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Old 11-21-2009, 01:34 AM   #1
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I used to sleep and dream for your embrace
I longed for a kiss, and to see your face
When I opened my eyes, like always, you werent there
Just another memory of the love that was once shared
You hurt me bad, words cant nearly explain
Its like our love was always in different lanes
Promises were made, but ended up broken
Along with every touch, kiss, and look that was unspoken
Maybe soon the time will heal all my pain
I just have to weather out the rain
I still think about everything, that was way back than
But I push it away cuz im tired of "What could have been"'s
The pieces of my heart are finding there way without direction
But I know they will never want to deal with anymore affection
For awhile I always thought I was in the wrong
but now I know the truth, because im much more strong
Thanks to you, in a way, cause you opened my eyes
Showed me reality and that it wasnt worth the crys
One day you'll realize what you once had and lost
I cant wait to see you cry, but hey, thats the cost!
Dont come crawling back to me when karma hits
ill be moved on and to marture for all that shit
They say what is ment to be will come back
But I dont belive it, it's an opinion not a fact
Iv already forgotten everything in the passed
I did try to remember but cant, Fuck it all anyway, it didnt want to last
& I know for a fact that it wasnt ment to be
Because if it was, when you came back, your face would have reminded me.
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Old 11-21-2009, 04:03 AM   #2
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i LiKE THiS ALOT i FELT YOUR WORDS STAY UP MiJA
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Old 11-21-2009, 04:07 AM   #3
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good read
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I know someday you'll have a beautiful life
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Why, why can't it be, why can't it be mine
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Old 11-21-2009, 01:38 PM   #4
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good read. i find it easier to relate to pain cuz we've all felt it than it is to relate to tru love cuz some of us have yet to feel it. good job.
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Old 11-22-2009, 06:49 AM   #5
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Dam Well Written So Much Affection and Anger In It
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Old 11-22-2009, 06:53 AM   #6
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emotional poem.. great work mija..
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Old 11-23-2009, 05:51 AM   #7
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dam mija i liked this a lot,very deep.you got skills ma' stay up...
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