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they walked down the driveway,passing by different chevys,buicks and cadillacs,classic and new.till they arrived at a dark blue 1968 Buick LeSabre with a white hardtop. they got inside and it had darkblue leather seats.goofy was driving,Dominic was on the passenger side and Bandit was in the backseat in the middle. they took off.Goofy turned on his radio and there was rap music on,he then changed the channel and there was alternative rock he then just took out an oldies CD and put it on. "18 with a bullet" started playing.
Goofy: so wassup ese, you really gonna go thru with it?
Dominic: well yea, i am....but wait ive never stolen a car before how do i do that?
Bandit: dont trip holmes i got you.
he reached down on the car floor and pulled up a coat hanger,he started untwisting the top and then made it straight.they drove down a few blocks and pulled into a parking lot.they parked in a spot next to a oldschool black mustang.Dominic and Bandit got out.
Bandit: check it out holmes
he put the hanger in thru the window and ran it thru like if for searching for something.
Bandit: i cant find the pin
the door clicked unlocked
Bandit: got it
the door opened and he pulled out the hanger from the window and thru it inot the backseat and then he pulled out a pocket knife and got inside the car.he stuck it into the top backpart of the steering wheel and broke off the plastic cover.it revealed a little lever and spring.he took off the spring to unlock the steering wheel and then he pushed in the lil lever and pulled it back out and the car started.he then got out and started going around to the passenger side.
Bandit: gett in ese,you driving.
Dominic got into the driver seat.goofy took off in his car and Dominic followed.
Bandit: ok ese make a right turn up ahead
Dominic:but goofy went straight
Bandit:i know,we gonna meet up with him later at the party
Dominic: ok
Dominic followed Bandits directions thru the streets to get to the 16s neighborhood.
Bandit: ok ese, slow down and turn off the lights
dominic did what he was told,he pulled the gun out from the back of his jeans and put it on his lap.
Bandit: pull up right here
dominic pulled over infront of a driveway and they waited in silence,at 1st the streets seemed empty but after a few minutes 4 men were walking out of some apartment buildings.
bandit: thats them,go get them ese
Dominic then turned on the lights and slowly pulled out of the driveway and drove down the street and then stopped infront of the men who just stared at the car not recognizing,Dominic then rolled down the window and said.
Dominic:excusse me can you tell me where the closest liquor store is from here
1 of the guys started walking towards the car.
16th streeter: Simon ese,just go down the street right here and make lef...
before he could finish his sentence, dominic had already put 2 bullets in his chest.the guy fell backward on the middle of the street.Dominic then started shooting at the other guys that were still on the sidewalk, Bandit then stuck half his body out the passenger side window and started shooting his own gun too.all the 16th street gangsters did was try to run away.Dominic emptied his clip of 8 bullets and then took off.while Bandit was still out the window yelling
Bandit: WICKED MINDS GANG!! FUCK ENEMIGAS!!
1 of the guys got away safe,2 were injured, but for sure there was 1 dead.the mission was complete. Bandit got back inside the car and looked back and then turned back around.
Bandit: haha fucken chavalas...now take us back to the party ese,i need a beer
Dominic drove back to the party and parked infront.Goofys car was already there.they got out and walked back up the driveway.when they reached the backyard the party was still going on. Goofy was standing close by making out with the girl thaat was on his lap earlier.more people had arrived now so it was more packed.there was a lot more girls now.there was 1 in particular that caught Dominics attention as they were walking by.she was chillin with some other girls by the garage with a corona in her hand.she was 5'6 with long black straight hair,she was curvy and had a flawless light skinned face with some slightly slanted big blue eyes.they called her "la gata".as Dominic and Bandit passed by Dominic and Gata made eye contact.she then looked away and drank from her beer.Dominic and Bandit met up with Menace.
Menace:how did it go
Bandit:good ese, this vato is down for his shit
Menace: ok, good thats what i hoped
dominic: so then what,am i in now?
Menace: what? nah holmes,that was just to see if you were down for your shit
Dominic: then what do i gotta do now
Menace: youll see
he stood up from where he was sitting and told 1 of the cholos that was standing by to turn off the music.there was a sound of disaproval from the crowd. but there was silence when Menace started speaking.
Menace: tonight we got 2 new young vatos that wanna join our familia.now all of you have gone thru this same thing so you all know what its about and how its done.so now clear the floor
everybody that was in the middle of the backyard dancing moved to the sides
Menace:now Dreamer step up ese its your time.
A young boy that looked around 16 stepped forward with a shot glass in his hand.he was 5'7 skinny with a bald head and a babyface.he had a nervous look when he stepped up..
Menace: you ready homito?
Dreamer: simon, im ready
Menace: orale, Shyboy,Negro y Downer, you know what to do.
3 other young men stepped out of the crowd.They all took off their shirts.Dreamers skin was clean with no tatoos or anything. But the other 3 wore tatoos and battle scars on their body.the 1 called Downer had a scar going down his stomach from his bellybutton that he had received from gunshot wounds to the abdomen...the 3 boys circled dreamer surrounding him completly,dreamer stood in the middle looked scared waiting to be attacked.then Negro came at him from the side and punched him right in the face,after that 1st punch was thrown Shyboy and Downer joined in the beating,Dreamer tried to resist and threw a few punches but couldnt cause any damage.he did the onlything he could do and put his head down and covered himself the best way he could to endure the beating.the beatdown went on for about 13 seconds when menace yelled
menace: stop!
the 3 boys stopped and dreamer stood up battered and bruised his face swollen and driping blood from his lip.he wiped his face.
Dreamer: (breathing hard) am i in now?
menace smiled at him
Menace: wtf? you didnt even have the balls to fight back,all you did was get your ass kicked and you think we gonna let you in?we dont want pussys homito,if you wanna join with us you gotta show the balls to fightback and take a hit like a man,not just throw yourself on the floor and cover yourself.get the fuck out of here if you cant hang with the big boys.
they threw his shirt at him and then the 3 boys that had just beat him up dragged him out of the party.
Menace: now
he turned to Dominic who was standing right next to him
Menace: your up ese....
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lust for them things that turn women to wives,
live for that shit that determines your street size,
roam with them twins that water your mothers eyes,
thats diamonds, cocaine, and burners on my thighs!
thanks for reading my story and the comments.i gotta go handle something in a lil while so ima post up as much as i can before i leave,peace.
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lust for them things that turn women to wives,
live for that shit that determines your street size,
roam with them twins that water your mothers eyes,
thats diamonds, cocaine, and burners on my thighs!
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