Just A Poem - Page 7

crazyliljoe · 10-22-2009, 12:49 AM

Originally Posted by LiL BoRi

bad ass poem ey. i can relate to this.
keep it real

Lil Bori AKA Negro

Thx for reading and taking the time to reply. Peace

MzCutie_Mexi · 10-23-2009, 12:07 AM

wow. that was deep.
but very nice.

crazyliljoe · 11-13-2009, 02:32 AM

Originally Posted by la bonita Guera

your lines have a touch of demented minds.
a little emotion.
swiftly moving words and transitions.
i really enjoied reading this man.
good job.
stay strong and keep writing
:]
amor y respecto

THANKS ive never heard anyone describe my poetry that way. COO

*~*GORDitA*~* · 11-13-2009, 11:15 PM

DAMN MiJO tHAt WAS REALLy DEEP, yU HAVE ALOt OF tALENt.

crazyliljoe · 11-28-2009, 03:41 PM

Originally Posted by Twisted Illusion

lovelovelove it

Glad you loved it, thanks for reading and replying

crazyliljoe · 11-28-2009, 03:42 PM

Originally Posted by [diмpℓ∂z]

o damn pa
real deep
propzz eh

Thx for the reply and the read. Peace

crazyliljoe · 12-19-2009, 10:05 PM

Originally Posted by .:F1RM3HyNA:.

iM FEELiN YOUR LiNES MiJO, FO REAL.. KEEP iT UP..

thx mija

i appreciate the reply and the read

crazyliljoe · 12-19-2009, 10:06 PM

Originally Posted by xxxLaSiL3nT_503xxx

FiRME DROP MiJO
SERiO MAD PROPZ
U GOT SUM GOOD iMAGERY GOiN ON
FOREALZ THO iT SOUND LiKE U GOT SUM PAiN GROWiN iN U
1 MUST FEEL PAiN & SUFFER iN ORDER 2 GRASP A BETTER UNDERSTANDiNG OF THiNGS, A BETTER UNDERSTANDiNG OF LiFE
KEEP YA HEAD UP & PUT SMiLE ON...LiKE DiS =D
EVERY1 HAS TiMES OF JOY & TiMES OF PAiN
DATS JUS THA WAY iT iS
iF U EVER NEED ANYTHiNG HiT ME UP WiT A MSG
i DNT MiND HELPiN OUT A HOMiE iN PAiN, A HOMiE iN NEED
EVER NEED ANY ADViCE OR WHATEVER DATS MY THiNG, DATS WAT i DO
i'M HERE 4 U HOMiE
KEEP WRiTiN CUZ iZ A GOOD WAY 2 LET iT ALL OUT

muchas gracias i appreciate the love. Yeah its just inside pain writing is like a drug just makes me feel good.

esadopeyoriginal · 12-21-2009, 03:32 AM

In order to write about the joy in your life you have to feel it day after day, for a long time, because if you've been in pain 80% of the time and feel joy 20% of the time, the pain overcomes your joy, and in the end the pain is what you feel most of the time, find HAPPINESS and you will write only of joy! neta.

crazyliljoe · 02-07-2010, 03:20 PM

Originally Posted by LiL BoRi

this poem was bad ass. i know what exactly what u mean homie.
ur linez described exactly how i felt. keep ur head up tho and have faith. ull make it through.

Lil Bori aKa .:N3gro:.

Simon faith is all we need and i have made it through. Thanks for reading and replying