~MI VIDA LOCA~

[La_LoKa_JoCeLyN]

HEY GURL THIS IS TIGHT KEEP ON WRITING

[sweetNshy]

I agree!!!!! [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

[AdORaBLe1]

Hey Wat Happen To the story ??? [img]/images/graemlins/confused.gif[/img] [img]/images/graemlins/confused.gif[/img] [img]/images/graemlins/confused.gif[/img]

[HoustonezDreamy]

Much propz keep tha story goin.

[Chapara3732]

hey I like your story! keep it comming

[LA_LATINA]

SORRY IM TAKIN LONG TO WRITE I GOT FINALS N SHIT,ILL WRITE TODAY..PROMISE!

[Mija_Lost_N_Luv]

Hey esa kepp on postin!

[LA_LATINA]

Heres more.....


FLAKA:who da fuck were they?!?!
TITO:dont worry bout it mija i promise it aint goin to stay like this....
PELON:dont cry baby(hesitating)i love u....
FLAKA:i love u too mijo
DOPEY:ey ese ya llegaron
They put Pelon on a stretcher and took him to da hospial...
Flaka calls Nena...
FLAKA:Nena?
NENA:que pasa?
FLAKA:Pelon got shot!(tears start streaming down her face)
NENA:Flaka dont cry....mija its gonna be ok,ima be there dont worry
FLAKAk..bye*click*
NENAcalls Dimples)ey do u think u could give me a ride to da hospital?
DIMPLES:sure pero wat happened?
NENA:Pelon got shot and Flaka is wit him
DIMPLES:WHAT!?!damnz ill be there ok
NENA:yea bye*click*

Nena and Dimples got to da hospital....
NENAhugged her)hows he doing?
FLAKA:i dont know...
DIMPLES:hey mija....Dont cry hes gonna be ok
FLAKA:u dont understand its my fault...he took da bullet for me....
NENA:he did dat becaue he loves u Flaka....
DIMPLES:yea mija dont worry bout it
FLAKA:dats da doctor.....Is Antonio ok?
DOC:Well hes in very critical condition,he got shot close to his heart and..
FLAKA:NO!!!hes going to be ok...right,RIGHT!?!?
DOClease calm down
DIMPLES:dont worry we'll take care of her....

A few hours later....
NENA:do u feel better...
FLAKA:yea....im so afraid
DIMPLES:look mija i really want to stay with u pero i gotta go to work..
NENA:yea Flaka i gotta go i didnt even tell my moms
FLAKA:no its ok yall can go...ima be fine
DIMPLES:R u sure cause maybe i can-
FLAKA:no yall should go...
DIMPLESk well were gonna go(hugs her)bye mija
FLAKA:bye

Flaka was sleeping in da couch...
VATO:r u ok mija?
FLAKAyawns)Antonio?
CHICO:its me Chico...
FLAKAlooks up)Ivan...(hugs him)
CHICOimples told me...mija im really sorry
FLAKA:i dont want him to die....
CHICO:do u still love him?
FLAKA:Chico i.....look right now i dont know....he took da damn bullet for me
CHICO:yea pero....forget it
FLAKA:Ivan(tears rolled down her cheeks)right now all i want is for him to be ok.....
CHICO:dont cry mija(held her close to him)I-
PAYASA:What da fuck r u doing?
FLAKA:Payasa calm down we aint-
PAYSA:NO u shut da fuck up! Pelon is in here dying n ur all up on MY vato
FLAKA:Payasa please...
PAYASA:N u know dat ima die too wut r u trying to do?U fuckin HOE!!!!!!!
Flaka punched her in her stomach n Payasa fell to da ground n Flaka started beatin on her
CHICO:Calm down(pulled flaka away)
FLAKA:im sorry is jus her bitc-(looked down)wat da fuck y is blood coming down from her legs
The doctor came...
DOC:what happened here...NURSE!
They took Payasa to a room
FLAKAh shit ima kill her too(fell to da ground)its all my fault i want to die!

[crazyxicana]

[img]/images/graemlins/shocked.gif[/img]keep it comin

[sweetNshy]

Damn this is good keep it comin'!!!!!!!!