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Old 10-03-2009, 06:31 PM   #1
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This is a poem I wrote about a friend who recently commited suicide ands its based on how she felt. Miss you girl.

You never realize what will happen till it happens
You dont change unless it involves your chances
You dont love till you know its love
You dont move on till your souls up above

You never know why people do it
You dont know how it feels to lose it
Sometimes your living in a frown
Sometimes your just falling down

You hate the way your life turns out
You cant take the pain you just shout
You hope for more but it always come up less
You look in the mirror and your a complete mess

You try to take the high road with your nose held high
But the road you take has a sign that says lies
You dont know which way your going & you cant turn around
You life isnt going right you just falling down

Just how I felt when she passed.
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Old 10-03-2009, 07:28 PM   #2
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sorry to hear about your friend...did anyone see it coming?
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Old 10-03-2009, 09:13 PM   #3
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No its ok.
Um, she would call me and tell me about her problems and Id wish I was there, but...yea, It was pretty hard. She had 2 kids to.
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Old 10-10-2009, 07:38 PM   #4
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sorry about your friend.
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I'm sorry about your friend..
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