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Old 07-16-2009, 08:01 PM   #1
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Default iNlOVE WiT tHE ENEMy *tHE SEQUAl* ツ

yup ladies its the squeal injoy!

Alma choes-14, long blak hair, big brown eyes, light skin complection, little plump lips, perfect, cute little body, Random, funny, a little bad ass girl in discise!

Adam Sandoval-black hair. Fade, big light brown eyes, light skin complection a lil darker then almas, perfect sized lips, quiet keeps to himself.

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Adam could still hear the sirens as they sped down the road. He was only 11 when his mom was shot right infront of his eyes. His dad was arrested for it. The last thing his mom had said to him was...

"Run dont look back run-" and the bullit went right through her chest

Adam was snapped back to the future when he heard a little giggle coming into the principles office. He saw Alma being pulled into the office by another teacher. He thought she was beautiful, but he never paied attention to girls. He turned his attention from her back to his dad. They were waiting for the principle to be free. It was Adams first day. The lady at the front desk with the name "Mrs.Smith" took one look at Alma sitting in her chair.

"Miss choes may I ask what you are doing here today?!" she said putting her hands on her hips
She shrugged and smiled "I was tottaly framed!"
"mhm...do you expect me to belive that?"
she paused "do you?"
"nope not a chance!"
"Dang" Alma said "well mr.shay will!"
"thats cuz you have him wraped around little finger!"

Adam was paying attention to them.

"He knows im a sweet girl and would never do anything to hurt anybody!" she smiled wickedly
"well to bad he dosnt know the real you youd probly be suspended by now, better yet expelled to my luck!!"
The princicple mr.shay came out "Alma...what are you doing here?"

he had a folder of papers in his hands.

"I was framed mr.shay!" she got up and went to his side

And thats when she really looked at Adam. She smiled but he didnt smile back. He just nodded to her. She frowned "How rude" she thought.

"well wait right here ill take you next...ahh mr.sandoval!...I have your forms right here...I understand he is on probation?"
"yes he is his probation officer will be visiting 2 times a week!"
"if I may ask...Alma please sit down!"

Alma was being nosy she wanted to know about this boy. She just sat down and listened.

"Im sorry thats our little trouble maker back there!"
"heard that!"
he took a deep breath "she grinds my gears!"
"heard that!"
"Enough Alma"
She giggled "yes mr.shay!"
"Thank you!...could you please sign here Adam..."
"what is it?" he asked
"its a behavor contract...its stating that if you ignore all these rules you will be under explosion!"
"were do I sign?"
"right here on this line...ok thank you"

Adam nodded

"you have a good day mr sandoval, Adam if you may follow me please!!" he got up and looked at Alma "ok Alma come in my office"

Alma got up, Adam followed them into his office. Mr.Shay shut the door behind them

"Alma you have a seat right here...Adam if you will please sit back there and i will print out your classes as soon as im done with Miss choes...oh Adam sandoval this is Alma choes..." he looked at Alma "now what was the accusation this tim-"

knock knock "Im sorry to bother you jim but its not letting me log onto the schools website...could you help me?"
"yes" he got up "alma please try not to break anything!"
"noooo promises!" she was touching an american flag on his desk
he rolled his eyes "be back in 5 minutes..."

he wlaked out and shut the door behind him. Alma and Adam were alone. Alma turned to him..

"so your new?" she asked
"yup!"
"I heard you were on probation..what did you do?!"
"my buisness!"
"umm ok...sorry!" she turned back around

She continued to play with the little american flag then it broke.

"op!!" she popped her lips

Adam had been watching her. He busted up laughing. She blushed. When she felt her cheeks get warm, she touched them. She hasnt blushed in forever. Adam like the blush on her. She snaped back to reality and grabed the american flag pieces. She kicked it under his desk and he walked in.

"im sorry...were were we?"
"you were about to let me go home early!"
"yea right..." he looked at Adam "I have your classes adam...you have the first 2 classes with Alma...When shes headed back to class youlll attend with her"
"woo hoo!" he said sarcastically

Alma had her feelings hurt by that little remark.

"Alma...continue..."
"well mike flores told ms warner that I through the pencil!"
"did you"
"...It wasnt ment to hit her!"
"but it did!"
"yes..."
"who was it ment for?"
"samantha marks!"
"so you were throwing pencils?"
"...no!"
"you just admitted it!"
she sighed "ok yes!"

Adam chuckled. mr shay had been fixing his feet under the desks when he heard a crack. He paused. Adam and Alma waited for it. Mr shay looked under his desk and found the broke pieces of his american flag. Adam busted up lauging agian and Alma blushed and smiled.

"Im going to let you off the hook...get to class!"

Alma got up and so did Adam. They walked out together. It was quiet as soon as they got out of the office. Alma was to shy to speak.

"so what classes do you have?" she managed
"boring ones!"
"can I see?"
he looked at her she smiled he didnt "nope!"

She felt emberessed. She blushed agian. He just stared at her.

"so your names Adam..."
"yup..."
"im alma" she held her hand out
he looked at it "coo"

She felt even more emberessed. She decided to give up! She walked him to class and that was that. Almas classes sped by all she could think about was Adam. She noticed how mean he was but she still had the yerning inside her to talk to him. Lunch came. She met up with her friend Amelia at the wall were all the gangsters kicked it at. It was known as the IE wall. She put her things down and got inline for lunch. She spotted Adam walking with a guy similar to him, but uglier. She couldnt take her eyes off him. He finnaly looked her way. He saw and smiled the tiniest bit. she returned it and blushed that made him smile bigger.

what you think should I go one?
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Old 07-16-2009, 08:07 PM   #2
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Yay! I'm first. Love it, keep going.
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OMG !
i love it...
i hope its as good as the first one ! :]
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Old 07-16-2009, 08:31 PM   #4
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Lol heres more...
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The rest of the day all Alma could think about was Adam. She wanted to know what he did to put him on probation. Why he was mean. why the hard act. she knew he was a soft little boy inside...or so he thought. She fell asleep wit those thoughts in her head.

The next morning she woke up around 6. She jumped up and started to curl the ends of her hair. She wanted to look good for Adam. Her she barrowed her moms black stapless shirt with little gems on the top. She wore light blue jeans, and black flats. When she was done she made some toast and brushed her teeth. Adam was at home getting ready to leave. He was wearing blue jeans with a black T and his white addidas. He grabed his keys and headed to school. He thought about Alma and how he was mean to her. He felt bad but at the same time he tried not to care...he was unsuccessful. When he got to school the bell hasnt rung yet. Alma met her friend in the back were the student parking lot was. She was talking about Adam. They started to walk and BAM Adam bumped into them...on purpost. He looked at Amelia and started to walk away.

"What the hell!" she called not knowing it was him
"sorry" he said not turning around
"hes cute" amelia said "stop him!"
"I am...Hey asshole!"
Adam turned around "what?"
"oh...Adam..." she blushed and looked away
"well?"
"This is ad-"
"yes amelia this is the new kid!"
she didnt catch on "oh I know that but-"
Alma hit her "this is the new kid Amelia!"
Amelia looked at her mean then cought on "oh hi!" she smiled
Adam nodded "so weres this first class?"
"umm...follow me..."
"I wanna go now!"
"were going!" Alma said tired of the attitude

She grabed her back pack and hugged Amelia. Amelia took off to class. Adam and Alma just walked to class. When they got there Adam held the door for her. He didnt kno why but he was surprised he did. Alma went to the front.

"Mrs Riggs this is Adam sandoval...hes new!"
"hello Adam"
"Sup"
"This isn english we use proper language!"
"hello!" he said annoyed
"Please take your seat....next to alma thats the only seat avalible at the moment!"

He followed Alma to her seat and sat beside her. Alma could hear girls talking about Adam. She was getting annoyed.

one turned to him "What P.E. do you have?" she asked
"I dont got P.E.!"

He only talked to them to make Alma jelouse he knew what the hell he was doing!

"weight traner?" she asked
"yea"
"oh..." said the other "wanna train me!"
"anytime" he said with a smile
"Turn around michelle class is starting!" Alma said in an attitude
she laughed "ok!" she said sarcastically and looked at Anthony "Im michell"
"adam!" he said
"good now turn around!" Alma said
"are you jelouse?" she asked amused
"of yu??haa!"
"whatever...see you later Adam!"

The class went on. Anouncements came on about the girls soccer team. Alma listened and wrote down what she needed to know.

"your doing soccer?" Adam asked
she looked at him "yea love it!"
"Im training the girls soccer team at 6th period tomarro!"
she smiled "maybe ill see you there!"
"maybe" he couldnt help but smile.

next post is probly tomarro or sunday im not sure!
ill have my cuzzin let yu know when
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AWW CUTE HOW IS THIS THE SEQUAL TO IN LOVE WITH THE ENEMY? KEEP IT COMING
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Old 07-16-2009, 10:44 PM   #6
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Ill just post a really long post for you all...here ya go!
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Almas POV
I so coulnt wait till tomarro. I was gonna choose him as my trainer if I got to choose. Mann...I found myself day dreaming of him through out the rest of school.

"Hey..."
I turned to see Adam walking towards me I smiled "hey yourself!"
"what you doing?"

I looked back out to the sky

"just thinking!"
"about?"
"stuff!"
"anyone in particular?"
"maybe" I winked at hime
"can I guess!"
"you can try!"
"hmm...dose his name start with a A?"
"yes..."

I felt his arms go around my waist and his whisper next to my ear "I love you" he said then I got snapped out of it when Amelia nudged me.

"what?" I demanded, mad cuz she took me from my day dream!
"I was just gonna tell you...Adams looing at you!"
"really? were?"
"ove there dont-you never fucking listen to me"

I turned my head befor she got to finish the sentance. She was right...he was staring at me...he looked away when I looked.

Adams POV
Fuck shes so beautful...and a little bad ass too. All I could think about was how she cracked me up yesterday. Crazy ass! oh shit...shes looking over here fuck...He turned his head fast.

"wassup foo?" Jay laughed at him "looking all nervous!...who were you looking at?"
"that girl back there..dont loo-wat the fuck!"
"oh...Alma??"
'yea you know here?"
"yea shes fucking beautifull...shes a lil bad ass thoe..she dont look like it!"
"whats she like?"
"Shes funny...Random thoe, but still make you crack up!"
"I found that out yesterday..."
"she dont got a boyfriend thoe...its not like Joe will let her!"
"whos Joe?"
"like her body guard...hes her bestfriend thoe...hes over there" he nodded at the IE wall.
Adam shrugged "fuck those foos they dont scare me!"
"shes looking at you!"

Adam looked over his sholder and she smiled at him he returned it. Alma turned back around to her food. She just started to play with it thinking...more like day dreaming.

"You like him dont you?" Amelia asked
she shrugged "hes alrite!"
"dont lie to me...tell me!"
Alma smiled "I think!"
"dayum...and hes all rude to you!"
"I know...& I like it!"
Amelia laughed "I can tell!"
"Oh guess what?"
"what?"
"Tomarro for the grls soccer team training hes one of the trainers!"
"oh he dosnt have P.E.?"
"no...I cant fucking wait to see them biceps!!"
"mmm I think ima try out for soccer!"
"bitch keep your eyes off!"

She blushed. Alma laughed. DING. The bell rang. They got up and got there things.

"Adams coming over here!" Amelia said

Alma didnt look. She just waiting.

"hey!!"
"huh?" she turned around to fast
Amelia laughed "Hi adam!"
"sup...were you headed?" he asked Alma
"gym!" she frowned "you?"
"science!"
"oh yea...thats coo!"
he laughed "yea I guess it is! hey listen what you doing after school?"
"umm..." Alma smiled "nothing"

she was all jumpy inside.

"oh alrite!"
she frowned "whyd you ask?"
he shrugged "just!"

She got mad.

"whatever im going to class!" she started to walk away
"bye!" he said

He smiled as he watched her walk out of sight.

"your mean you know that!"
he jumped and turned around Amelia was still right there "I thought you left!"
"I have the same class remember!"
"so?"
"so...I saw the way you looked at her!"
"what the fuck you talking about?"
"you like her dont you!"

he didnt answer. He just kept walking. Amelia laughed. She walked inside behind him. All Adam could think about was Alma and how he wanted to ask her to go to star bucks or something.

"Adam?"
"what?"
"what happens to a dead body when its in a air plane?"
"I donno!"

Alma was in class being her self. Her and her friend Leo. Leo was a class clown, him and Alma were practically bestfriends.

"Leo catch!"
"give it back Alma fuck!" said lilly flores

They always made fun of someone.

"Miss Choes go to the office now!"
she droped Lillys phone "why?" she asked still laughing!
"you know why go!"
"pff no ill sit down!"
"no now!"
"no..."

The teacher opned her drawer and pulled out a referl. She wrote her up and handed it to her.

"Office now!"
she rolled her eyes "fuck it!"

she picked it up but the teacher snatched it and said she cussed. Alma rolled her eyes. Adam was on his way to drop off to the office too, he was walking past her class. She opened the door and he heard.

"Catch alma...run run!"

Alma booked it out of class. A boy came chasing after her.

"give them back your gonna break them!"

She hid behind the benches. Adam stoped walking and started to laugh.

"leave him alone fuck alma your mean!"

Alma noticed the voice she looked around and saw Adam. The boy snatched his glasses back and went back to class. She stood up straight and looked at him. He wasnt smiling nomore.

"What are you doing here?" she asked
"going to the office...why are you so mean!" he laughed
"I am not mean!" she smiled and started to walk beside him "Im just my little ol self!"
"were you headed?"
"same place!" she showed him the refirl and stuffed it in the trash
he laughed "what are you doing?"
"hey...im on the expolsion contract I cant have a refirl!"
"good point" he through his away too "what now?"
she shrugged "I usualy leave early!"
"yea?"
"yup!"
"were too?"
"home...last week I waited for Amelia at mcdonalds" she frowned "how fucking boring that was..."

It was awkward silence

"I want tacos!"
he laughed "lets go then!"
she stoped and looked at him "Really?"
"yea"
"alrite...coo beans!"
"what?"
she laughed "nada foo!"
"i aint no foo!"
"your my foo now lets go!"

he didnt say anything to that, they just when to La Playitas Taco shop. He drove.

"I like your car!"
"yea...bet you dont even know what kind it is!"
"yes I do...its a hatch back honda...its sick!"
"you know cars?"
"yup..." she smiled
"your a weirdo you know that?"
she shrugged "Iv heard it befor!" she smiled "Im not your average girl!"
"I can see that...what makes you different?"
"I donno"
"is this the place?"
"yea"

he parked and they got out. She left her back pack in his car. They went inside. Adam stoped at the door.

"this is a beaner place!"
"so?"
"so I aint no beaner!"
"neither am I...come on!" she grabed his hand and pulled him

She felt his fingers curl around hers. She did the same but tighter. She ordered 6 tacos. They were tiny.

"Green or red?"
"what?"
"chilli?"
"red!"

When they got them, they went and sat at the empty tables. She opened hers and took a bite. he just watched her.

"are they good?"
"yes try it!"
"umm.." he looked at his "nah"
"here taste mine then!"
"alrite"

she picked the taco up and held her hand under it he took a bite. She smiled, he chewed and started to open his. She laughed at him. They ate and talked. She made him laugh at everything she said and did. They were in the car driving...nowere I guess lol.

"What kind of music do you like?" she asked him
he shrugged "rap...a little of rock..."
"have you heard that song kiss me through the phone?"
"I fucking hate that foo!"
"me too" she laughed "I cant stand solja boy tellem wat the fuck kina name is that?"
he laughed "what about you?"
"Me what?"
"music"
"oh...emo...rock...hard rock"

she noticed how he was looking at her.

she laughed "Im playing...R&B...some rap...oldies...a little of rock....like second hand senerade and linken park...demi lovato...thats about it!"
"whos your favorit rapper?"
"umm SPM and lil wayne...wait...and the game!"
"there bloods!"
"so" she shrugged "there coo, you have to listen to the songs!"
"and oldies...whats your favorit song?"

She thought back to her favorit ones. they all played out in her head.

"Natural high" she blurted it out... "always & forever, me and you, stand by me...my girl....fuck all of em!"
"R&B?"
"Leona lewis...alicia keys!"
"aww you like that love crap huh?"
"Its not crap!"
...."sorry!"
"Its ok..." she looked at the dash board "oh crap...could yu take me home my mom should be gettig home!"
"yea were do you live?"
"umm...were are we??"

He looked around.

"I dont know!" he laughed at hisself

They were to busy talking he was so into her he was driving everywere.
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