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HEY MiJiTAS.. (MiJOS).. HERES A NEW STORY.. UMM.... iDK if ITS N E GOOD.. IM STILL GONNA BE WRITIN MUH SEX STORIES.. PERO.. I WANNA KEEP ONE GOING U KNOE? NOT JUST POST ONE, FINISH IT, N POST ONE. I WANNA HAVE LIKE A NOVELA LOL.. NE WAYS HERE IT IS SO CHECK IT OUT.. AND IF ITS N E GOOD LEAVE SOME LOVE!
ELENA-- 17, female (well, duh) simply beautiful, big brown eyes, long thick eyelashes, full lips, beautiful smile, shoulder length hair that was cut in layers, which she flipped out making it look cute, badd ass body, nice sized breast, thick thighs, and a big o booty! Was quiet sometimes, wasnt a loud female, pero she talked her shit when it came down to it... badd ass homegurl..
PATI-- 17, female, very pretty, light brown eyes, nice sized lips, cute smile, long jet black hair, cute body, was sorta small from tha chest, but her ass made up for it all.. was basically always loud, very crazy homegurl, lived with Elena because her dad had a drinking problem, and she wuz tired of it.
JUAN-- 19, male, very cute, Elenas brother, had pretty green eyes, long ass eyelashes, full lips, had a fade, sexy ass body, and wuz a down ass homeboy, he wuz crazy as hell, and knew how to have fun, wuz a badd ass figher, and wuz very protective over Elena, she wuz all he had left, kept to himself, never told n e one his problems.
CARLOS-- 18, male, FUCKIN SEXY, Juan and him where cool n a way, but they where best buds, had light beautiful hazel eyes, hot ass body, sexy smile, had a fade goin on, was crazy as hell and wuz funny, knew how to kick it back, and knew when to be serious, wuz a down ass homeboy and wuz known for how good he fought...
Place:: 1:30 >>AM<< @ A HOMEBOYS HOUSE PARTYING
Elena walks outside with a bottle of Jose Cuervo, tears streeming down her face..
Elena-- Pendeja.. (whispering to herself)
She stumbles a little, and finally she gets to tha curb and sits down, she takes another long drink of the bottle, and shakes her head....
Elena-- How in the fuck could I have done somethin so stupid....
She trys whipping her tears away, but it does no use, they still continue to fall.... She sits there and thinks about the past.....
When her parents where actually alive.. When she wuz actually happy.... When she actually felt that she belonged in this cruel ass world.... When she didnt dread waking up in the morning... When she actually thought about the future...
She takes another swig,
She thinks to hereself:: lord... Send me a message... Por favor... I need to knoe that your actually up there listening to me.... Help me out.. Before I do something stupid.... *whippin her tears* And looks down at her wrists that are scarred.....
She takes another drink, chuggin what wuz left, and letting it burn in her throat, and threw it aside, not looking up.....
Vato-- Ey chula, u almost hit me... *laughin*
Elena-- *lookin down still* Muh fault...
Vato-- Wassup with yooh?
Elena-- Im drunk. Leave me alone.
Vato--*laughing* I knoe that. Why are you here? Some crazy vato could come out n take advantage of yooh? And not only that, are you cold?
Elena-- *shakin her head* I dont feel anything anymore..
Vato-- Look at me...
Elena-- Why? *still lookin down*
Vato-- I wanna see your tears.
Elena-- *liftin a eyebrown like wtf pendejo* but still she wuz lookin down* Your fuckin stupid.
Vato-- *laughin* I thought it would make you laugh, but since your mz. serious, I guess i gotta stay out her all night n try to make you happy..
Elena-- *smirked* Pssh.. nothing will make me happy
Vato-- por que?
Elena-- Because I-- (stoppin herself) Why tha fuck are you talkin to me?
Vato-- Cuz Im drunk just like you, aint I aint got nothin else better to do...
Elena-- *lookin at him finally, and wuz about to say something but stopped..wooah... he wuz gorgous, hot.. and here she wuz with running mascara down her face cuz of her tears*
Vato-- Que tienes tu?
Elena-- You wouldnt understand..
Vato-- Try me.
Elena-- *raising her eyebrow again*
Vato-- What your vato broke up with yooh?
Elena-- I dont have a vato.
Vato-- Okay.... some ruca told u somethin fucked up?
Elena--*laughin* I wouldnt cry over some bitch talkin shit to me, i would fuck her ass up
Vato--*laughin* Callmante, i wuz just asking, but hey, at least I get to hear you laugh
Elena--*surprised* (she hasnt laughed n what seems like forever) I guess
Vato-- Wha wuz your name again?
Elena-- I never told you it.
Vato-- *laughin* iight then thas cool..
Elena-- *smilin* Naw.. its Elena
Vato-- Ahh.. Elena.. thats a pretty name... mines is Carlos *extending his hand*
Elena-- *shakes his hand*
Carlos-- NIce to meet chu.
Elena-- *rollin her eyes* I bet.
Carlos-- You got a attitude problem.
Elena-- Yep. *standin up, almost falling*
Carlos--*standin up also, and helpin her balance herself* Ey, you want me to take you home?
Elena-- *givin him a dirty ass look* Why do you care where i go?
Carlos-- *shrugged* Idk, fa some reason I Juss do..
Elena-- *Tried smiling, but instead broke down into tears*
Carlos takes off his hoodie, and puts it on her, and he holds her while she cries..
Elena--*backs up a few minutes later* I dont even knoe you, why tha fuck am even leaning on you for help?
Carlos-- Yay.. just let it out...
Elena-- *continue to crying* He walks her slowly to his pickup, and sets her in there, and he goes to the drivers seat...
He gets in and Elena gets closer to him, she is basically bawling now..
Elena-- why did they have to leave *Crying* its all muh fault...
Sob after sob where escaping her, and she couldnt manage to stop.... and Carlos wuz basically soothing her.. telling her to actually let it out already...
Elena-- Take me to your house...
Carlos-- Dont think Im disrespectin you.. but....Im not gonna fuck you, u knoe that right?
Elena-- *laughin threw tears* I knoe.. I just want someone to be there for me when i wake up...
Mija, I [img]/images/graemlins/happyvalentine.gif[/img] your other stories, but this on is REALLY good. You need to post more. And your other ones too. [img]/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]
WOW THNXS FOR ALL THA COMMENTS GUYS.. HOPE U LIKE THIS PART.. LEAVE THA LUV...
Carlos drives them back to his apartment... He lived not n a rich ass neighborhood but he wouldnt have to worry bout some trifflin ass niggas goin to his apartment startin shit... He gets there, and him and Elena go to tha door... He looks at her one more time...
Carlos-- *thinkin* Damn this gurl is so beautiful...
Carlos-- Are you sure you want to be here?
Elena-- *nodding* Please..
Carlos--*nodding his head, and puttin his key in tha door*
They walk in, and he turns tha light on, she looks around... well ask she can tell from this.. he definetly had money.. his house wuz nice.. and it wuz kept clean.. she looked at him with a lifted eyebrow...
Carlos-- My abuileta comes over every now and then and cleans...*some what embarressed*
Elena-- *smiling* Its all good...
Carlos-- Here let me get something before you get sick... He goes into tha other room, and she just stands there not wanting to sit down, cuz he had leather couchs.. (lol)
Carlos comes back with some aleve, some water, and smiled at her with a sexy smirk..
Elena-- Oooh shit.. I thinka ima be sick *runs* FUCK WHERE IS UR RESTROOM
Carlos--(pointin to a door)
Elena-- *runs there, and fuckin throws up*
Carlos *kneelin beside her, holdin her hair* YOU IIGHT?
Elena-- Can you get me a towel?
Carlos--- *hands her a towel*
She cleans up, and feelz a whole lot better, but knoes thats not all, so she remains sitting on tha floor... the bathroom is big, so Carlos sits at tha other end just lookin at her...
Elena-- You must think Im a pendeja huh?
Carlos-- Why would i think that?
Elena-- I mean.. think about it.. I hardly know you.. bet yet I came to your house..
Carlos-- *nodding his head* True, but then again, I wuz there for you when u needed someone..
Elene--*looks down* So whats your story..?
Carlos-- Muh story?
Elena-- Yeah.. why where you at tha party, if you roll like this?
Carlos-- Roll like what?
Elena-- with money and shit.
Carlos-- who said I had money?
Elena-- *rolls her eyes* look at chur crib.. that proves you have money, man muh house is fuckin ghetto compared to yours.
Carlos-- Yeah well I didnt ask for this shit *soundin pissed off*
Elena-- *looks down* I didnt mean to disrespect yooh
Carlos-- So wassup with you?
Elena-- *still lookin down* do what?
Carlos-- Why are u tha way you are?
Elena-- How am I?
Carlos-- Bitchy... pissed off... and lonely...
Elena-- Im not lonely *lookin up*
Carlos-- Yeah you are
Elena-- HOw am I lonely? I have muh brother and a best friend n... n... im not lonely iight?
Carlos-- *holdin up his hands* iight iight cool whatever. see it threw your eyes...
Elena-- *remains quiet*
Carlos-- So if u arent lonely, then why where u crying outside by yourself?
Elena-- I wanted to be alone.
Carlos-- if you wanted to be alone.. why did you continue to talk to me?
Elena-- *shrug* i didnt wanna be rude
Carlos-- *laughin* Thats a surprise.. i mean u have been real sweet to me since we meet *sarcastic*
Elena-- *smiling* Its muh drunk side i guess..
Carlos-- I doubt it.. when your drunk, it shows ur true colors..
Elena-- *shrugs* I guess..
CArlos-- So why where you crying??
Elena-- Alot of shit...
Carlos-- Wanna talk bout it?
Elena-- I dont even knoe you..
Carlos-- *laughs*But yet you came home with me..
Elena-- *laughin* true...
Carlos-- So...
Elena-- You wouldnt understand...
Carlos-- How can i not understsand if u wont let me know...?
Elena-- You really wanna knoe?
Carlos-- Yeah..
Elena-- Iight well...... Its a long story..
Carlos-- I got all night chula....
Elena--- My dad use to call me that... *lookin down*
Carlos-- Yeah?
Elena-- Yeah... me and him where realy close.. I didnt have to worry if he wuz gonna be pissed off at me for doin somethin wrong... I.. I...I dont knoe how to explain it.... when i lost him.. I felt numb....*lookin at her hands*
Carlos-- *starrin at her, wantin to hold her, to make her feel better, but remained where he wuz at, not wanting to disturb her*
Elena-- I wuz out partying, but i wuznt even drunk or high, i wuz good back then, i wuz bein tha designated driver or whateva tha fuck u call em, so muh homegurl wouldnt be drunk n run into somebody.... n kill em.... anyways... so, that night, i wuznt at home when i should have been.... and they where going out to some baile i guess..... and on tha way home.... they got in a car wreck... *tears streamin down her face*....*she shook her head to get tha picture out of her mind that she always made* They where killed instantly by a drunk driver...... while i wuz out fuckin drivin someone that wuz drunk....*she laughs* some bulshit karma huh?
Carlos-- Mija im sorry..
Elena-- *shakes her head* I didnt tell you for sympathy.. I had too much of that... I just... I dont know..
Carlos--*noddin his head* I understand completley...
Elena-- *lookin up him straight in his eyes even tho he wuz across the room*
damn ma this is a bad ass story keep the lines coming im hooked fo real haha and that vato seems hella sweet damn!! [img]/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]
...>> BEAUTIFULLY SUICIDAL <<...(( FiNiSHED!!))
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