LIKE YOULL NEVER SEE ME AGIAN Pt 2

livefastdiepretty.31 · 09-09-2009, 07:58 PM

AHHHH here it is.

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Eve-about 5'0. 18. long black hair. greenish brown eyes. (looks just like marissa from the first part)
Damian-about 5'5. 19. black hair. fade. brown eyes.
Elane-about 5'1. 17. short brown hair. brown eyes. Damians sister
Angelina-aka-lina-about 5'1. long brown hair. Eves bestfriend

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"Dont tell me that shit Damien I cant belive you!" Eve scream

She tried to burst through the door out of Damians house. He grabed her hand.

"babe please hear me out!!"
"No you have nothing to say to me!"
"Babe!"
"Fuck you Damian ok Fuck you!!"

She shoved him agianst the wall and stormed out of the house slamming the door. He was right behind her. He watched her leave from the front step of the house. He sighed and went back in. Elane was standing right there.

"I heard it all!"
"oh..." he shut the door
"How could you do that to her! shes been hurt so much!"
"I know! It was a mistake!"
"whatever! Wait till I tell ma!"
"snich!"

Eve was driving home. Tear struck face watching as the glimmer of the from the stop lights glistened off her eyes. The ring tone of "Run this town" came from her phone. She looked at it. Lina.

"Hello?" she asked
"Hey love where are you?"
"leaving Damians I hate him!"
"What happened?"
"he cheated on me!"
"what?"
"yes even after he promised!"
"Oh hon im soooo sorry!"
"I dont know what to do! or where to go!"
"Lets get away for the weekend!"
"And do what?"
"umm...Near Perris...they fixed up this part up there. noone wants to go because that thing that happened 2 years ago!"
"What thing?" she sniffeled
"that girl, her boyfriend and baby!"
"oh...what was her name?"
"Marissa I think!"
"oh..."
"and I know how you like historic and mysterious thing! itll be fun staying there come on!"
"Let me think about it ill call you in the morning!"
"promise?"
"Promise...right now I need to be alone!"
"I understand!"
"bye!"
"bye!"

She closed her phone and put it on the seat. It rang agian she just didnt answer it.

Getting home she stayed in her car. Sitting there staring at the engadement ring Damien got her after she graduated. They planed to get married. They were so deeply inlove. They were together for 4 years. Went to school and went through so much together. Befor him Eve was hurt by 3 other guys who just wanted to hit it and quit it. The first one hit it but the other 2 didnt. And whne she met Damian it was different. She reminised on the day they met...

*flashback*
It was Lina and Eve sitting at the lunch table on the last day of school. Eve had just been heart broken by Raymond. The 3d guy.

"You ok?" Cynthia asked sitting beside her
"Im fine!" she put on a smile
"whatever...forget about him!"
"You know what...I think I am!"
"dont make him feel bad! make him jelouse!"
"I think I will!"

she found her eyes searching the wall for Raymond. He was sitting down looking at her. She didnt notice she hasnt looked at him all day. He smiled a lila at her and she smiled too.

"Hes looking at me!"
"he notices you!"
"I know...now look for someone else!"

And thats when she manuvered her eyes and locked thm with a boy across the top. He was standing with 2 guys. his hair was spiked at the time. He wore baggy blue jeans and a white T. A chain around his neak. He had the cutest smile shes ever saw. When he flashed it her heart skipped a beat.
*present*

Eve let out more tears at the smile that cought her attention. Then another flash back poppd in her head. The day he asked her to marry him.

*flashback*
They were laying on the roof top of the school building at night staring up at the moon. There was a fire in the neighbor hood so every evacuated from there houses to the near by high school. Everyone was sleeping. they were on the roof top. Damien had been watching her every move. he watched her yawn and move her eyes to him.

"You know I love you right!" he had said
"yes..."
"You know I want to be with you forever right?"
"Yes..."

she sat up on her but and looked at him

"Why whats wrong?"

the panic ws in her voice. The sob just throbbng to come out of her through was near seconds to coming out.

"I want to live the rest of my life with you! have kids...dont you want that?"

his encouraging smile soffened her throut!

"Of course!"
"I want to marry you!"

her heart stoped.

"What?" she asked scared
"Marry me!"
"yes!" she screamed the words

And that night was the first night they made love.
*present*

She cried harder. She found herself sitting in her bathtub in hot water.

The next morning Eve woke up with groggy bugered eyes. She went to the bathroom and washed her face. Her eyes were puffy. She went to her room and looked at the clock. 10:30 and just then her phone rang.

"Hello?" she asked in a crackly voice
"Hey woman...did you think about it?"

And she did. She wanted to get out of town and not let anyone know where theyr going. she didnt want Damian to see her for awhile. She needed to think.

She took a deep breath then let it out "Yes...lets go!"
"Yess! Tonight were leaving! My dad already gave me the keys! just be packed and ready! leave your phone!"
"ok...you make it sound like your planning to kill me!"
"Itd be really fun!"
"ok..."
"are you ok?"
"a lil..."
"Try not to think about it?"
"I will..."
"Has he called?"
"no!"
"good!"
"he knows better to give me my time!"
"My dads ltting us use his car! I already talked to him!"
"k..."
"start packing...ill call you!"
"Ok..."
"take care!"
"ok..."
"lates..."
"bye!"

She closed her phone

"Shes so advnturative!"

She got up and went to her closet pulling out the purple heart traveling bag from the top shelf. She opened it. And right when she was about to open her top drawer for underwear her phone rang. She looked at it. Damian. She sighed.

"Hello?"
"babe hear me ou-"
"no Damian hear me out! Its over were through. I still love you but this hurts to much!"

She closed her phone and put it down. He called and called while she packed. After stuffing her black sandles in the side zipper she went to take a fast shower. When she got out, she blow dried her hair and straightened it. It was long and silky. She pulled it back intoa clip half up half down. She put on some carpise the ones that went just above her knees. The color dark blue then put on a white spageti strap then her white sandles. While she made herself some breakfast she watched the Mury show. One came on where a boyfriend was revieling to his fiance that he cheated on her and the girls baby might be his. She was devistated. She felt she was just like that girl. Her phone rang. Lina.

"Hello?"
"ready?"
"Yes..."
"k..."
"dont bring make up!"
"What?"
"dont bring any!"
"Did you?"
"no just my blow drier and straightener. Lets go natural!"
"doing our hair isnt natural!" she laughed
"just do it!"
"has Damian called you?"
she sighed "yes!"
"and what happened?"
"I told him it was over...that I was through!"
"wow...you didnt say that last time!"
"now...I cant take it!"

She sat on the couch trying not to cry

"I dont want to talk to him about it!"
"Ok...im on my way!"
"Ok..."

She closed her phone. Putting her things by the door along with her purse, ipod, and a book "The lovely bones".

When Lina got to the house she helped Eve put her things in the trunk. Shutting the trunk she said

"Ready for a mysterious weekend of investigation!"
"you know it!"
"Thats right!"
"woot woot!"

It was a think that lina and eve did together. Eve would said "You know it!" in a deep voice and lina would said "thats right!" in the same tone and eve goes "woot woot" in a louder one. They laughed as they did it and climbed into the car.

Tell me waht you think!

loretta03 · 09-09-2009, 08:42 PM

Keep it coming plzz i loveee it

So is eve marrisa's daughter?

livefastdiepretty.31 · 09-09-2009, 08:48 PM

Marissa didnt have a daughter!
Just read and find out
They just happen to look alike! thats all im saying

triste_estrella · 09-09-2009, 08:50 PM

KEEP IT COMING...
SOUNDS GOOD

americanistagurl101 · 09-09-2009, 09:30 PM

keep it coming

M3lissaGotBack · 09-09-2009, 09:54 PM

keep it komin

loretta03 · 09-09-2009, 10:34 PM

oh yeah now i remember she had a son keep it coming

purdy_gata · 09-09-2009, 10:50 PM

keep it comin

livefastdiepretty.31 · 09-09-2009, 11:18 PM

"How much longer?" Eve asked waking up in the passanger seat
"About 1 hour!"
"Dang! If you would have told me where this place was I would thought more!"
"hush!"

She turned off onto the 215 freeway south. Eve sighed and changed the song on her IPod. She put her head back agianst the seat and looked out the window. She smiled at the thought of Damian running her phone up like crazy. Hed probly end up going to her house. She was glad she put all his things in a box on the chair next to the front door outside on the porch. She hoped the idea would flow through his head.

Lina started shaking Eve.

"Eve...come on I gotta pee and im hungry!"

Eve opened her eyes. They were at a rest stop. She un did her seat belt and stumbled out. She cheaked if she had dollars in her pockets. she did. She met Lina in the front of the car. She saw a SUV full of guys. Eve ignored them forgeting she didnt have a fiance anymore.

"mm mm mm...look at them!" Lina smiled their way
"Thats nice!"
"You and Damian arnt together anymore...!"
"right.." she looked at her "I forgot!"
"Its ok now so look, come on take a look!"

Eve sighed and looked at the SUV full of guys. They all smiled at her. One mouthed the word "hi..." she smiled and did the same "hi"

"lets go before I piss my pants..."

Eve and Lina started for the girls restrooms. After doing their thing they walked out.

"Those guys are still there!" lina said

Eve looked. The guy that cought her eye was sitting on the picnic table infront of Linas truck. She nodded, saying wassup. Eve waved. They walked to the vending machins.

"mmm oreos!" Eve said

she put a dollar in and got some oreos. she bought 5 dollars worth of snacks and 2 cokes. Lina did the same.

"Ready?" she asked
"yes..."

they started walking then eve stoped.

"What?"
"Look at us. There going to think were fat asses!"
"we are!" she said "who cares maybe theyll think its cute..."

Eve looked at them and started walking agian. They made it to the truck.

"Sharing is caring beautiful!" a guy said to Lina
"Ugh..." Lina said in a disgusted tone "Dont even try it!"
"Try what?"

Eve laughed at her as she placed the things in the car. Lina was arguing with a guy. Eve was watching her. That guy that cought Eves eye walked towards her.

"Shes got a temper huh?"
eve looked at him and smiled "oh yes...you better get your boy befor she beats his ass scensless!"
he laughed "na, he needs it!"
"yea?"
"yea...hes got a wife and 2 kids!"
"And hes hitting on Lina..." she added watching them
"so what can I get a name?"
Eve looked back to him "Eve..." she smiled "yours?"
"Trinny!"
"Trinny?" eve laughed "whats the first name?"
"Its stupid!"
"so tell me?"
"Trinidad!"
Eve laughed "cute..."
"Is Eve short for something?"
"Evangalin! but I hate it so I go by Eve!"
"well Eves a pretty name...matches you and your eyes!"
"yea?" she asked and turned her head "what color are my eyes?"
"green with a touch of brown!"
Eve looked at him "wow. you noticed?"
"im very obserbiv!"
"I could tell..."
"Were are you from?"
"Lake Tahoe!"
"wow really?"
"yea..."
"Coo im from Reno..."
"Thats not that far!"
"I know...were you headed?"
"um...perris!"
"what?" he asked surprised "so am I, ima visit my family!"
"Oh im just going on a trip..."
"Crazy...well can i get your number so we could hang out?..."
"thanks but I left my cell phone. This is saposto be a guyless weekend!"
he laughed "boyfriend troubles?" he asked kina dissapointed
"acually, yes...ex boyfriend troubles. Me and my fiance broke up last night, im getting away so it can be easier for me to leave it all behind, you know clear my mind!"
"wanna talk about it?"
"not now, it looks like were about to leave...but you could give me your number if you want?"

he gave Eve his number. Just then Lina opened the door.

"Ready?" she seemed mad
"umm...?" Eve looked at "Ill call you!"
"When you leaving perris?"
"um...?" I looked at Lina
"monday night!"
"tight us too!"
"Ok well Ill see you there..."
"bye..."
"bye..."

he moved out of the way and shut her door. Lina pulled out. As they drove away Eve waved at Tinny.

next post tomarro maybe

livefastdiepretty.31 · 09-09-2009, 11:20 PM

It might be boring but I have to make Tinny fit in there.