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07-16-2007, 03:14 PM
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Re: GIRLS IT AIN'T EASY (FINISHED SHORT STORY)
IT'S A SAD STORY BUT IT'S GOOD!! YOU HAVE SKILLS, ARE YOU EVER GONNA WRITE A STORY WITH A HAPPY ENDING???
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07-17-2007, 12:26 AM
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Re: GIRLS IT AIN'T EASY (FINISHED SHORT STORY)
OMG~! Ya shouldda been w/ Marcos!! He sounded sooo sweet! well i had a similar story pero i neva in muh life let no man ever hit me, shit hell naw if my daddy neva hit me, y the fuck am i gonna let sum 1 else do it? lol well these 2 guys i gangster n one normal osea realista...well yo soy kinda fresita totalmente lo opposit of gangster n well alamejor me animo a contar mi historia one of these dayzz...
Nice story though~
Much Love, Iris~
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07-17-2007, 03:27 AM
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Re: GIRLS IT AIN'T EASY (FINISHED SHORT STORY)
Hey thanks for the love, I repped you all, let me know if I missed anybody.
Arato.
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08-02-2007, 02:22 AM
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Re: GIRLS IT AIN'T EASY (FINISHED SHORT STORY)
DAMN UR A GOOD WRiTER...
KEEP ON WRiTiN DEM STORiES
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08-02-2007, 04:30 PM
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Re: GIRLS IT AIN'T EASY (FINISHED SHORT STORY)
Thank you for the compliment. I appreciate it.
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09-18-2007, 03:40 PM
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Re: GIRLS IT AIN'T EASY (FINISHED SHORT STORY)
DAMN VAT0 THAT STORY iS HELLA FiRME, GOOD ENDiNG TAMBiEN,
Y0U G0T MAD SKiLL 'z. PUES KEEP UP THE G00D W0RK.
TE CUiDAZ
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09-19-2007, 03:49 AM
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Re: GIRLS IT AIN'T EASY (FINISHED SHORT STORY)
OMG I JUS FINISH READIN N FUCKIN LOVE THIS STORY, PERO DAMN DATS SAD THO HE DIED. PUES I ALWAYS LOVE UR STORIES,
MUCH LUV Y RESPECT
MiZZ CHULA
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09-19-2007, 05:44 AM
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Re: GIRLS IT AIN'T EASY (FINISHED SHORT STORY)
damn! im speechless! this was a tight ass story!! damn!!! i hella love ur stories homeboy!! u got mad talent
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09-19-2007, 01:50 PM
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Re: GIRLS IT AIN'T EASY (FINISHED SHORT STORY)
damn wat can I say I love all ur stories
!!! Keep us entertained and write some more plzzz
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03-09-2008, 11:51 AM
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Re: GIRLS IT AIN'T EASY (FINISHED SHORT STORY)
very, very good story! the other people who posted were right about it being realistic. now i am going to go read some more of your stories.
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