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Old 01-10-2008, 01:57 AM   #1
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HEY BP, THIS IS MY FIRST STORY....I HOPE YOU LIKE IT.


*MONDAY MORNING* ALEXA WALKED INTO WORK WITH HER HAIR PULLED BACK, A PLAIN WHITE SHIRT AND SOME BROWN&PINK STRIPED PANTS. SHE HAD ON HER DARK BROWN HEELS AND HER MAKE UP WAS DONE REALLY PRETTY. SHE SAT DOWN ON HER CHAIR AND THREW ALL HER PAPERS AND HER PURSE ONTO THE DESK. IT WAS 11:30AM.*


ALEXA: FUCK. IM SO FUCKEN TIRED...

DAISY: WHERE YOU BEEN FOOL? IVE BEEN CALLING YOU? YOUR DADS PISSED OFF CUS HE HAD TO OPEN THE STORE TODAY?!

ALEXA: I WOKE UP LATE. I WAS UP ALL NIGHT CHECKING THROUGH ALL THESE UNDOCUMENTED PAPERS....DAMN FOOL. COULDNT YOU COVER FOR ME? YOU HAVE THE STORE KEY REMEMBER? I MADE YOU THE COPY?!

DAISY: I KNOW. BUT I GOT HERE 10 MIN LATE...YOU’RE 30 MIN. LATE ALEXA...

ALEXA: YEA, WELL...WHERES MY DAD ANYWAY?

DAISY: HE LEFT TO WORK...


*DAISY WAS 17, SHE HAD LONG BLACK HAIR. LIGHT BROWN EYES, FULL LIPS AND A PIERCING ON HER NOSE AND LEFT EYEBROW...SHE TALKED WITH AN ACCENT AND WAS REALLY PRETTY WITH A NICE CURVY BODY.


*ALEXA WAS 16. DARK HAZEL EYES, FULL LIPS, LONG EYELASHES AND A BEAUTIFUL SMILE. SHE HAD LONG LIGHT BROWN HAIR AND HAD 2 OLDER BROTHERS. SHE WAS THE MANAGER OF A HUGE BRIDAL STORE; THE ONLY BRIDAL STORE IN HER CITY. HER MOM HAD DIED WHEN SHE WAS JUST 15.SHE HAD PROMISED HER MOM THAT SHE WOULD HELP TAKE OVER THE BUISSNESS. HER DAD RAN HIS OWN PLUMBING COMPANY. AND WAS HARDLY EVER AROUND TO HELP...*


ALEXA: PUES. FOOL HELP ME OUT WITH THIS SHIT YEA? WHERES NATALIE?

DAISY: NOT HERE YET...

ALEXA: ALRIGHT...CALL HER UP AND TELL HER I NEED HER HERE NOW?!

DAISY: RELAX FOOL...HERE LET ME HELP YOU...


*NATALIE WAS ALEXAS "ASSISTANT" SHE HELPED HER OUT WITH ALMOST EVERYTHING...SHE PUT THE ORDERS IN, SIGNED ALMOST ALL THE CHECKS THAT WERE SENT OUT. AND PRETTY MUCH WAS BETTER KNOWN AS THE CO-MANAGER.SHE WAS 27. SHE WAS HALF MEXICAN WITH SHORT DARK HAIR. DARK BROWN EYES, NICE SMILE & WORE GLASSES. SHE WAS REALLY NICE. SHE WAS BEST FRIENDS WITH ALEXAS MOM WHEN THEY WERE SMALLER...AND WAS THERE FOR ALEXA WHEN HER MOM DIED*


ALEXA: YOU HUNGRY?


*NATALIE WALKED IN WITH A HUGE BOX*


NATALIE: YES I AM?!

ALEXA: NATALIE!? IM SOOO HAPPY YOU’RE HERE, I NEED YOUR HELP

NATALIE: HOW ABOUT WE EAT FIRST CUS IM STARVING.

DIASY: I SAY WE GO TO DENNYS OR SOMETHING.


*NATALIE PULLED OUT 3 PLASTIC CONTAINERS FROM THE BOX AND SET THEM ON THE DESK*


NATALIE: THOUGHT WAY AHEAD OF YOU DAISY...HERE. THERES ALL YOU CAN EAT.

ALEXA: WHAT WILL I DO WITHOUT YOU NATALIE?

NATALIE: HOPEFULLY NOTHING. THAT WAY I KNOW YOU NEED ME....

ALEXA: *LOL* LETS EAT...


*THE REST OF THE DAY WENT BY AS IT USUALLY WOULD. A FEW CUSTOMERS WOULD COME IN. AND ALEXA STAYED AT THE DESK WORKING ON HER HOMEWORK. SHE GOT OUT OF SCHOOL HER SOPHOMORE YR AND WENT INTO HOMESCHOOLING SO SHE COULD HELP RUN THE BRIDAL STORE BETTER. SHE MISSED HER HOMEGIRLS A LOT, BUT SHE PROMISED HER MOM SHE’D TAKE OVER THE BUISSNESS…THE WORST PART FOR HER THO WAS THAT SHE COULDN’T SPEND MORE TIME WITH HER BF ROBERT. HE WAS 18. TALL, PELON WITH A FEW TATTOOS ON HIS BODY; HE WAS GOOD LOOKING. BROWN EYES. SEXY SMILE & A SEXY WORKED OUT BODY. ALEXA HAD BEEN WITH HIM FOR 8 MONTHS.*


*IT WAS AROUND 1PM. THE STORE PHONE RANG AND ALEXA ANSWERED IT*



ALEXA: MARIES BRIDAL. THIS IS ALEXA. HOW CAN I HELP YOU?

ROBERT: WHATS UP BEAUTIFUL

ALEXA: *LOL* HEY BABE. AND THIS MIRACLE YOU CALL THE STORE INSTEAD OF MY CELL?

ROBERT: YOU DIDNT PICK UP MIJA… I STARTED GETTING WORRIED...

ALEXA: WHAT? *SHE STARTED LOOKIN IN HER PURSE* OH SHIT, I FORGOT MY PHONE AT HOME…*LOL* SORRY BABE, WHY WHAT HAPPENED?

ROBERT: NOTHING MAMAS, I WAS JUST CALLING TO SEE IF YOU WERE HUNGRY. CAN I TAKE YOU OUT TO EAT MIJA?

ALEXA: OH, IM SORRY SWEETIE BUT I CANT…I HAVE TO CATCH UP ON MY H.W.

ROBERT: SERIO? *SOUNDING ALL SAD* ALRITE THAT’S COOL MIJA. YOU WANNA DO SOMETHING LATER?

ALEXA: ROBERT, YOU KNOW I’D LOVE TO. PERO I DON’T THINK ILL BE ABLE TO…IM KINDA TIRED FROM LAST NITE…YOU UNDERSTAND RITE MIJO?

ROBERT: YEA BABY, YOU DON’T HAVE TO EXPLAIN ANYTHING TO ME…CALL ME WHEN YOU GET TO YOUR HOUSE SO THAT I KNOW YOU GOT HOME SAFE…

ALEXA: ALRIGHT; ILL GET HOME LIKE AROUND 8:30-9:00. SO ILL CALL YOU AROUND THAT TIME.

ROBERT: ALRIGHT, PUES I LOVE YOU MIJA.

ALEXA: UM, ME TOO…

ROBERT: I MEAN IT MIJA…

ALEXA: I KNOW YOU DO…

ROBERT: ALRITE, PUES …LOVE YOU AND ILL SEE YOU LATER…

ALEXA: ALRIGHT..BYE.


SHE HUNG UP AND SHE FELT LIKE CRYING, SHE REALLY MISSED HIM; SHE HADNT SEEN HIM FOR ABOUT 5 DAYS. ITS NOT THAT SHE DIDN’T LOVE HIM, BUT IT WAS HARD FOR HER TO SAY IT BACK, SHE WASN’T SURE IF HE REALLY MEANT IT; EVEN THO SHE TRIED TO BELIEVE HIM…SHE WAS JUST SCARED OF GETTING HURT. DAISY WALKED UP TO HER.


DAISY: YOU ALRIGHT ALEXA?

ALEXA: YEA…IM FINE….

DAISY: AYE FOOL, WHY DON’T YOU CALL HIM UP AND GO WITH HIM. NATALIE AND I CAN TAKE CARE OF THE STORE FOR A BIT…NO ONE IS REALLY COMING IN

ALEXA: I CANT…I MEAN. I HAVE A LOT OF H.W, IF NATALIE WASN’T HERE I’D PROBABLY BREAK DOWN….SHES HELPING ME WITH THE STORE PAPERS WHILE I TRY TO DO SOME H.W

DAISY: ANYTHING I CAN DO?

ALEXA: YEA…CAN YOU BRING ME A COKE FROM THE BACK, PLZ

DAISY: *SMILES* ALRIGHT…ILL BE BAK


ALEXA TRIED TO FOCUS ON HER H.W, BUT SHE WAS SO SAD AND EXHAUSTED. SHE SAT AT THE DESK FOR ALMOST THE REST OF THE DAY WORKING ON H.W AND ANSWERING THE PHONE…BY 8PM. THEY LOCKED UP THE STORE AND NATALIE GAVE ALEXA A RIDE HOME*


NATALIE: HERE WE ARE MIJA…YOU GONNA BE ALRIGHT?

ALEXA: YEA. DON’T WORRY ABOUT ME NATALIE…

NATALIE: I HAVE TO WORRY. YOURE LIKE A DAUGHTER TO ME…

ALEXA: *LOL* ILL SEE YOU AT THE STORE TOMORROW MORNING.

NATALIE: DON’T WORRY ABOUT THE DOCUMENTS ALEXA, ILL FINISH THEM UP OK. JUST GET YOUR REST.

ALEXA: THANKS. NOW I HAVE TO FIND SOMETHING TO EAT AND RUN OFF TO BED. CALL ME IF ANYTHING COMES UP YEA.

NATALIE: I WILL…TAKE CARE…


*SHE HUGGED NATALIE THEN MADE HER WAY TO THE FRONT DOOR, SHE GRABBED HER KEYS, OPENED THE DOOR, AND WALKED INTO HER HOUSE. NO ONE WAS HOME; SHE WENT TO HER ROOM AND GRABBED HER CELL SHE HAD 3 VOICEMAILS, 2 FROM ROBERT; FROM THE MORNING AND THE OTHER ONE FROM HER HOMEGIRL JESSICA TELLING HER TO CALL HER BACK. SHE GRABBED THE PHONE AND CALLED HER UP *


ALEXA: HEY FOOL….

JESSICA: ALEXA. OMG GOOD THING YOU CALLED. UM THERES SOMETHING I NEED TO TELL YOU.

ALEXA: WHATS UP, WHAT HAPPENED?

JESSICA: LOOK. *SHE SOUNDED ALL SAD, LIKE SHE HAD BEEN CRYING* MIJA, YOU KNOW YOU’RE MY HOMEGIRL, MORE LIKE MY SISTER. BUT FOOL. I DID SOMETHING THAT I FUCKEN REGRET…

ALEXA: WHAT HAPPENED?! ARE YOU ALRIGHT?

JESSICA: *CRYING* IM SOOOO SORRY ALEXA…YOU KNOW I LOVE YOU TO DEATH; YOURE MY BEST HOMEGIRL. BUT---

ALEXA: JESSICA, WHATS WRONG?

JESSICA: I WENT TO CHRIS’S HOUSE TODAY AND….WELL HE HAD A FEW FRIENDS OVER…AND ROBERT WAS THERE.

ALEXA: YEA, WHAT HAPPENED MIJA?

JESSICA: WE WERE ALL DRINKING, DANCING AND GETTING HIGH…AND WELL ONE THING LEAD TO ANOTHER AND SOMEHOW-------WELL…

ALEXA: MIJA, YOU KNOW YOU CAN TELL ME ANYTHING…WHAT HAPPENED? DID YOU PASS OUT?? DID CHRIS TRY TO DO SOMETHING TO YOU?? WHAT HAPPENED IS IT ROBERT?

JESSICA: *SHE STARTED CRYING EVEN MORE*…ALEXA ….IM SOOOOO SORRY…


*ALEXA KNEW IT WAS SOMETHING SERIOUS*


ALEXA: WHAT DID YOU DO?

JESSICA: ROBERT KISSED ME…AND WE ENDED UP IN CHRIS’ ROOM, ALEXA..YOU KNOW I WOULD NEVER HURT YOU..BUT---

ALEXA: WHAT?!! YOU FUCKED WITH ROBERT?!!!!!!!

JESSICA: ALEXA, IM SORRY?!!! I’D NEVER HURT YOU KNOW I WOULD NEVER DO ANYTHING LIKE THAT TO YOU BUT WE WERE BOTH SO HIGH AND WE WERE DRINKING ALOT---

ALEXA: JESSICA ARE YOU SERIOUS?! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT SHIT TO ME?!

JESSICA: ALEXA LISTEN TO ME!!

ALEXA: NAW, FUCK YOU JESSICA!! YOU FUCKED UP…*SHE STARTED CRYING*

JESSICA: ALEXA. PLZ, LET ME----


ALEXA HUNG UP AND SHE BURST INTO TEARS…SHE WAS SO HURT. SHE DIDN’T WANT JESSICA TO HEAR HER CRYING…HER PHONE STARTED RINGING. SHE TURNED IT OFF AND LAID BACK ON HER BED…IF HE REALLY LOVED HER, HE WOULDN’T HAVE CHEATED ON HER; ESPECIALLY WITH ONE OF HER CLOSEST HOMEGIRLS….
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Old 01-10-2008, 02:04 AM   #2
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eeeeeeee thats fucked up keep ir comin its good
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Old 01-10-2008, 02:19 AM   #3
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Old 01-10-2008, 03:29 AM   #4
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dam datz dirty style.....keep it comin hey if u want u could read ma story itz called "Crazy Rucaz N The Outsidez"
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Damn....Keep droppin those lines!!
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dammm that is so fuck up well keep droping those lines
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damn, he really fucked up...keep this comin
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*SHE LEFT HER PHONE OFF THE REST OF THE NITE BUT SHE COULDN’T GO TO SLEEP…SHE STAYED UP TIL 2AM THEN FINALLY DRIFTED OFF TO SLEEP… THE NEXT MORNING SHE WOKE UP AROUND 9AM. HER EYES WERE RED & SWOLLEN…SHE TURNED ON HER PHONE AND HAD 10 DIFFERENT VOICEMAILS, OVER 30 TXT MESSAGES FROM BOTH JESSICA AND ROBERT, SHE ERASED THEM WITHOUT EVEN BOTHERING TO LISTEN OR LOOK AT THEM…SHE GOT INTO THE SHOWER AND LET THE WARM WATER SPLASH ONTO HER SKIN…SHE WAS SO HURT. BUT SHE DIDN’T WANT ANYONE TO KNOW HER BUISNESS….*


ONCE SHE GOT OUT OF THE SHOWER SHE WENT INTO HER ROOM PUT ON HER NB RIDAZ CD AND STARTED GETTING READY FOR WORK; FIRST BLOWDRYING HER LONG HAIR THEN STRAIGHTING IT…SHE CURLED THE TIPS AND DID HER MAKE-UP…IT WAS ALMOST 10:45 WHEN SHE FINISHED GETTING DRESSED. SHE HAD ON A BLACK STRAPLESS SHIRT, SOME TIGHT CHARCOAL DRESS PANTS AND HER BLACK HEELS ON. SHE LOOKED REALLY PRETTY. SHE GRABBED HER KEYS AND PURSE AND WAS HEADED OUT THE FRONT DOOR…


JUSTIN: AY, ALEXA.


SHE TURNED AROUND AND HER OLDER BROTHER JUSTIN WAS STANDING IN THE KICTHEN…


ALEXA: HEY…QUE PASO?

JUSTIN: *HE THREW SOME KEYS AT HER & SHE GRABBED THEM* START MY CAR. IM TAKING YOU TO WORK..

ALEXA: WHAT? NATALIE IS PICKING UP.

JUSTIN: NO. SHE SAID SHE WAS CALLING YOU BUT YOU HAVE YOU PHONE TURNED OFF SO SHE CALLED THE HOUSE…WAKING ME UP…SHE SAID SHE NEEDS TO STOP AT THE BANK AND DOESN’T HAVE ENOUGH TIME TO STOP BY…SO IM TAKING YOU….

ALEXA: ALRIGHT…


*SHE WENT TO HER DRIVEWAY AND GOT INTO HER BROTHERS SILVERADO. IT WAS FIXED UP REALLY NICE…SHE TURNED IT ON AND SAT ON THE PASSANGERS SEAT…HER BROTHER WALKED OUT OF THE HOUSE & LOCKED THE FRONT DOOR. HER BROTHER WAS 21, TALL WORKED OUT BODY WITH A FEW TATTOOS ON HIS ARMS…HE HAD HIS LAST NAME “GAETA” TATTOOED ON HIS BACK, HE HAD LIGHT BROWN EYES, SHAVED HEAD AND SHORT GOATEE*


JUSTIN: SHIT IT LOOKS LIKE ITS GONNA RAIN…*HE PUT THE CAR IN REVERSE*

ALEXA: WHERES DAD?

JUSTIN: YOU KNOW WHERE HES AT… LIKE ALWAYS AT WORK…FUCK! *HE SLAMMED THE BREAKS*

ALEXA: WHAT?!!

JUSTIN: YOUR FUCKEN BOYFRIEND JUST PULLED UP. HES LUCKY I DIDN’T FUCKEN CRASH INTO HIS PIECE OF SHIT CAR!! *HE ROLLED THE WINDOW DOWN* AY FUCKER YOU SEE ME BACKING UP…WTF?!


SHE LOOKED IN THE REAR VIEW MIRROR, ROBERT GOT OUT OF THE CAR AND WALKED TOWARDS HER BROTHERS SIDE….


ALEXA: TELL HIM TO LEAVE...AND LET’S JUST GO.

JUSTIN: *HE LOOKED OVER AT ALEXA*WHY WHAT HAPPENED? DID HE DO SOMETHING?

ROBERT: AY, FOOL SORRY, BUT I JUST NEED TO TALK TO ALEXA REAL QUICK.

JUSTIN: ALEXA…

ALEXA: *SHE LOOKED OVER AT JUSTIN AND THEN AT ROBERT* SORRY BUT I HAVE TO OPEN THE STORE…SO BACK YOUR CAR UP…

ROBERT: ALEXA. MIJA WE NEED TO TALK.

ALEXA: NO I DON’T HAVE SHIT TO TALK TO YOU ABOUT. JUSTIN LETS GO.

JUSTIN: I CANT THE FUCKEN CAR IS IN THE WAY?!

ROBERT: ALEXA. MIJA. PLZ.

ALEXA: I ALREADY FUCKEN TOLD YOU. MOVE YOUR FUCKEN CAR SO MY BROTHER CAN BACK THE FUCK UP?!!!!

JUSTIN: ROBERT, LOOK ESE BACK YOUR CAR UP. I NEED TO GET GOING.

ROBERT: CAN I JUST TALK TO YOU ALEXA. PLZ. MIJA.

ALEXA: I ALREADY TOLD YOU NO! JUSTIN LETS GO.

JUSTIN: ALRITE RELAX. ROBERT MOVE YOUR RIDE ESE…

ROBERT: YOURE GONNA BE A BITCH ABOUT IT ALEXA?! WTF, STEP THE FUCK OUT THE TRUCK, SO WE CAN FUCKEN TALK…*HE WENT AROUND TO THE PASSENGERS SIDE AND HE TRIED TO OPEN THE DOOR*

JUSTIN: WATCH THE WAY YOU FUCKEN TALK TO MY SISTER ESE. BACK YOUR FUCKEN CAR UP!!!!

ROBERT: ALEXA. GET THE FUCK OUT OF THE CAR.!!*HE STARTED BANGING THE CAR DOOR*

ALEXA: ROBERT MOVE YOUR FUCKEN CAR OR JUSTIN WILL FUCKEN BACK UP INTO IT!!!!!! MOVE AND LEAVE ME THE FUCK ALONE!!!

ROBERT: *HE STARTED BANGING THE WINDOW* OPEN THE FUCKEN DOOR.

JUSTIN: AY WTF ESE. THAT’S MY FUCKEN TRUCK! *HE STEPPED OUT OF THE TRUCK AND WALKED UP TO ROBERT*

ALEXA:SHIT…*SHE UNLOCKED THE DOOR & STEPPED OUT*

JUSTIN: *ALL UP IN ROBERTS FACE* YOU GOT A FUCKEN PROBLEM ESE. DON’T FUCKEN DISRESPECT MY SISTER. NOW GET INTO YOUR FUCKEN CAR AND GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE….

ROBERT: I JUST NEED TO TALK TO HER.

ALEXA: HOLD ON JUSTIN. GIVE ME A MINUTE WITH HIM, YEA…

JUSTIN: WHAT? NO GET IN THE TRUCK?!!

ALEXA: JUSTIN…JUST GIVE ME A MIN. SO WE CAN GET GOING…

JUSTIN: *MEAN MUGGING ROBERT* YOU SURE??

ALEXA: YEA…

JUSTIN: ALRITE…PUES. ILL WAIT IN THE TRUCK…*HE WENT & SAT DOWN IN HIS TRUCK…HE LIT UP A CIGARETTE AND WAITED FOR ALEXA*

ALEXA: WHAT DO YOU WANT? HUH? ITS OVER…IM THROUGH WITH YOU. YOU THINK IM GONNA FORGIVE YOU AFTER WHAT YOU DID?!! LEAVE ME THE FUCK ALONE.

ROBERT: *HE WALKED OVER TO ALEXA* YOU GONNA BE A BITCH ABOUT THIS SHIT WITHOUT HEARING MY SIDE OF THE STORY?!!

ALEXA: I DON’T NEED TO HEAR SHIT FROM EITHER ONE OF YOU…RUN OFF WITH HER. AND LEAVE ME THE FUCK ALONE…I HOPE IT WAS WORTH IT…

ROBERT: *HE GRABBED ALEXA BY THE HAIR AND PULLED HER TO THE END OF THE DRIVEWAY* LISTEN TO ME.

ALEXA:LET ME GO!!!

ROBERT: *PUTTING HIS HAND OVER ALEXAS MOUTH* SHUT THE FUCK UP…YOURE COMING WITH ME.

ALEXA: *SHE MANGAGED TO GET LOOSE FROM HIS GRIP AND STARTED YELLING FOR JUSTIN* GET OFF OF ME ROBERT?!!!! JUSTIN?!!!!!!

ROBERT: SHUT THE FUCK UP?!! *HE BACK SLAPPED HER AND SHE FELL BACK*


*JUSTIN STEPPED OUT OF HIS TRUCK AND RAN TO THE END OF THE DRIVEWAY; HE SAW ALEXA ON THE FLOOR*


JUSTIN: AY WTF ESE?! *HE WENT TO THE BACK OF HIS TRUCK AND GRABBED A BAT*

ROBERT: AY MIND YOUR OWN FUCKEN BUISNESS!!

JUSTIN: *HE WENT & HELPED ALEXA UP* YOU ALRIGHT?? *HE SAW SHE WAS BLEEDING* NO ESE YOU FUCKED UP…ALEXA IS MY BUISNESS.*HE WALKED TOWARDS ROBERT & HE RAN TO HIS CAR….AND LOCKED THE DOORS… *

ALEXA: JUSTIN. NO!! JUST LET HIM GO…

JUSTIN: FUCK THAT?!! *HE WENT TO HIS CAR AND STARTED SMASHING HIS HEADLIGHTS…* YOU WANNA FUCKEN DISRESPECT MY SISTER…THEN YOU THINK YOU HAVE THE FUCKEN BALLS TO HIT HER…MAN UP ESE?! GET THE FUCK OUT OF YOUR CAR?!!!*HE BANGED THE CAR WINDOW HARD WITH THE BAT MAKING THE GLASS CRACK….*

ALEXA: JUSTIN, STOP IT…JUST LET HIM GO!!!!!


ROBERT STARTED HIS CAR AND BACKED UP….BURNING HIS TIRES AS HE SPED OFF


JUSTIN: FUCKEN LEVA. ALEXA! WTF DID HE DO??!! *WALKIN UP TO ALEXA*

ALEXA: NOTHING. DON’T WORRY ABOUT IT…

JUSTIN: AY. NAW FUCK THAT. GET IN THE TRUCK…NOW!! *HE TOSSED THE BAT IN THE BACK AND GOT IN HIS TRUCK*

ALEXA: *SHE GOT IN THE TRUCK AND CLOSED THE DOOR* FORGET ABOUT IT JUSTIN…PLZ.

JUSTIN: HE FUCKEN CHEATED ON YOU HUH?

ALEXA: NO…JUSTIN. PLZ, ITS NOT EVEN A BIG DEAL.

JUSTIN: NAW, THIS SHITS PERSONAL. IM NOT GONNA LET HIM PUT HIS HANDS ON YOU LIKE THAT…*HE BACKED UP ALL FAST THEN SPED OFF TOWARDS THE OPPOSITE DIRECTION OF THE SHOP*

ALEXA: WHERE ARE YOU GOING!! I HAVE TO OPEN THE STORE?!!!!

JUSTIN: RELAX ALEXA…IM GONNA HANDLE THIS SHIT…

ALEXA: JUSTIN. ITS NOT A BIG DEAL…ALRITE…LOOK, JUST TAKE ME TO THE STORE AND ILL HANDLE IT. DON’T WORRY ABOUT IT.

JUSTIN: LOOK. IM GONNA DROP YOU OFF AT THE STORE…IF THAT FUCKEN PUTO EVEN STEPS FOOT ON THAT BLOCK ILL HAVE HIS ASS KILLED AND DUMPED IN A FUCKEN ALLEY ON THE OTHER SIDE OF TOWN…

ALEXA: HE WONT…TRUST ME…

JUSTIN: *HE MADE A U-TURN* ALEXA…IM GONNA PICK YOU UP WHEN YOU CLOSE THE SHOP…ALRIGHT.

ALEXA: DON’T MAKE THIS A BIG DEAL??! ILL HAVE NATALIE DROP ME OFF ON HER WAY HOME…

JUSTIN: NO! IM PICKING YOU UP, IF YOU DON’T WANT ANYTHING TO HAPPEN, THEN JUST DO WHAT I FUCKEN SAY ALRITE? LOOK , I KNOW YOU THINK ITS NONE OF MY BUISNESS, I RESPECT YOUR PRIVACY ALEXA, BUT THIS TIME IM INVOLVED AND IF I SEE THAT FUCKER, TRUST ME, ILL FUCKEN KILL HIM.

ALEXA: *SHE SIGHED* …ALRITE…FINE, PICK ME UP….BUT JUST DROP IT…ILL HANDLE IT.

JUSTIN: JUST GIVE ME THE WORD AND ILL HAVE HIS ASS TOSSED ON THE OTHER SIDE OF TOWN.

ALEXA: TRUST ME IT ISNT WORTH IT…


*THEY ARRIVED TO THE STORE 10 MIN LATE…DAISY WAS OUTSIDE WAITING*
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