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Old 10-22-2009, 09:54 PM   #1
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October 21, 2009

Baby:

I remember the day we met; I fell so hard in love

Just by the look in your eyes I knew that you were the one

We said forever, but will we make it that far

Are you going to be another memory left with an ugly scare?

I remember how we used to talk about getting married and having kids

It’s something I want so badly, but I don’t think I’ll ever see it

Maybe it’s just me and we come from two different worlds

Or maybe I’m just scared about getting hurt

I don’t know what to do to make this relationship last

I try talking, I try writing to help get us past

Right before my eyes my hearts broken pieces hit the floor

To tell you the truth; I don’t think I could do this anymore

I’ve done everything I could think of to keep us afloat

But I think all this fighting is going to sink this love boat

The one thing that’s keeping me going is the promise I made to you

I promised to love and never give up on you

My fears stop me from leaving because I know the chance I might take

If I leave you, the next time I see you might just be at your wake

If there is one thing I respect is that you changed because of me

And I wouldn’t be able to live knowing you died when I set you free

My love for you is endless, until my dying days

I just don’t want to leave you,

I wish you could see these tears running down my face

It hurts me to think this let alone put it down in words

This was supposed to be a love letter but look how it turned

I love you yes I do but is love enough to get us through…

All I know is that I’m tired of you hurting me and me hurting you

So the question is what are we going to do??
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Old 11-03-2009, 04:56 AM   #2
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Dang mija that was some deep stuff there. I almost felt like it was me talking to my vato. Its crazy how we may feel we are alone in the way we feel and that no one else feels the way we do but when we put it out there we realize how many people are going through the same things we do. IT was nice though!
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Old 11-04-2009, 12:14 AM   #3
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This In Indeed TRUELY Deep It Feel's Like My Relationship
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Old 11-04-2009, 11:22 PM   #4
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that was great!
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Old 11-06-2009, 01:03 AM   #5
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DAMN MiJA, tHAt MADE ME tHiNk ABOUt My VAtO && OUR RELAtiONSHiP "(
BUt tHAt WAS A GREAt POEM, i LikE it.
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