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Old 07-19-2009, 03:22 AM   #21
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Omg I love it, keep posting
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Old 07-19-2009, 03:27 AM   #22
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omg gud story so far
keep it comin(:
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Old 07-19-2009, 03:29 AM   #23
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haha i remember when me and my love did that
no you hang up.. and he he hung up on me
that meany lol

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Old 07-19-2009, 04:02 AM   #24
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aww how cute keep it coming
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Old 07-19-2009, 04:28 AM   #25
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Old 07-19-2009, 04:31 PM   #26
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"I SEE YOU JOKEING JAY Z JOKEING JAY Z-" That was almas ringtone
"hello?" she asked clearly annoyed.
"are you awake?"
she sat up quick to the voice "yea wats up?" she asked Adam
"nothing, did you want a ride today?" he asked her hesitantly
"umm sure!"
"coo..."
"can I bring a cd?"
"yea!"
"K its some different music..your gonna listen to it and like it!"
he laughed "alrite!"
she looked at the clock "holy fuk!"
"what?"
"Umm...be here at 7:30 ima go take a shower k?"
"alrite"
"bye"
"bye"

She turned on "everytime I think of you" by nd ridas. one look at the clock 6:35" her dad didnt even wake her up thats what she was thinking about. She was gonna ask later. She went to take shower, when she got out she went to her room in a towel She put on some black shorts and a black tank top. She took the towel out of her hair and started to crunch it, when she was done she put a black headband on. There was a knock at her door.

"come in!"
her door opened it was her mom "honey ill be taking you today!"
"umm one of my friends are giving me a ride!"
"oh ok then ill leave to work right now!"
"weres dad" but she shut the door already.

When she was done she went to brush her teeth. There was a knock at the front door. She went to it and opened it. There stood Adam he smiled when he saw her she did the same but moved out of his way. She shut the door

"let me just change..."
"alrite!"

she went back to her room unawear he was following but she didnt care. She changed in a locker room full of girls. She shut the door and opened the closet behind it. She pulled out dark blue jean shorts and a brown muscle shirt that hugs her body. She then went to her dresser and put socks on. Adam was just watching her. He was commiting everything to memory. When he saw her pulling her shorts down he got a lil hard seeing her in her underwear. He loved the way her body looked and moved. She pulled her pants up and then pulled the shirt over her head...that did it. hes offically hard now. She put another black tank top on then the brown muscle shirt. She grabed her shoes and put them on. Adam was thinking about what shed do if he started to kiss her right now. She pulled a black sweater out of the closet and put it on.

"Ready!" she smiled "what time is it?"
"umm 7:45!"
"ok lets go well be like 5 minutes late!"
"your worried about being late?"
"yes!" she said only cuz he was always at school
"says the girl who gets kicked out of everyclass!"
she laughed "come on dork!"

she went to her sterio "never let me go" by nb ridas came on. She fliped it off and grabed the CD.

"whats that?" he asked
"a little round thing that holds up to 80 minutes of music!"
"I know what it is...what kina music is it?"
"my music!" she knew were he was getting at
"na were not listening to that shit!"
"yes we are now vamos!"

she turned the light off and grabed his index finger then pulled him out. She locked her front door and walked to his car. They got in and she popped the cd in. "Todo Cambio" came on. That might not be his song but it was Almas. Well at least she felt.

"Do you understand spanish?" she asked
"yea why?"
"just...were do you live?"
he laughed "20 questions?"
"no I was wondering so I can stock you!"
he laughed agian "on 12th street!"
"so you want me to stock you?"
"sure why not!" he smiled the song changed to skater boy by avril lavigne "what the fuck is this shit?"
she laughed and started to sing "He was a skater boy she said see you later boy he wasnt good enough for her!"
"change it!"
"fine!" she changed it

her ring tone Joking Jay Z came on. She started to dance and sing along.

he laughed "this is coo I guess!"
"this is cool! ITs my Jam!"
she changed it "I like this one!"

Replacement girl by drake

"no...this one!" she changed it to juicy "listen to it!"

she wanted him to listen to it cuz she wanted him to know how she felt. He just listened. He liked it but didnt show interest. They got to school when the song ended. They got out and met infront of the car.

"tardy slips!" she said
"alrite..."

They walked to get tardy slips. While they waited she pulled her ipod out and put the little head phones in her ear. She started to sing to herself "lost in love". Adam listened to her and stared as she changed the song.

she looked up and smiled "what?"
"nothing" he looks away
"why do you do that?" she asked
"what?" he looked back to her
"stare at me then when I ask what you just turn away and say nothing!"
he shrugged "my bad!"
she stoped her foot "stop putting on your little hard act im not buying it!"
he laughed "dayum dose someone have a temper!"
"whatever!" she crossed her arms and looked away
he sighed "im sorry!"
she looked at him "for what?"
"nothing notin-"
"next!" Mrs.Florence said.
Adam moved up "adam sandoval!" he said she wrote it down and gave it to him

he went to the side and waited for Alma when she was done she looked up to find him staring at her. She didnt say anything. She wanted to see how long it lasted. She just looked at him. She stoped infront of him and he wouldnt move.

"what?" she said smiling
"nothing" he looked away
she laughed "I swear foo your crazy!"

She started to walk and he followed. It was silent

"Adam..."
"what?"
"can I ask you something?" she asked not looking at him. She bit her lip
"yea..."
"do you-do you think im pretty?" she asked
he seemed confused why was she asking this? he thought "yes your beautiful why?"
she blushed. He didnt see "do you like me?" she asked still not looking
They got to the door "um...sure!" he didnt know how to answer "why?"
"nothing its nothing" she opened the door and walked inside.

They gave there slips to the teacher and sat down next to each other. She felt he didnt know what he liked for felt. She liked him alot...since the first day she saw him. She just ignored his stare and did her work. The teacher walked by her.

"wow ms choes may I ask what brought this on??usualy your laughing it up!"
she looked up and shrugged "I donno..." she looked back down and did her work

Adam felt it was becuz of him. He sighed and sat there. He wanted to see her smile make her laugh. He felt his gum in his pocket. He pulled it out and held the pack to Alma. She took one and put it in her mouth. She looked at him. he leaned back and spit his gum at the cealing. It stayed in place. she laughed silently then she tried it it just came back down on her face. He laughed at her. She fliped him off and motioned his self and lipped "any time!" she laughed she had the gum in her mouth and was blowing her cheeks up and slapping them to see if the gum will fly. She kept doing it and then it flew in a girl that was infront of Adam, named Marias hair.

"op!" Alma covered her mouth
adam busted up laughing "get it out!" he said

The girl didnt feel it. Alma went to the side of Adam desk. The teacher had his head down. She started to try and untangle it.

"wat the-" she got cut off

Adam was covering her mouth and Alma pulled at the gum. Adam pulled out a pocket kniff and she cut her hair.

"you had a...a bug in there!" she said when adam released her mouth and continued waling
"is that my hair?" she yelled
"ladies..what is the problem" the teacher asked
"they cut my hair!"
"there was gum in there we were helping her!"
"how did it get there?" she asked
she shrugged "you tell me!"
the teacher went to get refirles
Alma looked at the girl mean "Thanks alot!"
gina smirked "anytime!"

Alma droped her hair. Adam got up and pulled her arm befor the she killed the girl. The teacher gave them there sheets. They planed to throw em away and leave but there were supervisors watching them. They walked in silence. She was thinking about what she had asked him. He held the door for her. They walked in she handed Mrs.smith the papers.

"oh...I should have knows to bad kids coming into the office together...what did you 2 do?"

They both shrugged together and looked away. Adam sat down. Alma didnt see she just stood there. He grabed her finger and pulled her to sit down. She looked at him and he smiled. She did the same.

"ahh...you 2...I shouldnt have introduced you!" mr shay said "Alma you owe me 2 dollers!"
"for what?"
"my american flag!"
she laughed "sure bob!"
"come back to my office."

They got up and walked into his office together. They sat side by side and watched the principle pull out sheets.

"Im not letting you off the hook this time alma...you and adam have...2 weeks of picking up trash!"
"what?" She asked mad
"and 2 saturday schools!"
"why?"
he looked up "you cut a girls hair!" they stayed quiet "you to join each other in ditching getting refirles now your going to pay the consequences, were sending you both home early!"
"why?" Adam asked
"your suspended for the rest of the day!"
"whatever!" Alma said

When they were done the secretaries called there parents. Almas dad was coming and so was Adams dad. He got back this morning cuz of Adam. Alma and Adam waited talking in the office laughing and being thereselves together.

"Alma!" someone said. She looked up it was her dad
"hi da-"
"what the fuck you doing here!" he asked adam
Adam stood up "I got to school here what the fuck dose it look like!"

Alma got up and started to push Adam back. She had no idea wat was going on.

"alma get your ass over here!"
"shut up dad...what-"
"what the fuck you doing here!" Ruben asked Joe
"Picking up my daughter bitch!"
"Fuck-"
"HEY!!" Alma yelled and got there attention "what the fuck is going on?"
"dont fucking worry about-" her dad begun
"dont talk to her like that!" Adam said

he got pissed listening to the way Joe talked to Alma.

"shes my daughter!"

Adam stayed quiet. he looked at Alma and she looked at him. He shook his head.

"Adam lets go!" his dad said
Adam picked his bag up Alma stoped him "text me" she whispered
"maybe!" he whispered back!
"why maybe?"
he was about to say something but ruben interupted "come on Adam now!"
"alma now!"

They both followed there parents out. Alma just watched Adam. He looked at her and shook his head as she slid in the car.

"DAD what the fuck was that?" she demanded in the car!
"dont fucking worry about it!"
"well I am!"
"I dont want you talking to that foo Alma im serious!"
"why not?"
"cuz just listen to me!"
"no!"
"why?"
"cuz I like him!"
"Well stop or ill kill his ass!"
"DAD!"
"I swear if you talk to him your gonna get him killed shut the fuck up!"
"fuck you!"
"what?"
"you heard me to!"

he was yelling but she put the head phones on and turned the music up loud. She was worried about Adam. Was his dad talking to him the same?? she asked herself that question. She got home and got out. She slamed the door and ran to her room. Adam was still driving home.

"howd you meet her?"
"the first day...member she was in the office?"
"yea...well dont talk to her!"
"why?"
"do you not remember what he did!"
"...yea..."
"hes gonna pull some stupid shit...lil bitch!"
"but she has nothing to do with it!"
"I kno...still! I dont want you to talk to her! Respect that!"
he sighed "alrite!"

They got home. He got out and went to his room too. He felt himself already missing Alma. Alma was thinking about him, like what was he doing. She pulled her phone out and called him. Adam looked at it. "She at least deserves this much!" he picked it up.

"hello?" he said
"what happened?"
"I..I cant talk to you!"
"why not?" she was hurt
"cuz...I have to respect my dad!"
"oh...so he said not to talk to me?"
"yea I-"
"my fucking dad told me the same thing...he even thretened me but here I am talking to you!" he didnt say anything "so just like that?" she started to cry
"..." he sighed "sorry..." he moved the phone but it was already off. She hung up.
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Old 07-19-2009, 06:11 PM   #27
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damn it mas please
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Old 07-19-2009, 07:07 PM   #28
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Dayum.. Keep it coming.!
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Old 07-19-2009, 07:30 PM   #29
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Old 07-19-2009, 07:55 PM   #30
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wtf.... i wonder if there parents or dad's have a past... they probably do... anyway...loving ur story..keep it coming!
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