~MI VIDA LOCA~

[SuReNo_StRaNgEr]

write some more gurl

[mzmorales805]

girl keep it coming...

[REASON]

youre story is pretty good .reminds me of back in the days girl but you need to write some more cus youre falling behind

[LA_LATINA]

Im BACK!!!Im fuckin sorry i took a long ass time [img]/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img] [img]/images/graemlins/crazy.gif[/img] [img]/images/graemlins/frown.gif[/img].....well heres more....

PAYASAh um....damnz mija i dont really feel good right now...esperarte...
NITA:NO...were gonna go right now!
PAYASAamnz Nita y u so mad at me?
NITA:um let me see pendeja....ur makin my bro's life a living hell...
PAYASA:U know wut u better shut da fuck up-
NITAlaughs)or wut...i dont think u want me to tell Chico wut i think...or do u?
PAYASA:Nita please dont say anything...i tought we were homitas...
NITA:dats wut i tought to...i know u love my bro n everything pero u gotta back off....he love-
PAYASA:Que?
NITA:Nada lets go...
PAYASA:No wut da fuck were u gonna say?
NITA:Nothin it jus slipped out im jus so fuckin mad...dont listen to me...andale apurale
PAYASArale pues.....wachale Nita...i really love ur brother mija
NITA:yea wutever*click*

CHICOamnz ese i fucked up bad...
PALE:que paso...
CHICOayasa walked in on me n Flaka..she saw us kissin...
PALE:Oh shit...serio?damnz ese aber come te las areglas...
CHICO:but i dont love Payasa...I love Flaka...la amo ese i caint stop thinkin bout her....i want her,i knew she wanted me to da way she kissed me....damnz she has da softest lips...
PALE:Ivan....Ivan(hit him in da head)
CHICO:ey wachale dat hurt pendejo(rubin his head)
PALE:So...wus up con tu hermana?
CHICO:Shes off limits!
PALE:come on homie...she needs alguien to take care of her...
CHICO:up til; now ive taken care of her...
PALE:aww...andale im for realz...i really like her
CHICO:que no!!!estas sordo or somethin guey?

At Flaka's casa...
NENA:Hey mija dont worry bout it...aww ur puppy is so cute..
FLAKA:i know...i cant beleive he gave it to me..
NENA:hes so sweet...
FLAKA:yea...i feel so fucked up doin dat shit to him(her eyes get watery)
NENA:Oh shit mija dont cry...it aint ur fault,hes da one dat kissed u right?
FLAKAero u dont uinderstand...i Love him 2...i kissed him....im so fuckin confused...i love Antonio to...
NENA:mija u gotta think this tru..Pelon has always been there for u...Chico is wit Payasa...
FLAKA:but dat-ur right...pero it hurts really bad...im gonna hurt them really bad...
NENAhugged her)dont worry bout it mija....were gonna get tru this shit together k?
FLAKA:thanx....
NENArale...

A week passed....
PAYASAat da hospital)damn they need to hurry up...
NITA:chill out...aint
DOC:Here are the results( hands them to Payasa)
NITAgrabs them from her)thank u very much...
PAYASA:ey bitch their my fuckin results let me see!!!!
NITAopens them)haha dats wut i tought...u dont have shit puta!
PAYASAacts surprised)WUT?im so-
NITA:Shut da fuck up...how u gonna do dat shit to my brother?
PAYASAlease dont tell him,give me a chance pls!(starts cryin)u dont know how much i love him Nita...id give my life for him...please!!!
NITA:Wutever jus take me home.....

Pelon calls Flaka...
FLAKA:hey mijo..(wiped her tears)
PELON:Maribel...r u cryin?wut happened?
FLAKA:i aint cryin i jus woke up....
PELONh..ok well Pale is havin a party yall wanna come?
FLAKA:hell yea mijo,ima tell Dimples
PLEONk mami pues ill go pick u up later,love u..
FLAKA:I love u to mijo...*click*
NENA:que paso?
FLAKA:u wanna go to a party?
NENArale...ima call Ruben..
FLAKA:yea...
NENA:fix ur self up really pretty k mija...forget bout all da shit dat happened,k?
FLAKA:thanx for being here for me Nena,i didnt know wut to do w/out u mija...
NENA:dont worry bout it i got ur back mija,dats wut homitas r here for right?(gave her a hug)ok pues bye i have to get ready...
FLAKA:bye...

Flaka took a shower put on a skirt n a cute tank top with some heels...she looked really pretty
PELON:u ready mija?
FLAKA:yea hold on....
PELONh shit....(looked at her up n down)mija u look so damn good(grabed her waist n kissed her)
FLAKAk, hahaha,mijo come on....
PELON:its cus(sighs)damnz im da luckiest vato
FLAKA:aww..thanx papi...
PELON:u smell so good....ey wachale wit them vatos ok...i dont want them all over u..
FLAKA:wutever..
PELON:wut?
FLAKA:nada im jus playin damz...
PELON:its cause i love u mija...i dont wanna loose u(grabs her face)ur da best thing dat has ever happened to me....(kissed her)

At da party....
FLAKA:Ima go con Nena ok mijo...
PELON:yea ma' ima chill wit pale n them...
There were a lot a hella fine vatos....
NENA:hey Flaka...damn u look firme mija...i bet all them hoodrats are jealous..
FLAKAlaughs)oh shit look whos here...
Chico n Payasa came in...
PAYASA:ima go talk to Flaka...
CHICO:where is she?
PAYASA:Alla...
CHICOk...
PAYASA:bye mijo..(she left)
PALE:que onda homes....
CHICO:she looks so fine...
PALE:Flaka?i know....is dat Payasa talkin to her?
CHICO:huh...oh yea......

Ill write more later..... [img]/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

[La_LoKa_JoCeLyN]

hey gurl thiz is tight keep on writing

[Sadangel213]

MAN WHYD YOU STOP THERE??????? WHAT YOU NEED TO DO IS KEEP TYPIN AND ADD MORE TO THIS STORY. PLZZZZZZZZZZ [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] 1

[AdORaBLe1]

Hey GiRl WaZz Up !! A Wat HappeN To ThE StORy !! KeEp DroPPing THem LiNEs PLZ !!

[LA_LATINA]

PAYASA:que onda
FLAKA:nada(looked away)
PAYASA:Flaka dont worry bout dat shit it was nothin,i aint gonna tell Pelon nada
FLAKA:Yea wutever
PAYASA:so were koo now?
FLAKA:i guess so....
NENA:So como estas?
PAYASA:im ok...do yall want some coronas?
NENA:uh...yea sure
PAYASAk ima get some
NENA:She seems perfectly fine to me...
FLAKAamn Chico looks fine
NENA:ugh...Flaka!
FLAKA:well its true...miralo
NENA:wutever...
PAYASA:here(hands them da coronas)
Its 1:00 in da morning n they r hella drunk

PELON:damnz mami...(holding Flaka)
FLAKA:hey baby(kisses him)
PELON:u wanna go
FLAKA:yea...im tired
PELONk
They leave n go to Flaka's...
PELONopens da door)Damn mija ive never seen u this drunk...
FLAKAholdin on to Pelon)i wanna go to sleep....hurry im tired...take me to my room
PELONk ma' chill.....(he takes her to da room)
FLAKA:dont leave me...stay(hugs him n he falls on top of her)I love u mijo...
Flaka kisses him slowly,he begins to go down n kiss her on her neck.He takes her top off n starts suckin on her breasts,she lets out loud moans.Pelon goes down n takes her skirt off,he kisses her tighs n takes her pannies off.Flaka takes his shirt off n he takes hes pants n boxers off n sticks it in slow....

Back at the party...
CHICO:lets go Payasa...(grabs her hand)
PAYASA:no..im havin fun...here get another corona
CHICO:no im already drunk..
PAYASA:come on da last one...
CHICO:fine then were leaving..
PAYASAk...
They get to Paysa's...
PAYASA:come in...
CHICO:i have to go get Nita from Pale's
PAYASAlz...
CHICO:Ill stay a little bit...
PAYASAk..
Chico goes to da couch n lays down...
PAYASA:No mijo come with me to my room..
CHICO:no ima stay here...
PAYASAlays on top of him)ima stay here wit u to...
Payasa starts kissin him..
CHICO:no mija..
PAYASA:y not
She starts teasin him takes off his shirt n sucks on his neck...
CHICO:hold on ima get a rubber...
PAYASA:i want u right now(grabs his dick)
CHICO:Oh shit mija...(he sticks it in)

NITA:damnz Chico is takin a long ass time..
PALE:theyre prolly bangin..
NITA:shut up...(hits him)
PALE:wut..dats wut we should we doing right now(grabs her waist)
NITA:ey puto chill out...
PALE:wut...i like u Nita..
NITA:que?
PALE:seriously...i love u..pero ur stupid ass bro dont let me have u
NITA:Mijo...(grabs his face)i love u to...(kisses him)
Pale holds her so tight,he starts kissing her neck..
NITA:no mijo...i aint ready
PALE:its ok...looks like ur bro aint gonna be here for a while...ven
NITA:where?
PALE:to my room..mija we aint gonna do nuthin..i jus wanna have u close to me
NITAh(smiles)ok...

[Sadangel213]

OH DAMNZ LOOKS LIKE ERYONE IS GETTIN SUM. CEPT FOR PALE. JEJE. WELL SHYT CHICO BETTER NOT HAVE GOTTEN PAYASA PREG. OR IMMA BE MAD. BUT SHYT KEEP WRITIN PLZ. 1

[x_traviesa13_x]

ya like sadangel said keep it comin girl dont stop and chico betta not get that bitch preg ok well props im out love and respect