~MI VIDA LOCA~

[LA_LATINA]

Flaka got to da hospital...
FLAKA:Is he ok?
SPOOKY:i dunno...Nena went to talk 2 him..
FLAKA:Aww mijo,dont worry everythin is gonna b ok..wheres Nena
As soon as she said dat a stretcher passed w/Nena.
FLAKA:OMG........NENA!!!!(started cryin)NENA....(she ran 2 her)
NURSE:Calm down,shes fine i just put a tranquilizer(spellcheck)
FLAKA:Oh ok...shes gonna be fine right...where Juan Gomez?
NURSE:Im sorry hes in a life n death situation right now.
FLAKA:WUT?oh shit...dis aint happenin..(she walked bak 2 Spooky n Pelon...
PELON:Wut happened?is she ok?
FLAKA:yea..(to Spooky)look mijo,they just told me bout ur brother n...
SPOOKY:WUT?....hes fine right?
FLAKA:Look im sorry mijo,but dat lady told me he could die...
SPOOKY:Oh fuck...(fell to da ground cryin)u know hes da only family i have...he cant go...
FLAKA:OMG...mijo look hes gonna b fine,
PELON:yeah foo' dont trip...ima go ask for him...

The doctor was tryin his hardest ro save Pelon....
DOC:i dont think hes gonna make it...(he was really sweatin)
All of a sudden ------------------------------
DOC:We did our best....

The doctor went outside,everyone stood up.
SPOOKY:Is he ok?
DOC:Im sorry...we did da best we could.
SPOOKY:NOOOO!!!!!!!!(tears pourin down his face)NO!!!!JUAN!!!
PELONAMN....
FLAKAshe goes hug Spooky)Im sorry mijo,its gonna b ok.....

Nena wakes up..
NENAlooks around)Omg..wut da fuck m i doin here(she put her close back on n left)
Nena walked over to Flaka n them..
NENA:Wut da fuck wuts goin on?...Is Juan ok?
(started cryin)IS JUAN OK????OMG....JUAN!!!!!!Hes ok right?
FLAKA:Im sorry mija...
NENA:NOOO!!!(she fell to da ground)Noo....
Flaka ran over 2 her
FLAKA:mija its ok..let it out...

(By da way R.I.P. Carlos & Victor)

Juan's funeral...
Everyone was leaving, Nena had been cryin alot so her eyes were all red n puffy.
FLAKA:Mija r u gonna b ok?
NENA:yeah...hey ima stay here 4 a while..
FLAKAk..
Nena was at da foot of his grave cryin,all of a sudden she feels somebody's arm on her sholder,she looks up.
NENA:OMG...hey,i guessed u heard bout wut happened(her eyes got watery again)
RUBEN:yeah(he leaned down n hugged her really hard)im really,really sorry mija...(gave a kiss on her forhead)
NENA:thanx mijo..im so glad u came back,i need u now...(she hugged him so tight,she coulnt only feel his heartbeat...)
Everythin around her was frozen, it was only her n Ruben.

Pelon n Flaka were at his casa in da couch huggin...
FLAKA:i cant beleive this shit happened...
PELON:I know...mija i hope dat shit never happens to us...
FLAKA:SHUT UP!of course it wont!
PELON:i know but im just sayin..if it does u I Love U right?
FLAKA:AWWW mijo I love u to(gave him a long kiss)

A week passes since Juan's funeral,its Nena's birthay....
FLAKA:Wassup...happy birthday ma'!!!(gives her a hug)
NENA:thanx...
FLAKA:Wut?..Mija u gotta get over him,get on w/ur life..
NENA:I know..its just i cant help feelin guilty 4 his death...
FLAKA:Wu?Y?Wut happened?
NENA:Well i think he saw me n Ruben huggig..
FLAKA:Nuh uh..
NENA:he was just sayin bye..cause u know he likes me..
FLAKA:UUuuuUUUhhhh....Nena's got a boyfriend!!
NENA:shut up!im serious...
FLAKA:i know chill,damnz..well mija dont b 2 hard on urself God knows y does dat shit...
NENA:i guesss....
FLAKA:Well wut u wanna do?
NENA:I dunno i dont feel like goin out...
FLAKA:Wut are-(her phone rings)...Hello?...OMG!!!...ok....Bye.
NENA:who was dat?
FLAKA:OH...ummm...nobody,well i have to bounce..(gives her a quick hug)oh n mija fix urself up!!!BYE!!!
NENA:For wut?(Flaka left)Wut da fuck?FLAKA???

Nena gets ready,puts on make up n perfume,wears a blak tank top with a skirt,n some heels.(she was lookin hella fine)Somebody knocked on her door.
NENA:hold on...(she opens da door)OMG...Ruben?
RUBENgives her a big-ass hug)wassup ma'...happy birthday!!!
NENA:thanx..soo...
RUBEN:I got i surprise 4 u,ven...(got her by da hand n took her 2 his car)
NENA:where r we going?
RUBEN:youll see...
When they get there he stops da car...
NENA:where r we?
RUBENopens her door)Close ur eyes u cant see..
NENA:OOOkkk...She shuts her eyes...
RUBEN:ur peekin..
NENA:No i aint..
Ruben goes behind her n puts his hand over her eyes..
RUBEN:Ok open ur eyes...
NENA:OMG................................

[puppetgrl]

tight story.....

[aNaBeLs]

GURL YOU NEVER FINISHED IT!!!!!

[REASON]

youre story is pretty good .reminds me of back in the days girl but you need to write some more cus youre falling behind

[REASON]

LOVE IT ! BUT WHAT KIND OF CANCER DOES PAYASA HAVE?

[lovely_loca]

damn keep it coming
loca

[la_sweetie]

DamN GirL I haD Not Read IT in A WHIle buT Its HEllA goood keeP IT CominG! I like iT LOTs.Take CarE ANd WrITe MOre SooN,

[HoustonezDreamy]

Much propz keep tha story goin.

[Chapara3732]

hey I like your story! keep it comming

[LA_LATINA]

SORRY IM TAKIN LONG TO WRITE I GOT FINALS N SHIT,ILL WRITE TODAY..PROMISE!