~MI VIDA LOCA~

[LA_LATINA]

Thanx 4 replyin,keep on reading heres more....

They go to Rubens car,Ruben opens da door 4 Nena
NENA:where r we going?
RUBEN:wherever u want ma'
NENA:well im kinda hungry
RUBEN:do u want some tacos
NENA:hellz yeah!!!

They drive off n Creeper sees them he was sooooo damn
pissed,he was berly realisin wut he had lost,Pelon was still holdin him back
CREEPER:man foo'get off me
PELON:Creeper chill,she dont want u no more foo'u hurt her ass
CREEPER:wutever i need 2 smoke....
Creeper went to his car,he was listenin 2 music n smokin a blunt,he really did love Nena....
CREEPER:shit...i cant beleive dis shit's happenin...i love her ass more than my own life..(tears started streamin down his
face)

Pelon goes inside n sees Flaka talkin 2 some other vato
PELON:hey ma' wut u doin
FLAKAh hey....(got really happy)
VATO:is this ur lady
Pelon n Flaka answered @ da same time..
FLAKA:no
PELON:Yes
FLAKA:NO i aint...
PELON:well dats cause i havent asked u...DO U wanna be my lady?
FLAKAOMG)umm...(she was like in shock)
Pelon took her by da hand n took her outside where it wasnt loud.
PELON:well...do u
FLAKA:YES...
Pelon gave her a big-o hug n lifted her up(u know like in them novelas n shit)They kissed...n kissed...n kissed(they needed to get a room seriously!!!)

Nena n Ruben were thru eatin n were ouside in a bench..
RUBEN:so how long were u n him 2gether?
NENA:4 about 2 years
RUBENamn...so u put w/his ass for dat long?
NENA:yup..he wasnt alwayz like dat u know...@ first he was sweet n would treat me with hella good respect,i just dunno wut happened
RUBEN:U should've been w/me...
Nena looked down n didnt say nething,Ruben lifted her chin up
n KISSED her..Nena was feelin so loved by him...she started to fall 4 him.

Da next day @ Nena's casa...
NENA:OMG gurl he kisses soooo damn good...
FLAKA:damn ok dont start gettin all horny n shit...lolz
NENA:wutever..so did u see Pelon?
FLAKA:yea... n guess wut,were together now!!!!
Nena gave her a hug
NENAh shit r u 4 real?...im so happy 4 u mija.
FLAKA:thanx... well i have to 2 work so i guess ill see u laterz
NENAk mija take care
Da phone rings
NENA:hello
RUBEN:hey chula wut u doin/
NENA:who is this
RUBEN:aww dats fucked up..its Ruben
Somebody knocks on da door
NENA:hold on...
When Nena opens guess who it is......

[TRAVIESA]

DAMN...this is a tight ass story keep on writin.... [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

[Kc_PriNc3sA]

...write more esa!!!<-RaQueL->

[Marissa_Baby]

nice keep this shty cumin'

[MexicanChula760]

ey keep writing!! i think i no who it is though [img]/images/graemlins/smirk.gif[/img]

[Sadangel213]

oh fuck no! how you gonna stop there? hurry and write more soon plz. 1

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Flaca

::::you dont know how much you love sumone until they're gone::::

[LauraL]

ok first of all u cant get pregnant after a couple of days...but anywho...da story is good so far..keep it comin!

[theloveone]

damn keep it coming plzzzzzzzz

[LaBrownEyez]

shit that was a tigh story. hope you some more soon!!

*LaBrownEyeZ

[LA_LATINA]

Nena opens da door n sees Creeper
NENA:wut da fuck r u doin here?
CREEPER:Baby we need to talk(he walks in)
NENA:Mijo ill call u back...
RUBEN:Who's th-
CREEPER:who da fuck is dat Lorena?(grabs her by her arm)
NENA:Puto dont touch me
Creeper is squeasing her arm bad....tears roll out her eyes
CREEPERh shit mija dont cry i didnt mean to please..(he tries to hug her but she backs away)
CREEPER:Baby i love u, please be my lady again
NENA:after all u put me thru..wut r u on?
CREEPERhe gets on his knees and hugs her)Please ma' i cant live w/out u...i only think about u..
He starts cryin...
NENA:OMG Juan...(she kneels w/him on floor n starts crying 2)look baby i love u to but u hurt me 2 much I....ok Juan.
CREEPERhe looks up)wut...
NENA:yea ill be ur lady again
Creeper jumps on top of her n gives her a big ass hug
CREEPERhe looks deep into her eyes)Lorena I LOVE U...(he leans down 2 kiss her)Nena felt like it was like the old dayz when they were together n really in love...

Ruben walks in,he was all happy he was gonna surprise Nena w/a rose n planned to take her out for a surprise...as soon as he sees them he walks out n slams da door.Nena looks up but dont see no body.
NENA:who was dat?
CREEPER:Prolly just da wind ma' (he starts kissin on her neck)
NENA:stop...i have to go to wo..
She was gettin into it,he carries her to her room n yall know wut happens.....

Pelon calls Flaka
FLAKA:hello?
PELON:wut u doin ma'
FLAKA:im @ work
PELONamn i wanned to see if we could kick it.
FLAKA:well i get off in an hour
PELONhh well u wanna go 2 da club
FLAKA:Hellz yeah..ill call u when im ready ok.
PELONrale....love u
FLAKA:love u 2..bye.

Later @ 11:00,Pelon goes to pick Flaka up
PELONAMN...u lookin good mija...
FLAKA:thank u,thank u...
PELON:Eehh...concieted n shit...well r u ready yea but hold on i wanna see if Nena wanta 2 come,
PELONk...(he grabs her by da waist n gives her a long kiss)I love u.
FLAKA:me to...since when r u all romantic n shit?
PELON:since we got together...
FLAKA:ur so cute.
She goes n tries callin Nena but nobody answers...
FLAKA:damn i wonder where shes @
PELONrolly w/Ruben, he was gonna go to her casa
FLAKAh really... i hope so its bout time she gets herself a real vato
PELON:Say dats my homito ur talkin bout
FLAKA:i know i know im trippin...but 4real he needs 2 straiten out...well wutever lets go.

At da club alot of ppl,hoes shakin their ass da music is loud as hell
PELON:u want somethin 2 drink?
FLAKA:yeah bring me a corona...
PELONk ill be back
Flaka sees her old homita Payasa
FLAKA:Payasa is dat u?
PAYASA:OMG..Flaka?(she hugs her)
PAYASA:Shit its been a while huh
FLAKA:i missed u...so how did it go wit ur vato?
PAYASA:i sent his ass 2 hell!!!
FLAKA:lolz...wut happened?
PAYASA:Shit got tired of his lazy ass....so who r u wit?
FLAKA:Pelon
PAYASA:nuh uh...r u fuckin around wit me?
FLAKA:naw im 4 realz
PAYASA:Well he better not play on u or ima have 2 get on his ass.
FLAKA:naw he wont wont..
PELONh shit,Payasa
PAYASA:damn strait
PELON:damnz u changed...(looks @ her up n down)
Flaka hits him in da back of his head
PELONww dat hurt..u know no one looks as good as hyna...damn.
They chill for a while n when they were bout 2 leave when some bitch bumps into her.
BITCH:damn pendeja watch where ur goin
FLAKA:wut da fuck ur da 1 dat bumped into me bitch get ut story right..
PELON:lets go mija...(was holding her by her arm)
PAYASA:bitch no u aint gona talk like dat to my homita
BITCH:Bitch i wasnt even talkin to u..(she turned n was bout 2 walk)
Payasa pushed da bitch on da ground,she got on top of her n was neatin her ass, blood was all over her.Pelon was tryin to pull her away.Then they heard da police comung so she got up n they left.
FLAKA:thanx mija
PAYASA:shit ne time... u know i got my homita's back's like dat...

Ruben was @ his casa smokin n thinkin bout he had saw..he didnt want 2 beleive it.
RUBEN:damn i was startin 2 fall 4 her...

Wut do u think hes gonna do?