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Respect my grind, protect your mind cuz im bouta unwind
Like a spool n thread, leave this fool dead in a toolshed
Wit 6 shots from the M-A-G, 3 clips leave em all empty
Don’t tempt me cuz homicides my recipe, don’t mess wit me
You say you’re an ese but cant write for shit
You say your banger but cant fight for shit
You got K.O.’d 3-0 to ODM, get off Brownpride u cant hang wit them
Niggas like you get a green light, u never shot a glock only cocked em
Im shot callin like I live in a cockpit, n im ok but my flow sick
I stay fresh like orbit, no homo but I got u cravin more dick
I got the best bud my shits potent, bitin ass nigga all ur lines is quoted
All my lines is snorted, ill jump u n leave u poor like a mortgage
I could ryme all day this is never ending, if u sayin u str8 that line is bending
Come on nigga did u ever win a battle? Wats the point in sending
We aint biased we jus kno good rap, if ur verse was a boomerang it wouldn’t comeback
Take ur ABC rymes back to 3rd grade, cuz u wouldn’t put in work even if u got paid
A-B-C, ur as easy as 1-2-3
U don’t know no beef, ur flows to cheap
I flow to no beat and put this hoe to sleep
U afraid of gays like u were touched by m Jackson
You talk a lot of shit but you aint ready for action
Only thing you poppin off is cap guns
You wanna talk about gays, better watch what you say
Cuz I’ll come right over there and fuckstart your face
And we all know your name Must Crave More Gays
Tryna justify a way to fuck wit old aje
Only way you could kill me is of Old Age
Im a symbol of death like when you see a vulture
I aint tryna to kill yout ass its more fun to torture
I don’t use a gun I use a knife like the joker
I don’t hit u right away but believe I’ll watch ya
Snatch u in yo sleep like “BITCH I GOT YA”
Take ya to the desert and let the boys stomp ya
Hold ur ass down and cut you open like a doctor
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"F.O.E.'s in the building, FUCK YA'LL FEELINS!!!"
voting is fair, u just dont like u got ko'd 3-0...if u come right you win battles...
As far as this battle, if i were MCMG, i'd say AJE is disqualified for feeding off the verse...
Besides that...it wasnt too close, i gotta say, MCMG came kinda weak, but had better hits in his lines...
OLD AJE, a majority of ya verse was fed off MCMG's verse, rolling with the "gay" shit too much, and again killing him, anyways...a breakdown can be provided if needed...
i didnt feed, i barely paid attention to his flow. the ABC i quoted from michael cuz thats what came on the radio. forgot he used it but i can see it how it looks.
the gay shit is whatever, thats fair game. i didnt feed on that, i threw it in cuz it rhymes. and i never said anything about killing. i even put i aint tryna kill him. but whatevs, it is what is.
battles? hmmmm lets see, i took out bluesteel, IYOK, some small time faget named wurdz, dusted the magic mexican hahaha not to mention last time i said something to insyt he didnt say shit back... hahaha but now all the sudden he wants to battle. thats comedy
idc who votes, let the people decide. im just having fun.
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"F.O.E.'s in the building, FUCK YA'LL FEELINS!!!"
MCMG:
Instead of taking lines and tellin u whats good, i'ma tell u what you're doing wrong...
Ok, you took a long time to throw your first hit...in a battle it should be constant hits back to back, so in a bar like this
I've got the sharpened pencil point
Put to old aje's skin and his nerves disjoint
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So the first line is a set up for the follow up line, which is fine, u just want it to be constant throughout the verse, almost like a pattern...
Another thing, dont worry so much on dealing physical damage in a track, not everything needs to be set "literally" use metaphors like...
I'm a breath of steam to this old faggot
Make his raw spit spoiled-when i bag-it
So u callin him a faggot and statin u breathing steam and when u bag it up u spoiling his style/spit/delivery whatever u feeling...anyways just a quick example
And maintain witty/comedic hits...anything to shame your opponent will win a battle, and if you can do it better in a knowledgable way people will respect the effort you're putting into your lyrics...
Old Aje:
Ight mayne, same thing for you, work on implying direct hits, use metas and wordplay...
Play off his name...
MCMG, turn his name into an acronym or just rearrange the letter and diss him with it...whenever u can flip anothers style/name/appearance go for it, anything to give your a creative advantage will help win a battle...
Use the examples i mentioned above for metaphors and hits, hits need to be contant throughout your battle verse and metaphors make for witty attacks that will show your intelligence and the way you can interpret it to damage someones cred or ego...
So with that...hope it helps...and for the breakdown on voting...
MCMG had more consistent hits and had better vocab and the other elements, although not all were present...
OLD AJE, step it up mayne u got potential just gotta rework your approach...
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