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Old 09-02-2009, 06:23 AM   #1
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Default Escuchame Diosito

OK BP....i know i said just earlier i wasnt gonna post up n e thing for a while...but i got home from work and i got inspired once again.....this is my first poem in spanish so i hope you like it.....Dedicated to My Payasito...my son.....

Escuchame diosito, estas palabras vienen del corazon
Cuando yo estaba muerto, tu me diste la razon.
Me diste vida en esos ojitos
Me diste mas que amor con sus carinitos.
Con una risa que calma este fuego
Me hago pedacitos solo con un dedo.
No puedo creer que es todo para mi.
Y que halgo tan precioso en esta vida conoci.
Soy mucho mas feliz teniendolo en mis brazos
Entro en mi Corazon con sus primeros pasos.
Me da besitos y me convierto en miel
En ese momento el mundo no es tan cruel.
Encuentro la luz en sus modos inocentes
Los momentos que pasamos juntos nunca son suficientes.
Por favor no me quites esto que me hace sentir tan bien
Escuchame Diosito……………AMEN.

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Old 09-04-2009, 01:05 PM   #2
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Default Re: Escuchame Diosito

nice poem =]
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Old 09-23-2009, 07:32 PM   #3
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Me gusto mucho este poema...
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