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Old 01-20-2009, 02:05 AM   #1
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Through foolishness and emotions, i answer your call.
always returning to this wicked embrace.
I know what you've done; recognize your flaws.
countless warnings that should make me stray.
but i choose to stay.
blind to your sins;
a sweet corruption i desire..
addicted to the taste of imperfection..
i thirst for the scars of betrayal..
you've twisted my fantasies
my weakness always an advantage..
deaf ears to the whispered rumors following me to your arms.
so gullible and naive walking into my dark fairytale..
change was never a possibility.
I followed my passion for the first time into an almost predictable sorrow.
but it didnt matter.
you found the coldness in my heart, confessed your obsession with my soul..
only for a moment.. you belonged to me;
I'm forever burned.
Though you will never fully be mine..
I am eternally yours.


Wow this was fantastic, EVery line was perfect!!
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Old 01-20-2009, 02:07 AM   #2
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Ok, here's another one








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Old 01-22-2009, 01:21 AM   #3
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You questioned my peace, doubting my remains
you begged and you prayed for just one more thought..
The answer to your call became in a nightmare..
for things will never be as they were; its not the same.
A favor is never granted without a price.
You summoned me, stripping me from a comfort i'd never known..
now im lost.
I awoke from a fantasy to be with you..
and you cowar.
I am not how you expected...
ive become empty;your price was my spirit.
In selfishness you refused the solitude..
Refused to accept what IS...
you pleaded for what was.
You yearned for my presence..only reaching to your loneliness.
You traded a Moment of nostalgia for a lifetime obscurity.


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Old 01-24-2009, 05:00 AM   #4
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are u scared to see wat iv become??
because of u im like a ghost,lifeless, alone and with no one
dnt fear me this is wat u created
u left me our memoreys u have faded
thru the nights my eyes wheep
and thru the days i rome the streets like a zombie
i dnt smile i no longer feel
im just anther soul left behind

LOL ITS REALLY SHORT THATS SUMTHING THAT POPD IN MY HEAS WEN I SAW THIS PICTURE THOUGHT ID WRITE IT DWN
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Old 01-24-2009, 12:28 PM   #5
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Originally Posted by dazed View Post
You questioned my peace, doubting my remains
you begged and you prayed for just one more thought..
The answer to your call became in a nightmare..
for things will never be as they were; its not the same.
A favor is never granted without a price.
You summoned me, stripping me from a comfort i'd never known..
now im lost.
I awoke from a fantasy to be with you..
and you cowar.
I am not how you expected...
ive become empty;your price was my spirit.
In selfishness you refused the solitude..
Refused to accept what IS...
you pleaded for what was.
You yearned for my presence..only reaching to your loneliness.
You traded a Moment of nostalgia for a lifetime obscurity.


Wow YOUr an outstanding poet, this was great!!
these lines were my favirote

" A favor is never granted without a price.
You summoned me, stripping me from a comfort i'd never known..
now im lost.
I awoke from a fantasy to be with you..
and you cowar.
I am not how you expected..."



Originally Posted by *ch1cana602* View Post
are u scared to see wat iv become??
because of u im like a ghost,lifeless, alone and with no one
dnt fear me this is wat u created
u left me our memoreys u have faded
thru the nights my eyes wheep
and thru the days i rome the streets like a zombie
i dnt smile i no longer feel
im just anther soul left behind

LOL ITS REALLY SHORT THATS SUMTHING THAT POPD IN MY HEAS WEN I SAW THIS PICTURE THOUGHT ID WRITE IT DWN
That's ok that's what the pictures are there for, to see what you can come up with... Nice piece thought!!!
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Old 01-24-2009, 01:12 PM   #6
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Wow YOUr an outstanding poet, this was great!!
these lines were my favirote

" A favor is never granted without a price.
You summoned me, stripping me from a comfort i'd never known..
now im lost.
I awoke from a fantasy to be with you..
and you cowar.
I am not how you expected..."


thank you...
i was just gonna wait for the next pic but i got inspired....heh.
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Old 01-26-2009, 07:56 PM   #7
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A canvas in my closet, stowed away under skeletons and corpses,
Memories shattered in coffins as I'm haunted by it's importance,
When I dream she elegantly waltzes into my presence,
Beauty in the flesh gracing the visions of the blind peasents,
She crafts symphonies with the stepping of her figure,
Unworthy reality affected by her appearance by the melting of mirrors,
Life and purity flourish wherever she implants her remnants,
Ressurrect buried memories with a glance of her elegance,
The only brown eyed angel that's lifted me from reality,
Into internal glory and bliss unparalleled and far from tragedy,

Her voice made the wind itself halt and time and space listen,
A rhythm breaching man's inner fortitude and twisting taste and vision,
Entwined into the volumes she delivers as I enter another realm,
Swooped away by her tone in which I have never fell,
At least in my soul,
Now all I could do is dream day and night of a transparent love,
Look into my closest and admire the canvas like the sun,
Giving universal meaning and helping everything grow,
Now just a distant star, it was the greatest one I've ever known.
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CP you are slacking, way to much. You've really went off the deep end.
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