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Old 07-02-2009, 08:09 AM   #61
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figured, I would toss one into the mix.

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Old 07-05-2009, 05:53 PM   #62
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heartless


heart so cold ; dnt let anything past its doors;
pain hasnt let him open up dha gates of love ... lookin for a way in..but you dnt let meh in..crying nonstop begging for love... outside your heavy metal heart ....



im not so good at poems at all but ahh this pix to me is like wow looking at someones heart who doesnt want to open up fo love!!

im not so goot a t pOems lOl
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Old 07-06-2009, 07:07 PM   #63
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Not bad actually, could use a little editing but the message is clear. Good drop.
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im locked inside, no way out
I kick I scream I even shout

I try to pass through the concreat wall
I cant breath, I run I trip I fall

No way to turn curled up in a hole
im mad im angry my heart, he stole

Im locked away forever and a day
Im crying im dying kill me in every way

weakend by love & every ache
my heart my soul my bones all break

lying dead upon these floors
One day my soul will break these doors

all iv got! Lol
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Old 07-11-2009, 12:02 AM   #65
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Originally Posted by ToroAk47 View Post
CP you are slacking, way to much. You've really went off the deep end.
So I've noticed. It's not 'slacking' Mike, it's dealing with my environment.

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Hey Caliginous Remember the Hawaiian Yoshi? I'm Back!
Of course I remember you. How've you been?


A lot of great pieces on here...I'm glad you guys kept it going, posting up your own pictures and so forth. I'll try to comment on some here and there..it might take me another 6 months or so though..A lot going on. Keep writing....


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Old 07-11-2009, 06:04 AM   #66
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Originally Posted by livefastdiepretty.31 View Post
im locked inside, no way out
I kick I scream I even shout

I try to pass through the concreat wall
I cant breath, I run I trip I fall

No way to turn curled up in a hole
im mad im angry my heart, he stole

Im locked away forever and a day
Im crying im dying kill me in every way

weakend by love & every ache
my heart my soul my bones all break

lying dead upon these floors
One day my soul will break these doors

all iv got! Lol

"wickedly heart breaking."

That was the first thought that came to mind.
Great drop.
Love how you delivered.
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Old 07-11-2009, 10:16 AM   #67
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welcome...

you have gotten this far
that means theres much more that you have seen
you have penetrated deep down passed my soul

you have reached what its called a broken heart
that has shut its brick doors
dare to knock
dare to dream
only if you could open these doors
it will help me scream

scream as loud as i could
for you to releave me from my hell
these doors welcome you...

even though you will never pass to see the evil side of these door...
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Old 07-24-2009, 02:11 AM   #68
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dnt kno who drew it or took the pic but i like it soooo write what u think........
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Old 07-24-2009, 02:14 AM   #69
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i feel so a lone like there is nobody there for me
but the people from the past.the one that hurt me
and didnt let me love you.i feel weak with out you, '
i need you close not just memories of the past.
i know i did wrong but now my heart is bleeding
i feel like a ghost with out you..please baby come back
im dying with out you...

i try lol
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Old 07-24-2009, 03:40 AM   #70
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Originally Posted by diciplediabla View Post
welcome...

you have gotten this far
that means theres much more that you have seen
you have penetrated deep down passed my soul

you have reached what its called a broken heart
that has shut its brick doors
dare to knock
dare to dream
only if you could open these doors
it will help me scream

scream as loud as i could
for you to releave me from my hell
these doors welcome you...

even though you will never pass to see the evil side of these door...

love how you made it out into a somewhat threatening gateway of heartbreak, or should I say, a warning into your lust.

at least thats the image that came to mind. All in all, I enjoyed it.
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