~MI VIDA LOCA~

[LA_LATINA]

Dis is my 1 story so hope yall like it....

Juan~aka~Creeper-6'4,hella buff,fade,dark brown eyez Nena's vato,18 years old sweet and respectful(cough**bullshit**cough)

Lorena~aka~Nena-5'5,short blak hair,blak eyez,big ass n tits,smart ass,kool chica 16 years old

Maribel~aka~Flaka-5'4 green eyez blak hair nice ass n big boobs,Nena's homita since un chingo...16 years old

Antonio~aka~Pelon-6'2,hazel eyez buff as hell big o booty 4 a chicano(lolz)18 years old big time player...


House party....
PELON:wassup ma'..
FLAKA:que pasa mijo,i havent seen u un chingo...(her ass is hella drunk she's been drinkin coronas, and took some tequila shots)
Flaka has had a big-o crush on him..
PELONgives her a tight ass hug)did u miss me?
FLAKA:hell naw
PELON:aww fuck u then,i came all da way here just 2 see ur ass...
FLAKA:naw mijo im just fuckin around wit u..(regrets sayin dat shit)i did miss u lotz
PELON:better..
NENA:OMG Pelon?
PELON: wassup mija wut u been up to?
NENA:nun chillin...O hey i gotz 2 roll Creeper is waitin 4 me @ su casa
PELON:Bye mija ill talk 2 u alratoz

PELON:r u cold mija(askin Flaka)
FLAKA:yeah,u wanna go inside...
PELON:sure..
its to fuckin crowded in da livin room so they go 2 a room..
Pelon closed da door behind them,Flaka started 2 dance all freaky n shit
PELON:stop dancin ur makin horny(lolz)
FLAKA:am i
she tried 2 dance towards him but fell on top of him
Flaka started kissin on his neck,she took his shirt off,Pelon laid her down and took her shirt off,then her bra,he was suckin on her nipples,laka was lettin out loud moans
FLAKA:damn mijo dont stop...
He took her skirt n pannies off,he sticks it in...

A few days later at Flaka's house
NENA:damn gurl i cant beleive yall ur freak on
FLAKA:i know but its fucked up up cause i cant remember like nethin really,i just woke up next to him but naked!!!
NENA:ur stupid...lolz
FLAKA:u wanna go get somethin 2 eat?
NENA:yea,i just need 2 get some money 4rm my purse, ok
FLAKA:k

They were both walkin to Flaka's car when Flaka almost fell
NENA:OMG or u ok
FLAKA:yea is just i felt kinda dizzy right now,pero im fine
NENA:r u sure mija?
FLAKA:yea..
NENAh shit mija wut if ur.....
FLAKA:hell naw...(started thinkin,she did lay w/pelon n dont remember shit,so she dont know if he used a condom or not...OMG...lets go 2 da store

FLAKA:damn mija which fuckin shit do i get?
NENA:damn i dunno..wut about dis 1..
FLAKA:umm....naw its 2 cheap it probably dont work..lolz
NENA:ur stupid....how bout dis 1
FLAKA:i dunno.. just get 1 n rlets roll cause i wanna know already, n yeah take dat 1,an da other cheap 1
NENA:i thought u said it wasnt gonna work...
FLAKA:well... maybe is da other way...look i dunno, just get da damn thing i wanna leave!!!
NENAk,ok

Flaka's casa
NENA:come on tell me wut it says!!!
FLAKA:OMG..................


should i go on.....

[theloveone]

ey keep it coming plzzzzzz it good so far [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

[LA_LATINA]

FLAKA:I aint pregnat!!!
Nena gives her a hug
NENA:OMG,im so happy 4 u...but i have 2 admit it wouldve been nice 2 have a lil'pelon runnin around da house.
FLAKA:i know but im still 16 i can wait.
NENA:well newayz wut r u gonna do later?
FLAKA:i dunno well ill prolly go 2 my homeboys party,u wanna come
NENA:hellz yea,well i have to go n get ready
FLAKAk alratoz,take care.
NENA:yeah mija u 2.

Nena calls Creeper
CREEPER:hello
NENA:wassup mijo,wut u doin
CREEPERh umm...nothin
GURLS VOICE:come on im waitin...
NENA:wut da fuck,who da fuck was dat bitch!!
CREEPERh nobody..listen i gotta go.
NENA:bitch dat better no-
Creeper clicked on her.

Nena was cryin she was gonna go to his casa.When she got there she was hella pissed,she knocked on da door.
NENA:Juan get ur fuckin ass out here
she was punchin da door,then some hoe opened da door.
HOE:y da fuck do u gotta come yellin n shit i-
Nena couldnt help it she punched her n started beatin da hell out of her
Creeper came runnin
CREEPER:damn mija chill
NENA:fuck u pinche puto
He tried to pull her away, but Nena was to pissed off,she kept kickin and throwin punches @ him,she really loved Creeper,she tought he was da one
Creeper smacked her accross da face looked at him in da eyes
NENA:mijo i loved u
CREEPER:u LOVED me,wut da fuck is dat supposed 2 mean
NENA:its over pendejo,i aint gonna put up w/dis kinda shit
CREEPER:NO...im sorry i really did-
Nena slapped him
NENAh im sorry to i didnt mean to slap u,sorry my ass puto.
Nena went towards da car,Creeper tried 2 hold her back
CREEPER:no baby i love u im sorry
NENA:dont baby me puto,i aint yo lady no more.
CREEPER:NENA!!!
Nena turned on da car,n Creeper got in front of it
CREEPER:mija dont go,look i knowi fucked up bad,im sorry.
NENA:is to late,i should've heard my homitas u were just another player...
CREEPER:Fuck u then
Nena stepped on da gas n left.

Flaka calls Nena
NENA:hello...(she was still shaky)
FLAKA:aww shit mija wats wrong,wut da fuck did Creeper do dis time,i dunno y u put w/his shit
NENA:well guess wut its over between me n him
FLAKA:wut...look my bad i didnt mean to-
NENA:naw its ok he aint da only vato around,but u know i really loved Juan.
FLAKA:i know,do u still wanna come 2 da party
NENA:i dunno..
FLAKA:come on ,u can 4get bout dat shit
NENA:well ...ok
FLAKA:can u come pick me up in an hour?
NENA:yeah..well alratoz
FLAKA:alratoz..

Nena takes a shower n does her hair,she curls da ends out,she wears a cute blak tube top,n some white capris,w/some sandals
Nena calls Flaka
FLAKA:hello
NENA:hey r u ready
FLAKA:yea
NENAk,ill be there in 20 min.
FLAKAk mija
NENA:alratoz

Flaka was wearing a pink cute shirt w/some white jeans,
and some jordans,and her hair was straiten out
Nena knocks on da door
NENA:hey r u ready
FLAKA:almost
NENA:damn why u takin long,tryin 2 look good 2 impress somebody?
FLAKA:nooo...
NENA:sure..well hurry up!!!

At da party....

[LA_LATINA]

thanx mija,im glad u like it them, [img]/images/graemlins/smirk.gif[/img]well ill try 2 keep on writin,
alratoz...

[LA_LATINA]

As soon as they walked in this firme lookin vato was checkin out Nena
VATOamn homez look @ dat hyna over there
OTHER VATO:Orale shes hella fine,but dats Creeper's lady though
But he didnt listen he kept starin @her..

FLAKA:damn theres hella fine ass vatos up in here
NENA:4 realz...
FLAKA:i wonder wheres Pelon?
NENA:I dun-oh shit
FLAKA:wut?
NENA:Creeper's here....FUCK!!!Look i cant stay...
FLAKA:no mija lets chill lil bit,pliz...
NENA:ima go outside though i cant see his ass no more
FLAKAk

When Nena walked outside da vato followed her
VATO:hey...chula por que tan aprisa?
NENAh..umm(she couldnt even talk he was just 2 damn fine)
VATO:mind if i chill wit u
NENA:sure mijo..
VATO:Im Ruben..
Ruben-6'4,pelon ear pierced,honey lookin eyez,firme vato
NENA:im Lorena but my peeps call me Nena
RUBEN:so do u got a man
NENA:Oh ...(her eyez got watery)
RUBENoohh mija im sorry i didnt mean to..
NENA:naw its koo
RUBEN:im sorry..(he gave her a hug!!!!!)
Nena felt butterflies n shit in her stomach,he smelled so damn good....Nena felt like she was in da clouds
RUBEN:r u gonna be ok chula?
NENA:yea mijo thanx...

Creeper saw they were huggin so he went 2 wut da fuck was going on
CREEPER:ey wut da fuck Lorena
Nena pulled away from Ruben n looked up
NENA:Juan wut da hell do u want?
CREEPER:que chingaos estas aciendocon este...
NENA:fuck u didnt i say we were thru
CREEPER:bitch it aint over till i say its over
RUBEN:say pendejo dont disrespect her like dat
CREEPER:WUT!!(he got in his face)
RUBEN:I said dont disrespect like dat..PENDEJO
Creeper punched him but Ruben ducked and puched him
PELON:ey wut da fuck is going on(he was trying to pull them apart)
Nena grabed Ruben
NENA:Mijo pliz STOP...
Ruben was pissed off but he listened to her neway
RUBEN:mija lets bounce..
NENAk mijo...

[chulababy1369]

hey ma this is a good azz story so far porfa keep writin okayz u gotz me hella hooked much propz alratozzzzz

[AdORaBLe1]

Damn GUrl UR sTORY it tIGHT kEEp DROppING tHEM liNES plZ !!

[theloveone]

damn keep it coming its getting very interesting [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

[lilangelface21]

write more!!

[MexicanChula760]

[img]/images/graemlins/ooo.gif[/img] [img]/images/graemlins/ooo.gif[/img] DAYUM!!!! i havent gotten on in a long asss time and now that i did the first story i lookd for was urs [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] esta story esta chida keep on writing gurl [img]/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img] i have to finish reading the last part of a gangster life thought pero i LOVE ur storys so keep writing for this one cuz i expect to read more [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] laters Rosie