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Old 07-12-2009, 12:27 AM   #1
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I didnt write this i just thought it was tight.........

How could a teenage lust ever be a mature love affair
Though I swear what we shared was the very essence of two hearts being discovered by one another
Alone in the dark
Two lovers uncovered as percy sled sang
When a man loves a woman
Your hands outline the design of my spine
While myne did the same to your frame
We’d find our lips as we kissed to be more precious than water
Together we crossed borders into territories never explored before
Creating stories that would one day be told with such a passionate flame
They would bring us pain to be remembered
But that cold night you and I were all that mattered in life
As the stars shined bright we held each other tight
Speaking like we’d always be alright
I’ve learned that it is these nights you should freeze life and breathe light
Cuz these flights steal away the memory that you and I define true love by
Our eyes close
bodys encloathed
mold into one
creating intentions
received by concived perception
no question unanswered as two dancers took the hands of romance
with embrace coming face to face
we would bolth taste extacy as its purest form
and store its warm sensations
in the basements of our hearts
still alone in the dark
two lovers uncovered lying on the bed
as percy sled sang when a man loves a woman
we’d sleep in the cussim securities of immaturity
believing the one surety of passion that you and I lasting forever
laughing together
never realizing that this was a promise neither one of us could keep
so forever became two years and a hand full of weeks
falling short of what we believed of an eternity to be
yet at times in my mind
I find myself wishing we could of stayed asleep
To see forever and that dream world
Where a teenage boy and a teenage girl
Twirled across the dance floors of paradise
To watch the sunrise in one another’s eyes
And i
At times
stare at them alone in the dark
Two lovers uncovered
As they discovered eachother for the first time
And I’m inclined to swear that the teenage lust they shared
Wasn’t just a love affair
Yet From some unknown voice echoing through my head
Is the sultry voice
Of percy sled.....
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Old 07-12-2009, 08:19 PM   #2
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WOW! I LOVED IT! GREAT POEM!! I GIVE THIS 2 THUMBS UP! KEEP EM COMING!
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OMY I LOVE IT!!
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Old 07-15-2009, 01:46 AM   #4
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firme drop i liked it alot !
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Old 07-16-2009, 03:29 AM   #5
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bump bump................
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i liked this poem mijo.. keep em coming. its crazy to realize that a guy actually thinks about the first time lol most guys just do it and then say NEXT lol KEEP EM COMING..

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Old 11-19-2009, 10:42 PM   #8
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ya but most guyz aren't anything like me....datz why you should cherish the momentz like that that take your breath away......
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