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Old 08-24-2009, 09:02 AM   #1
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HAZE OF GREY SMOKE
august 13th 2009

Im lost in a haze of grey smoke...
praying to god;; dont let me go...
holding on to forgotten memories...
reminiscing of my past times and being so carefree....
hard to hold back when hate is all you've known...
even harder to love;; when neqlect towards you was shown...
im falling apart;; why cant you see...
that all the hurt and pain caused by you;;
is killing everything inside me...
im dying in the inside...
my heart and mind cant take no more..
im only wanting this anger to leave me
and let me live a life on my own...
ive suffered long enough..
21 years to be exact...
im losing my mind;; yet staying intact...
this greyish haze of smoke...
is helping me look back..
back on the days when fun was just play..
now fun to me;; is puffing on my herbal weed...
holding it in;; then letting it out...
inhaling in her love;; while all my hurt is exhaling out..
the smoke of grey haze;; is my last hope...
ive grown so accustomed to living my life..
while staying high inside her smoke...
the haze is fading.. the world is getting clearer...
im drifting back down to earth..
and all along my death is getting nearer...
im not lost in that haze of grey smoke..
thanking god;; he never let me go..
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Old 08-24-2009, 10:54 PM   #2
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DAMN CARNALA THESE ARE SOME VERY DEEP WORDS......
ALL I CAN SAY IS KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DO...
AND KEEP YA HEAD UP
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Old 08-27-2009, 12:39 AM   #3
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bad ass poem real talk
it flows smoothly wit deep meaning
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Old 08-27-2009, 01:25 AM   #4
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thanks baby jesi....
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Damn, made me realize how lonely I am.
Its a great piece.
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jaja. thanks. we are all lonely in this world. we just hanq out with others to forqet that.
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thx mija.
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jaja. thanks. we are all lonely in this world. we just hanq out with others to forqet that.
That was pretty deep as well.
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You can't be a professional poet on here, how's us little people supposed to get noticed? LOL
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That was pretty deep as well.
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You can't be a professional poet on here, how's us little people supposed to get noticed? LOL
im not a professionel;; yet.. lol...
oh.. you qet noticed... if not for your threads or wateva but most def for ya qood looks
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