u end up done in tha south

im runnin tha house, u sleepin on tha roof like snoop
he'll get 'crushed' like peanuts and get 'flushed' like poop

his whole group is cat shit,he too little for bull
he gets used by hoes so he's a literal tool

i'll pop him in the balls like pool, ima spit n' he'll drool
he take it up the butt so much that he got blood n' tha stool

i hope that everyone votes for him just so he can feel special
this battle's nuthin to me but this nigga is under pressure..




sigh....

*sidenote- i was watchin Tv while doin this.. so like half way thru i just gave up and typed whatever...
so... meh...my bad for not givin a good battle

but i'll prolly try to hit up a rematch some time soon...

[J-Gunz! "F.O.E. Cru"]

YO, I SAID 16 BARS NOT 32! DIDNT U READ THE RULES......FUCK IT, ALL I WROTE WAS 16 SO HERE U GO.


BITCH I’LL YAWN IN YOUR FACE, CAUSE UR THRILLS AINT EXCITING AT ALL,
READING YOUR FLOW IS AS FUN AS SHOPPING WIT UR GIRL AT THE MALL.(YAWN)
CLAIMIN YOU HOT, BITCH WHEN YOU AINT EVEN LUKE WARM
YOU WANNA BATTLE, AIGHT!, ILL TAKE IT TO UR HOME LIKE DESERT STORM!( TEXAS RIGHT)
THERE AINT NO WAY YOU WINNING, PUSSY YOU LACKING THE WORD FORM
CAUSE MY PUNCHES WILL CUT U SHORT LIKE A 1 HANDED MAN JUGGLING SWORDS! (OH SHIT!)
SO BEFORE I MOVE FORWARD, I SUGGEST YOU TAKE SOME PAIN PILLS
CAUSE WHAT GUNZ GOT INSTORE FOR U IS MORE THAN YOUR CHEAP “THRILLS”.
I DON’T WEAR LOUD COLORS TO STAND OUT, LIKE GIRL SCOUTS
AND YOU LOOKING LIKE A BITCH THE WAY YOUR FONTS MATCH THE COLOR OF YOUR BLOUSE!
GET THE FUCK OUTTA HERE WIT DAT GAY SHIT, YOU PROBABLY FRIENDS WIT CLAY AIKEN
I BET THAT AMERICAN IDLE WISH HE WAS GIVING YOU THIS SPANKING. (OUCH)
SO WHAT THE FUCK YOU GONNA SAY TO TRYIN TAKE ME OUT
I CALLED YOU OUT, TO PROVE THAT RAP IS SOMETHING YOU NOT KNOWLEDGEABLE ABOUT.
BITCH PLEASE, YOU AINT IN NO POSITION TO CHALLENGE MY EXPERTISE
CAUSE THIS BEAST WILL EAT YOU UP LIKE A CAN OF CHICKEN OF THE SEA.(TUNA)

[J-Gunz! "F.O.E. Cru"]

I GUESS THATS IT. VOTE UP PEOPLE.

[THRILL]

The Breakdown


THERE AINT NO WAY YOU WINNING, PUSSY YOU LACKING THE WORD FORM
CAUSE MY PUNCHES WILL CUT U SHORT LIKE A 1 HANDED MAN JUGGLING SWORDS! (OH SHIT!)

Liked this line alot. creative, good imagry.. this is what i want to see

I DON’T WEAR LOUD COLORS TO STAND OUT, LIKE GIRL SCOUTS
AND YOU LOOKING LIKE A BITCH THE WAY YOUR FONTS MATCH THE COLOR OF YOUR BLOUSE!

Damn Ouch...

GET THE FUCK OUTTA HERE WIT DAT GAY SHIT, YOU PROBABLY FRIENDS WIT CLAY AIKEN
I BET THAT AMERICAN IDLE WISH HE WAS GIVING YOU THIS SPANKING. (OUCH)

good one. didnt see that comin although im not sure what someone else wants to do to me has to do
with me being gay but watever


BITCH PLEASE, YOU AINT IN NO POSITION TO CHALLENGE MY EXPERTISE
CAUSE THIS BEAST WILL EAT YOU UP LIKE A CAN OF CHICKEN OF THE SEA.(TUNA)

weak closer. but ok i guess


nice consistant flow. decent punches..
no complaints at all. it was a all around good drop..
good job. keep it up..


on my part..
idk wtf.. i was ready to drop bombs but half way thru i was like. damn i dont even wanna write no more and just gave up and typed the first shit i thought of.
im sure they can tell where i fell off..

but nevertheless this is a win for u. good shit..

rematch comin soon.. next time ima bring tha goods so be on a look out mayne

[Senorita Maleeka]

I DON’T WEAR LOUD COLORS TO STAND OUT, LIKE GIRL SCOUTS
AND YOU LOOKING LIKE A BITCH THE WAY YOUR FONTS MATCH THE COLOR OF YOUR BLOUSE!

lol that was too funny!

J-Gunz without a doubt..

[Da_Mayor]

Thrill:

The first half was nice, but you fell off in the second half. I thought the best line was:

nigga im a big body and u road kill
yo name is J-Gunz but u never Hold Steel

Nice play on his name.


J Gunz:
Real good and consistent throughout the verse. Lot of good punches but my favorite was:

GET THE FUCK OUTTA HERE WIT DAT GAY SHIT, YOU PROBABLY FRIENDS WIT CLAY AIKEN
I BET THAT AMERICAN IDLE WISH HE WAS GIVING YOU THIS SPANKING. (OUCH)


Vote goes to J Gunz

[Young-Mothafucking-B]

I think J-guns Won this battle
but nice flow thrill
vote J-guns

[J-Gunz! "F.O.E. Cru"]

HEY THANK FOR THE VOTES YALL, AND IF THRILL DOESNT HAVE ANY DISPUTE THATS 3-0 WHICH MEANS THIS BATTLE WAS A K.O.

OH AND YOUNG CAN I GET A BREAKDOWN WHEN YOU GET A CHANCE. I JUS WANT TO KNOW WHAT YOU LIKED ABOUT THE FLOW SO I CAN KEEP DISHIN IT OUT. THANK

I WOULD ALSO APPRECIATE THE THOUGHTS OF THE VETERANS HERE ALONG WITTA BREAKDOWN.

[Young-Mothafucking-B]

Originally Posted by J-Gunz! "F.O.E. Cru"

HEY THANK FOR THE VOTES YALL, AND IF THRILL DOESNT HAVE ANY DISPUTE THATS 3-0 WHICH MEANS THIS BATTLE WAS A K.O.

OH AND YOUNG CAN I GET A BREAKDOWN WHEN YOU GET A CHANCE. I JUS WANT TO KNOW WHAT YOU LIKED ABOUT THE FLOW SO I CAN KEEP DISHIN IT OUT. THANK

I WOULD ALSO APPRECIATE THE THOUGHTS OF THE VETERANS HERE ALONG WITTA BREAKDOWN.

alright here it is my break-down

BITCH I’LL YAWN IN YOUR FACE, CAUSE UR THRILLS AINT EXCITING AT ALL,
READING YOUR FLOW IS AS FUN AS SHOPPING WIT UR GIRL AT THE MALL.
NICE SHIT HOMIE KEEP AT IT!

CLAIMIN YOU HOT, BITCH WHEN YOU AINT EVEN LUKE WARM
YOU WANNA BATTLE, AIGHT!, ILL TAKE IT TO UR HOME LIKE DESERT STORM!( TEXAS RIGHT)
THERE AINT NO WAY YOU WINNING, PUSSY YOU LACKING THE WORD FORM
CAUSE MY PUNCHES WILL CUT U SHORT LIKE A 1 HANDED MAN JUGGLING SWORDS! (OH SHIT!)
straight killing em

SO BEFORE I MOVE FORWARD, I SUGGEST YOU TAKE SOME PAIN PILLS
CAUSE WHAT GUNZ GOT INSTORE FOR U IS MORE THAN YOUR CHEAP “THRILLS”.
DOPE, RAW

I DON’T WEAR LOUD COLORS TO STAND OUT, LIKE GIRL SCOUTS
AND YOU LOOKING LIKE A BITCH THE WAY YOUR FONTS MATCH THE COLOR OF YOUR BLOUSE!
Had me cracking nice personal too Hahaha

GET THE FUCK OUTTA HERE WIT DAT GAY SHIT, YOU PROBABLY FRIENDS WIT CLAY AIKEN
I BET THAT AMERICAN IDLE WISH HE WAS GIVING YOU THIS SPANKING. (OUCH)
SO WHAT THE FUCK YOU GONNA SAY TO TRYIN TAKE ME OUT
I CALLED YOU OUT, TO PROVE THAT RAP IS SOMETHING YOU NOT KNOWLEDGEABLE ABOUT.
Its ight

BITCH PLEASE, YOU AINT IN NO POSITION TO CHALLENGE MY EXPERTISE
CAUSE THIS BEAST WILL EAT YOU UP LIKE A CAN OF CHICKEN OF THE SEA.(TUNA)
Nice closer!

and thrill yo shit alright i guess? but um keep practicing eventually you'll get better
but don't let it get over yo head you'll fall off! know what I'm saying... gunz you already know
u good at what you doing just keep on doing what ya do homie and murder yo opponent