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Old 09-24-2009, 08:09 AM   #1
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He sat in his 97 baby blu Marquis.It was 15 minutes past noon.The sun
was out but there was a cold chill.It was mid November,and everything in
his life as he knew it had changed.
He hit the blunt 3 times and held it in till he couldnt no more.Tears were
in his eyes as he thought about everything he had lost.And for what?

*Four years before that*

"I dont want to go to that school!!!" she yelled.

Amanda was about to go into highschool.Her mom wanted to put her
in a "prvate" school.

"The uniform is ugly mom.." Amanda yelled.

"You'll be fine..I dont want you going to a big highschool with all them hoodlims...you're gunna get a better education."

Amanda rolled her eyes.She dint wanna go to private school.She wanted to
go to Samuel.Where all her family went.But no.
Little did Amandas mom know..this school was the turning point in Amandas
life.Her life would never be the same.SO much pain laid ahead.So much
heartache.No one seen it comin.

"Amaaaaaanda..GET UP!!!" her mom yelled frm the kitchen.

Amanda opened on eye and looked at the clock.

"Uhh I still have 10 minutes..!!" she yelled back as she rolled over.

The hall light fliped on.

"Get up!!" her mom yelled.

She walked in her room and pulled the covers off her bed.

"Mooom wat the hell!!??" she yelled as she got up and went to the
bathroom.

"Dont cuss at me.." her mom yelled thru the door.."And hurry up..yur
food is gunna get cold.." she said and walked back into the kitchen.

Amanda looked at herself in the mirror.She hated what she seen.
White complexion..big brown eyes..gorgeous gold/blonde hair[that she
hated]..a beauty mark above her upper lip.A few pimples but not to many.
She had a very low self esteem.

She got out the shower and the first thing she did was her hair.Nothing
special.Just blow dryed it and straightened it.
Simple.
She put on her makeup and put her stupid uniform on.

She actually looked good in it.It was green and white..her hair color
went great with it.Her skirt was above her knee and she was wearing
white knee socks with short black boots..She liked the way she looked
in the uniform but wold never admit that.

She got done eating her breakfest.Her big brother had already left with
his friend to go to school.To Samuel.Uhh.Not fair.
She was stuck riding with her mom.She didnt want to.

First day of school came and went.The classes were okay.
Five in one day.Not to bad.
She made a friend.Her name was Nae.
She was super funny and super cool.
They became best friends instantly.

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Old 09-24-2009, 08:39 AM   #2
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I like it so far.
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Old 09-24-2009, 08:41 AM   #3
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Old 09-24-2009, 05:27 PM   #4
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That first day of school was long over.Amanda was 19 now.Her
life wasnt at all what she thought it wuld be.She was still so young
but yet she felt so old.So beat up.Like her time shoulda been up along
time ago.
Amanda takes a hit off her cigarette and looks at a picture in her wallet
thats inside her purse.Its a very cute guy.Like...very sexy.A tear rolled
down Amandas cheek.
She closed her eyes & in her mind..she went back to the age of 15.

She was still in private school.She didnt think she was ever guna get to
leave from there.That was actually about to change.

It was 8:09 and Amanda was late.She was rushing thru the halls trying
to make it to class on time.She went to her locker to put away all the
shit she didnt need.She wasnt the only one late.There was a whiteboy
who waslate too.His locker was right next to Amandas.His name was John.

"You're new here arn't you..?" he asked..

"Ive been here since school started.." she said with a sweet attitude.

John fell for her instantly.He was the geeky type.Wore glasses..18 and still
a virgin.But he was funny as hell though.He made Amanda crack up.He was
great.They became best friends.Everyone swore they were going out..but
they wasnt.Just friends.Best friends.All becus she was late to school.
That was actually the turning point in all of this.When Amanda met John.

"You wanna go to the park with me this afternoon and walk with me and
my friend..?" Amanda asked John

"Sure.." he said

"Okay..I'll call you so you can come pick us up.." she said and got out of
his car and went inside her house.

She picked up the phone and called Nae to come over.
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Old 09-24-2009, 06:52 PM   #5
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Old 09-24-2009, 11:20 PM   #7
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it sounds qood so far
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Old 09-25-2009, 10:07 PM   #8
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Old 09-25-2009, 10:32 PM   #9
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its good so far keep writin
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Old 09-25-2009, 10:41 PM   #10
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