J-GUNZ! VS. BABITO

[J-Gunz! "F.O.E. Cru"]

COME ON PEOPLE WE NEED TO HAVE THIS BATTLE RESOLVED TODAY, ITS EASY JUS READ THE BATTLE VERSE'S AND THEN VOTE ON THE ONE U LIKE, AND GIVE A LITTLE BACKGROUND AS TO Y AND ITS GOOD. THANX TO YOUNG-B FOR VOTING SO QUICKLY. WHERE ALL THE VETS AT, ITS LIKE THEY DONT CARE NE MORE. I CAN SEE THEM WHEN THERE SIGNED IN BUT YET THEY DONT VOTE, WTF.

[IfYouOnlyKnew]

Fuck J-Gun's, All F.O.E Cru only Dealin wit BB's
u in the building? look up lil nigga, do u see me?

average opener

I'm highly anticipated like "New Moon", coming too soon
and these star-watchers hatin like my name edward
but its B-A-BITO biting on your bitches, ant nobody do it better

show us why "aint nobody do it better"

Cuz i give em what he lacks (Real guns)
This Necrophiliac on the run, y u misuse the dead? (R.I.P Ledger)
I head to BP P.B. saw your name all over the place, like u given head

wasnt really feeling this one

Prolly y u always tryin to clear ur throat, to much cum(Thrill a partial vote?)
This hoe talkin like she can afford to be a critic but last he was a toliet bowl

good personal...but punchline was eehh..

Insyt shitted, now I'm just pissing on the brown stain
What u comparing me to? Everything thats phallic
this cat a pussy, queefying me a ballad, "pull your skirt down"(Jay-z)
your chochie hole to fat, eat a salad!!!
Fuck aJe, oops i mean J-Gunz,
My verses leave you holier, like alcholic nuns

the structure just threw me off...the brown stain line was cool..looks like you struggled to finish it and just threw whatever on there



FUCK THIS LITTLE HO’ NAMED BURITTO, OPPS! I MEAN BABITO,
AYE DIOS MIO!, IM SLAPPIN U ROUND MORE THAN A MALARIA MOSQUITO. (BUZZ)

immediately attack his name...good punchline.

PUSSY U CALLED FOR A OPEN, BUT DIDN’T WANNA CHALLENGE ME
BITCH IF I WAS A TOILET SEAT, IT WOULD STILL BE IMPOSSIBLE FOR U TO SHIT ON ME.

this line is old.

YOU FROM THE CHI? WELL IM A ACTIVE MEMBER ON THE COMMITTEE
U SHOULDN’T FUCK WIT ME, CAUSE I’LL ROLL THRU AND BLOW UR WACK ASS OUTTA THE WINDY CITY.

it seemed like you forced your setup just so it would rhyme w/ the punchline...punchline was a good personal

YOU SAY U LIKE SLAPPIN BIG BUTTS, WHEN REALLY YOU LIKE GRABBING A HANDFULL OF NUTS
THIS GUY IS NUTS, HE AINT TUFF, CAUSE MY LYRICS WILL SLICE U UP THINNER THAN ITALIAN COLD CUTS.

multis were good in these bars

SHIT HAPPENS RIGHT, MOTHA FUCKER YOU AINT WORTH THE FIGHT
HOW THE FUCK IS A CHIHUAHUA GONNA COMPETE WITH A PITBULLS BITE. (RRRAH!)

average line..


I BATTLE HARD, AND YALL KNOW THIS FAGGOT AINT HARD TO TAKE APART
YO STYLE IS SIMPLE DOG,THERE’S NO WAY U CAN HANDLE MY MARTIAL ARTS.

this was an oookay line..


YOU FUCKIN PUNK, U JUS TO BIG FOR UR BRICTHES, IM ALL VICIOUS
AND MY STYLE MALICIOUS ENOUGH TO DEVOUR YOUR AMBITIONS, IT DELICIOUS.(MMM)

multis is one of your strengths...i was feeling this one

SEE I KNOW YOU LOVEIN MY STYLE, GOT YOU WATCHIN ME LIKE A TV SET
WHY THE FUCK YOU ACTIN BUCK WILD, IF NOBODY HERE EVEN CONSIDERS YOU AS A THREAT!

your closer was above average it was aiiight.

gunz wins.

[J-Gunz! "F.O.E. Cru"]

YO, FINALLY ANOTHA VOTE AND FROM A VET. THANX FOR THE FEEDBACK IYOK, I WAS FORCING SOME SHIT HERE AND THERE. ITS JUS THAT I BATTLED A COUPLE GUYS IN A ROW AND MY PUNCHES GOT A LITTLE SOFT,.. U KNOW LACK OF FRESH MATERIAL. ILL TRY TO KICK IT UP NEXT TIME.

SO ITS 2-0 J-GUNZ!

CAN SOME1 PLEASE HELP US OUT HERE WIT ANOTHA VOTE!!

[RisenSoldier]

Originally Posted by J-Gunz! "F.O.E. Cru"

AHEM!

FUCK THIS LITTLE HO’ NAMED BURITTO, OPPS! I MEAN BABITO,
AYE DIOS MIO!, IM SLAPPIN U ROUND MORE THAN A MALARIA MOSQUITO. (BUZZ)

(Good Intro, suggestive)

PUSSY U CALLED FOR A OPEN, BUT DIDN’T WANNA CHALLENGE ME
BITCH IF I WAS A TOILET SEAT, IT WOULD STILL BE IMPOSSIBLE FOR U TO SHIT ON ME.

(jajajajaja Funny)

YOU FROM THE CHI? WELL IM A ACTIVE MEMBER ON THE COMMITTEE
U SHOULDN’T FUCK WIT ME, CAUSE I’LL ROLL THRU AND BLOW UR WACK ASS OUTTA THE WINDY CITY.

(good relation with the rhyme)

YOU SAY U LIKE SLAPPIN BIG BUTTS, WHEN REALLY YOU LIKE GRABBING A HANDFULL OF NUTS
THIS GUY IS NUTS, HE AINT TUFF, CAUSE MY LYRICS WILL SLICE U UP THINNER THAN ITALIAN COLD CUTS.

(at first you where trying to hard, then you brought it home with "slice u up thinner than italian cold cuts")

SHIT HAPPENS RIGHT, MOTHA FUCKER YOU AINT WORTH THE FIGHT
HOW THE FUCK IS A CHIHUAHUA GONNA COMPETE WITH A PITBULLS BITE. (RRRAH!)

(leave the sound FX out of it)

I BATTLE HARD, AND YALL KNOW THIS FAGGOT AINT HARD TO TAKE APART
YO STYLE IS SIMPLE DOG,THERE’S NO WAY U CAN HANDLE MY MARTIAL ARTS.

(very good)

YOU FUCKIN PUNK, U JUS TO BIG FOR UR BRICTHES, IM ALL VICIOUS
AND MY STYLE MALICIOUS ENOUGH TO DEVOUR YOUR AMBITIONS, IT DELICIOUS.(MMM)

(again remove the FX and try not to make things rhyme let it slide off your tongue)

SEE I KNOW YOU LOVEIN MY STYLE, GOT YOU WATCHIN ME LIKE A TV SET
WHY THE FUCK YOU ACTIN BUCK WILD, IF NOBODY HERE EVEN CONSIDERS YOU AS A THREAT!

(very good outro, took it home sik)


This is my vote, if you don't like it, SO!

[J-Gunz! "F.O.E. Cru"]

STILL NEED ANOTHA VOTE, HELP US OUT HERE, SOMEBODY, ANYBODY.

[RisenSoldier]

Originally Posted by babito

Fuck J-Gun's, All F.O.E Cru only Dealin wit BB's
u in the building? look up lil nigga, do u see me?
I'm highly anticipated like "New Moon", coming too soon
and these star-watchers hatin like my name edward

(rough Intro) "don't make no sense"

but its B-A-BITO biting on your bitches, ant nobody do it better
Cuz i give em what he lacks (Real guns)

(crossover to a diss/ but this is whack)

This Necrophiliac on the run, y u misuse the dead? (R.I.P Ledger)
I head to BP P.B. saw your name all over the place, like u given head

(makes me wonder what your doing at the PB. jajajaja) youre suppose to diss J-Gunz, not yourself)

Prolly y u always tryin to clear ur throat, to much cum(Thrill a partial vote?)
This hoe talkin like she can afford to be a critic but last he was a toliet bowl
Insyt shitted, now I'm just pissing on the brown stain
What u comparing me to? Everything thats phallic
this cat a pussy, queefying me a ballad, "pull your skirt down"(Jay-z)
your chochie hole to fat, eat a salad!!!

(WHAT THE F>>>) Are you on acid or pcp> Dont make no sense you all over the BP but in a bad way

Fuck aJe, oops i mean J-Gunz,
My verses leave you holier, like alcholic nuns

BAD OUTRO, continue to improve your skills aint nothing wrong wit you
just need some MAJOR HELP. jajaj

Thats my vote, if you don't like it SO!

Overall i vote on J-Gunz, sik lyrics and dope rhymes.

[J-Gunz! "F.O.E. Cru"]

WELL IT LOOKS LIKE ANOTHA K.O. VICTORY FOR J-GUNZ!. YO, THANKS FOR TAKING THE TIME TO VOTE RISENSOLDIER, AND EVERYBODY ELSE THAT DID.

SO IN CONCLUSION 3-0 K.O. VICTORY FOR J-GUNZ!

[babito]

Originally Posted by IfYouOnlyKnew

Fuck J-Gun's, All F.O.E Cru only Dealin wit BB's
u in the building? look up lil nigga, do u see me?

average opener

I'm highly anticipated like "New Moon", coming too soon
and these star-watchers hatin like my name edward
but its B-A-BITO biting on your bitches, ant nobody do it better

show us why "aint nobody do it better"------(the next line tells u y)

Cuz i give em what he lacks (Real guns)
This Necrophiliac on the run, y u misuse the dead? (R.I.P Ledger)
I head to BP P.B. saw your name all over the place, like u given head

wasnt really feeling this one------(how come? BP Public bathroom, place u shit at)

Prolly y u always tryin to clear ur throat, to much cum(Thrill a partial vote?)
This hoe talkin like she can afford to be a critic but last he was a toliet bowl

good personal...but punchline was eehh..

Insyt shitted, now I'm just pissing on the brown stain----(this bar goes with the one above)

What u comparing me to? Everything thats phallic -------(Ex..Coldcuts, nuts, mosquitos, burritos)

this cat a pussy, queefying me a ballad, "pull your skirt down"(Jay-z)
your chochie hole to fat, eat a salad!!! ------(Me comparing him to basically a fat pussy fart)

Fuck aJe, oops i mean J-Gunz,
My verses leave you holier, like alcholic nuns

the structure just threw me off...the brown stain line was cool..looks like you struggled to finish it and just threw whatever on there

I commented on some of the things u wrote, mine are the ones that go like ------(****)

[IfYouOnlyKnew]

Originally Posted by IfYouOnlyKnew
Fuck J-Gun's, All F.O.E Cru only Dealin wit BB's
u in the building? look up lil nigga, do u see me?

average opener

I'm highly anticipated like "New Moon", coming too soon
and these star-watchers hatin like my name edward
but its B-A-BITO biting on your bitches, ant nobody do it better

show us why "aint nobody do it better"------(the next line tells u y)
its a waste of a bar, especially when your opponent is hitting you consistently

Cuz i give em what he lacks (Real guns)
This Necrophiliac on the run, y u misuse the dead? (R.I.P Ledger)
I head to BP P.B. saw your name all over the place, like u given head

wasnt really feeling this one------(how come? BP Public bathroom, place u shit at)
.....I wasnt feeling it

Prolly y u always tryin to clear ur throat, to much cum(Thrill a partial vote?)
This hoe talkin like she can afford to be a critic but last he was a toliet bowl

good personal...but punchline was eehh..

Insyt shitted, now I'm just pissing on the brown stain----(this bar goes with the one above)
I know it does, thats why I said I liked it

What u comparing me to? Everything thats phallic -------(Ex..Coldcuts, nuts, mosquitos, burritos)

this cat a pussy, queefying me a ballad, "pull your skirt down"(Jay-z)
your chochie hole to fat, eat a salad!!! ------(Me comparing him to basically a fat pussy fart)

Fuck aJe, oops i mean J-Gunz,
My verses leave you holier, like alcholic nuns

the structure just threw me off and left me uninterested in your verse

[babito]

aight j-gunz will take this one but if u tryin 2 go again let me know