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Old 09-12-2009, 12:46 AM   #31
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aww what the hell!! i was all into it, hurry and post more plz
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Old 09-12-2009, 02:34 PM   #32
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gosh i cant wait! this story is guna be good!!
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Old 09-12-2009, 02:35 PM   #33
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keep it coming!! its good
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Old 09-15-2009, 03:29 AM   #34
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Ill be posting some more tomarro. Maybe. I dont have much time. Sorry!
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Old 09-15-2009, 03:40 AM   #35
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Read my story called she will always live on in his stories it's very very short but i thought i should try writing a story its already finished so yeah tell me what you think
Oh and keep it coming
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Old 09-15-2009, 09:05 AM   #36
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KEEP IT KUMING
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Old 09-18-2009, 01:53 AM   #37
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Originally Posted by loretta03 View Post
Read my story called she will always live on in his stories it's very very short but i thought i should try writing a story its already finished so yeah tell me what you think
Oh and keep it coming
Got it, but let me post, and ill see if i have time because I have nooo idea when my bfs coming back...

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after Eve showered and changed into some tight blue jean shorts and a yellow tank top with a white spageti strap under. She put on some sockes and went into the kitche. Her hair was straight down, curled in at the ends. No make up.

"is that what your gonna wear?" Lina asked Eve
Eve shrugged ".what?..its something simple..." eve looked over at her from the microwave "Its not a date!"
"To you maybe but not to Trinny..."
"Whatever..."

When the microwave stoped Eve took her hot pocket out and began to eat it.

"Is that what YOUR gonna wear?" she asked lina
"I dont care, I hope he brings someone else..." she took a drink of her pepsi "Not Ivan that dog!"
"yea I heard he has a kid and a wife!"
"Ugh!" she was so annoyed
"so what do you think happened in this house?"
"I dont know, its a big mystery isnt it?"
"yea, oh my god, I cant wait!"
"Me either!" she said it sarcastically
"Shut up!" eve laughed

they ate and joked around. With trinny on Eves mind she almost forgot all about Damien. Just then Linas phone rang.

"I got it!" Eve said getting up "hello?"
"Babe!"
Eve sighed and pinched the bridge of her nose "what Damien?"
"How are you?"
"I was fine before you called!"
"Babe I said sorry!"
"Whatever Damien Im not gonna talk about this, im on vacation an-"
"Just hear me out..."

As much as she wanted to she sighed. She unplugged it from the charger and headed to her room

"What?"
"Im sorry ok..."
eve started to cry "mhm..."
"babe...dont cry...man I wish I were there to hold you!"

She sobbed a lil more but quietly. She didnt want Lina to hear her.

"Im sorry ok?"
"ok..."
"Am I forgivin..."
"....no!"
"no? but you just said ok!"
"I said ok that your sorry not ok your forgivin!"
"Thats fucked up!"
"and ant that some shit!"
"What the fuck is wrong with you?"
"you Damien..." she cried a little more "you just hurt me like that, and have been cheating on me for 7 monthes and all you have to say is sorry! Damien theres so much more youhave to own up to, but I dont think you can!" he didnt say anything else so she went on "Im sorry..."
"What are you trying to say?"
"That I cant do this..."

Trinny poppd in her head

"I have to go some friends are coming..." she whiped her eyes "Im sorry Damien...i hope your ok with this, but we need to see other people..."
"see other people??!!!so what you already seeing someone?"
"no not even like that!"
"Then whats it like because I dont understand!"
she sighed frustrated "because I dont want to be with you!!!" she yelled
just then there was a knock on the door "Um..." trinny said "Its Trinny..."
"oh..."
"who?" Damien asked
"None of your buisness!" she said "come in!"
Trinny walked in "hey..." he said
"Who is that?!"
"look Damien you messed up, Thats all im saying now, bye..."
"wait no babe ple-"
"Bye Damien!"

she closed the phone befor she got sucked back in. She sighed and sat it on the bed.

"Whats wrong?" Trinny sat beside her..."
"um..." she whiped her eyes "Damien..."
"ah your ex?" he sighed "it can be convincing..."
"What can?" she asked sniffing
"The pull he has on you...he can say something so sweet and youll go running back!"
"I know...thats why I ended it..." she looked over at the phone "he must have gotten the message because hes not calling back!"
"Good..."

Eve looked up at Trinny. He began to whipe her tears away with his thumb

"your to pretty to cry...to pretty to get hurt...dont let him bring you down..."

The warmth of his skin sent a chill down her spin. She didnt even know she did it but she stretched up and put her lips to his. It gave her a spark that pulled her in. She wraped her arms around his neak and he did the same to her waist until someone cleared there throut and Eve snapped out of it.

"oh god!" she said getting up "Im sorry..."
he laughed "Its ok..."
"Ok is this little make out session done?"
"um yes..." Eve smiled
"ok well the movie is ready lets go..."

Lina walked out. Trinny looked at eve. ok...After the movie I have a surprise for you..."
"A surprise?"
"yea..."
"can I know what it is?"
"Then it wouldnt really be a surprise!"
"ok..." she bit her lip "Stupid movie...could we just say we did but didnt!"
he laughed "what you cant wait?"
"no..."
"Ok, well its some things that were juan and marissas!"
she gasped "really?"
"yes..."
"oh my god! I wanna see!"
"no!"
"why not?"
"Its a surprise!"
"ugh fine!"

She grabbed Trinnys hand and pulled him into the living room. They planted themselves on the couch and watched "Friday the 13, killer cut!"
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Old 09-18-2009, 02:10 AM   #38
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ohh the ghost is gonna come back!!
and hes gonna what to get with eve cz she
looks like marissa.
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Old 09-18-2009, 02:17 AM   #39
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Old 09-18-2009, 02:26 AM   #40
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keep it coming
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