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Old 07-24-2009, 04:41 AM   #71
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Originally Posted by mexi_chika View Post
i feel so a lone like there is nobody there for me
but the people from the past.the one that hurt me
and didnt let me love you.i feel weak with out you, '
i need you close not just memories of the past.
i know i did wrong but now my heart is bleeding
i feel like a ghost with out you..please baby come back
im dying with out you...

i try lol

nothing wrong with trying,
it's the message that you get once you view the image.
Keep at it....
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Old 08-06-2009, 06:42 PM   #72
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uhh I really donno about this one but ima try...

not of this world

the wings of an angel the body of a killer
the blood of a human & pain with no healer
my tears are red not clear
my ending of life no not anywere near
I live with no eyes I live with no heart
I cant die rewind or press restart
the blood drips from the ends of my lashes
droplets to my thigh it burns and opens gashes
Ill stay like this till the end of my days
Not of this world different in so many ways

ehh the picture called to me but only like that!
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Old 08-07-2009, 01:51 AM   #73
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^^^ Good reaction to the picture. Well done.
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Old 08-18-2009, 08:17 AM   #74
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Juliet is Dead
Romeo is crying
the audience is sighing
split between two moons
fantasy and reality are colliding
into an unwelcomed world
creating a dark tainted cloudy peal
disastrous emotions pouring from the sky
...."Why?"....
sitting upon destroyed structers
dripping with the blood of the innocent
what is one to do when his love has died?
Nothing
say a prayer and grow wings
whisper to this fatal world goodbye
and fly...



haven't done this in a while, thought i give it a shot though i liked the picture..
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Old 08-26-2009, 05:58 AM   #75
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^^^ Good drop.
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Old 08-27-2009, 11:38 AM   #76
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Originally Posted by no worries View Post
http://www.weirdspot.com/pics/vampiregirl.jpg



if anyone sees this going for more than a week, feel free to post something up
I decided i was neither too weak or too cold to justify my need..
My mistake for a karma provoking thirst lusted with your temptation..
It seems we both gave in.
It seems it cost something to both of us.
I cant begin to explain the bittersweet embrace of evil and fear.
You must believe my actions were benevolent.
And the attention, well it caressed my ego.

I thought of you, or the you i dreamed of.

I could barely live with what i felt was necessary.
If this was indeed living...
I performed as if in a movie..sad to say you were right..
this isnt a movie.
Im deprived of a happy ending...and now so are you.


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Originally Posted by mexi_chika View Post
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dnt kno who drew it or took the pic but i like it soooo write what u think........

When it comes to discovering and attending my damage
...im oblivious.
Torn.
Ive continued in the hopes of accidently straying into reality.
My heart jumps at the optimism in my step..
my groove tantalizes, flirts with confidence into the challenge
No more motions...
Its not this hard.
In endless terrorizing weeps surrounding me...
I forcefully continue on my endeavor for life.
For the sake of stopping to appreciate my courage..
I relapse.
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This conception of divinity shattered into shrapnel,
Dividing and conquering the gullible and grasps of hope,
My deception disguised and assassinating with a smile,
Befriending the victims who've asked to become entrenched,
I suffer at heart but through the mind I'm at bliss,
Screams echo through my hallways of memories,
Attempting to escape this cerebrum of madness,
These walls lay unscathed and consume the blind pain,
I've been welcomed into the domain and to the dine with the host,
Introduced to the heart and soul, shaking hands with the pride,
I've been allowed to roam these halls unattended and freely,
Make memorable moments with the family and friends,
As the night drags away the merriment and silences the home,
I grow eager to deceive these faces smiling at me,
My insides twitch as this image of my divinity still portrays,
One by one they'll all lay at eternal rest amongst the pain....
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