~MI VIDA LOCA~

[Sadangel213]

damn shes hella stupid for goin back. shyt i hope you write more soon cuz i wanna find out what happens. 1

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Flaca

::::you dont know how much you love sumone until they're gone::::

[LA_LATINA]

Nena wakes up next to Creeper,she was thinkin if she made a good decision about goin back w/him,but it coulnt hurt to give it another try.
NENAh shit...
CREEPERhe wakes up)hey mija...(gives her a kiss)
NENA:hey u know my birthday's comin up right
CREEPER:duh!...wut u want
NENA:i dunno...
CREEPER:well mija i have to bounce i dont want ur moms to see me.Ill come later on.(Her mom works @ night,so she never really sees her n dont know wut happens in her life)
NENAk mijo...
He gets up n leaves
Next day in da afternoon...
NENA'S MOM:ya me voy a trabajar.
NENA:yea bye....like i care(in a low voice)
MOM:QUE?
NENAh nada,que te vaya bien...

After Nena's mom leaves somebody knocks on da door
NENA:hold on....damn.
RUBEN:hey mija,can i talk 2 u
NENA:sure come in.
RUBEN:R u n Creeper back 2gether?
NENAlooks down)yeah...
RUBENhhh...well i guess we cant talk no more huh?
NENA:y not?ur just my friend...
RUBEN:yea dats da problem...well ima go,i guess this is my last time seein u then..
NENA:WUT?
Ruben gives her a tight hug.
Creeper was about 2 knock when he sees wuts goin on,he gets really pissed off n goes to his brothers casa.Some of his homies r up there kickin it

Victor~aka~Spooky-6'0,buff ,pelon,blak eyez,firme vato,Creeper's brother
Jorge~aka~Pale-6'3,brown eyez,fine as hell,firme vato,Spookys best homito
CREEPER:i cant beleive shes doin this 2 me.
TITO:forget dat bitch foo'..here take this(hands him an X)
CREEPER:got more?
TITO:Hellz yea..(he hands him a full bag of them)
CREEPER:thanx ill b needin them
SPOOKY:chill foo'
CREEPER:wutever...ima bounce.
Creeper got to his car n drove off.Everything was flashin he coulnt really see...

Spookys phone rings
SPOOKY:hello?
OFFICER:Is this Juan Gomez's brother?
SPOOKY:Yea..wuts wrong?
OFFICER:There was an accident n da person is in very critical condition.
SPOOKY:wut?
He got the info n went 2 da hospital 2 where he was.

RUBEN:well i have to go bye...
NENA:bye....
Nena's phone rings
NENA:hello?
SPOOKY:Nena its me Spooky,Juan got into an accident.
NENA:wut?OMG...is he ok wut hospital is he in..ok ill be right there.

Nena gets there n goes to ask where he is but they dont let her in.
NENAcryin really hard)Spooky?
SPOOKY:hey..(gives her a hug)
NENA:they woulnt let me in...
SPOOKY:hes gonna b fine mija chill.
Nena remembers him sayin dat he was gonna come to her casa dat day,maybe he saw her n Ruben huggin.
NENA:Oh shit..(screaming)ITS MY FAULT!!!!ITS MY DAMN FAULT!!!
SPOOKY:Say mija calm down it aint ur fault...
A doctor came
DOC:Excuse young lady please calm down...(Nena truns around)
NENA:OMG,is Juan ok..can i go see him?
DOC:well...ok but please make it quick.

Nena enters,he looks so pale...
NENAgrabs his hand)im sorry mijo i didn-(she feels his hand move)
CREEPER:i-its ok ba-baby...lo- look i i kno i-ima die ssoo i want u t-to kn-ow dat I lo-------------
NENA:OMG...JUAN!!!JUAN!!!(she runs outside)DOCTOR!!!!DOCTOR!!!
The doctor n some nurses come in quickly.
DOC2 da nurse)take her away...
NENA:PLEASE SAVE HIM!!!(she was very red n tears were streaming down her cheeks)
Nena felt da nurse stick a needle in her arm.
NENA:PLEA-(she fell to da ground)

Spooky calls Flaka n tells her wuts going on.So she gets there w/Pelon.

My bad i gotta bounce...

[Sadangel213]

oh hell no how you gonna stop there??????????? write more SOON plz. 1

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Flaca

::::you dont know how much you love sumone until they're gone::::

[SadXGirl]

Omg so sad keep writing

[Jessica_Luis]

HEY MIJA KEEP DROPPIN THEM GOOD LINES PLZZZZZZZZZZZ

[AdORaBLe1]

OMG HOw sad !! BUt damn Gurl DOnt Stop there !!
Keep Dropping THem LInes ! please !
~.*.~ Adorable ~.*.~

[LA_LATINA]

Flaka got to da hospital...
FLAKA:Is he ok?
SPOOKY:i dunno...Nena went to talk 2 him..
FLAKA:Aww mijo,dont worry everythin is gonna b ok..wheres Nena
As soon as she said dat a stretcher passed w/Nena.
FLAKA:OMG........NENA!!!!(started cryin)NENA....(she ran 2 her)
NURSE:Calm down,shes fine i just put a tranquilizer(spellcheck)
FLAKA:Oh ok...shes gonna be fine right...where Juan Gomez?
NURSE:Im sorry hes in a life n death situation right now.
FLAKA:WUT?oh shit...dis aint happenin..(she walked bak 2 Spooky n Pelon...
PELON:Wut happened?is she ok?
FLAKA:yea..(to Spooky)look mijo,they just told me bout ur brother n...
SPOOKY:WUT?....hes fine right?
FLAKA:Look im sorry mijo,but dat lady told me he could die...
SPOOKY:Oh fuck...(fell to da ground cryin)u know hes da only family i have...he cant go...
FLAKA:OMG...mijo look hes gonna b fine,
PELON:yeah foo' dont trip...ima go ask for him...

The doctor was tryin his hardest ro save Pelon....
DOC:i dont think hes gonna make it...(he was really sweatin)
All of a sudden ------------------------------
DOC:We did our best....

The doctor went outside,everyone stood up.
SPOOKY:Is he ok?
DOC:Im sorry...we did da best we could.
SPOOKY:NOOOO!!!!!!!!(tears pourin down his face)NO!!!!JUAN!!!
PELONAMN....
FLAKAshe goes hug Spooky)Im sorry mijo,its gonna b ok.....

Nena wakes up..
NENAlooks around)Omg..wut da fuck m i doin here(she put her close back on n left)
Nena walked over to Flaka n them..
NENA:Wut da fuck wuts goin on?...Is Juan ok?
(started cryin)IS JUAN OK????OMG....JUAN!!!!!!Hes ok right?
FLAKA:Im sorry mija...
NENA:NOOO!!!(she fell to da ground)Noo....
Flaka ran over 2 her
FLAKA:mija its ok..let it out...

(By da way R.I.P. Carlos & Victor)

Juan's funeral...
Everyone was leaving, Nena had been cryin alot so her eyes were all red n puffy.
FLAKA:Mija r u gonna b ok?
NENA:yeah...hey ima stay here 4 a while..
FLAKAk..
Nena was at da foot of his grave cryin,all of a sudden she feels somebody's arm on her sholder,she looks up.
NENA:OMG...hey,i guessed u heard bout wut happened(her eyes got watery again)
RUBEN:yeah(he leaned down n hugged her really hard)im really,really sorry mija...(gave a kiss on her forhead)
NENA:thanx mijo..im so glad u came back,i need u now...(she hugged him so tight,she coulnt only feel his heartbeat...)
Everythin around her was frozen, it was only her n Ruben.

Pelon n Flaka were at his casa in da couch huggin...
FLAKA:i cant beleive this shit happened...
PELON:I know...mija i hope dat shit never happens to us...
FLAKA:SHUT UP!of course it wont!
PELON:i know but im just sayin..if it does u I Love U right?
FLAKA:AWWW mijo I love u to(gave him a long kiss)

A week passes since Juan's funeral,its Nena's birthay....
FLAKA:Wassup...happy birthday ma'!!!(gives her a hug)
NENA:thanx...
FLAKA:Wut?..Mija u gotta get over him,get on w/ur life..
NENA:I know..its just i cant help feelin guilty 4 his death...
FLAKA:Wu?Y?Wut happened?
NENA:Well i think he saw me n Ruben huggig..
FLAKA:Nuh uh..
NENA:he was just sayin bye..cause u know he likes me..
FLAKA:UUuuuUUUhhhh....Nena's got a boyfriend!!
NENA:shut up!im serious...
FLAKA:i know chill,damnz..well mija dont b 2 hard on urself God knows y does dat shit...
NENA:i guesss....
FLAKA:Well wut u wanna do?
NENA:I dunno i dont feel like goin out...
FLAKA:Wut are-(her phone rings)...Hello?...OMG!!!...ok....Bye.
NENA:who was dat?
FLAKA:OH...ummm...nobody,well i have to bounce..(gives her a quick hug)oh n mija fix urself up!!!BYE!!!
NENA:For wut?(Flaka left)Wut da fuck?FLAKA???

Nena gets ready,puts on make up n perfume,wears a blak tank top with a skirt,n some heels.(she was lookin hella fine)Somebody knocked on her door.
NENA:hold on...(she opens da door)OMG...Ruben?
RUBENgives her a big-ass hug)wassup ma'...happy birthday!!!
NENA:thanx..soo...
RUBEN:I got i surprise 4 u,ven...(got her by da hand n took her 2 his car)
NENA:where r we going?
RUBEN:youll see...
When they get there he stops da car...
NENA:where r we?
RUBENopens her door)Close ur eyes u cant see..
NENA:OOOkkk...She shuts her eyes...
RUBEN:ur peekin..
NENA:No i aint..
Ruben goes behind her n puts his hand over her eyes..
RUBEN:Ok open ur eyes...
NENA:OMG................................

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<font color="purple"> .....WHAT'S NEXT??? [img]/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img] </font>

[Sadangel213]

keep writin this is good.1

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Flaca

::::you dont know how much you love sumone until they're gone::::

[LA_LATINA]

Nena was inside a room filled with candles everywhere......
RUBEN:So...wut u think?
NENA:This is so beautiful!(gives him a hug)THANX!!!
RUBEN:Im glad u like it it....well u wanna eat i made u somethin...well i tried.
NENA:Sure...wut u make?
RUBEN:Well Flaka told me u liked posole so I..
NENAid u seriously do dat?
RUBEN:Yeah...well vente sit down.
They ate n he broght a cake...
RUBEN:Well heres ummm see i was 2 tired to make a cake so i boght u this...
NENA:HAHA...this is so cute(he handed her a cupcake with a teddy bear dat said I LOVE U)I like it,but wut about u,u want some?
RUBEN:Naw....listen mija i wanted to know if u wanned 2 b my lady?
NENA:Wut?.....ummmmm
RUBEN:Look i know its kinda fast specially after wut happened,pero i cant stand bein w/out u!
NENA:Of course menzo!!!!(she gave him a hug)
RUBEN:I Love u baby.....(whispered into her ear)
NENAshe felt chills up n down her spine,hes voice sounded sooooooooooooooo sexy!!!!)I love u to mijo.......
They kissed n before u knew it they were ass naked on the floor bangin....

Next day at Flaka's casa...
FLAKA:damn i wonder wut happened between them 2....
MOM:Ya levantate!!!!
FLAKA:AMA!!!im tired...
MOM:im tired my ass mija,va venir tu herman-
FLAKA:WUT?!!!!(gave her mom a hug)
Flaka's sis was berly 18 she had been in her dad,they were really close...
FLAKA:me voy a banar...
MOM:apurate porque ay viene....

Nena's casa....
NENA:thanx 4 everything....
RUBEN:U welcome,im just glad u liked it...well bye(gave her a kiss n left)
NENAwent into her casa n started jumpin n going all crazy)Im his lady!!!!!!!
Flaka calls Nena..
NENAh shit....(gaspin outa breath)He..llo
FLAKA:Ummm hello?Nena r u ok ma'?
NENA:yeah im koo...
FLAKA:so how did it go?
NENA:Gurl he took me 2 his casa n da livin room was filled w/candles....n guess wut im his lady now!!!
FLAKA:r u serious?Mija im happy 4 u..well u member Dimples?
Shes comein 2day!!!
NENA:OMG.....can i come over?
FLAKAuh dats y i called u.
NENAk well ill be there...alratoz.
FLAKA:alratoz...

Sorry ill write more later im hella busy [img]/images/graemlins/frown.gif[/img]!!!But im a keep on [img]/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img] writin