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Old 11-21-2009, 01:23 AM   #1
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Default "My Open Letter" Courtesy of Uzi and Maleeka

--------------------J U N I O R------------
Dear Mami

Couldn't help but to find a piece of paper
to pour my emotions if the pen does me the favor

where do I start, or where should I begin?
first time we've talked was the begining of an end
an end to a past and a start of a new chapter
a new chapter that got my heart captured..

I am not here like the guy before me
I am here to pull your heart closer to ME
I am so serious if u give me ONE chance
so serious I'll save u the last dance

Blindly I had to run a mile to find my heart
opened my eyes just to see u holding it from the start
Auuuuuughhh! Got me screaming with emotions
got me feeling like my heart is living in devotion...
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----------------------M A L E E K A------------------
reading your words had me feeling like a queen
more passionate than titanic's most romantic scene

pen to paper my heart ready to pour
with lines dedicated to the man i adore
i repeat your name 3 times loud enough for you to hear
hoping like candyman somehow you will appear

from the moment i seen your face you had me hooked
intrigued by your heart as much as how you looked
you define the word gentleman with its truest meaning
in times of need on your chest is where my head is leaning

i'll place my hand in yours and accept the last dance
to have this forever i'll give you that one chance
appreciation and respect is what i get from you
it's the kind of man you are so keep doing what you do.

an open letter from you is ending like this
emotions expressed and sealed with a kiss..
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Old 11-21-2009, 01:25 AM   #2
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PS... I actually had thoughts of adding more lines to my poem... I had more to throw in there BUT I was scurrrrrred that if I make it TOO long people wouldn't want to read it..
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"Never Again..."
It's just me and my alter ego, pardon us
I swore to never dumb it down if fans would smarten up...

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Old 11-21-2009, 01:39 AM   #3
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I cant even explain how much I liked it.
It had me all smiling and shit!
That was beautiful!
You should have thrown those lines in
If its good from the beganing theyll read it to the end
Keep it up that was amazing!
I love this piece! ill be looking for more.
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Old 11-21-2009, 02:03 AM   #4
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yes... i agree with her ^^^^..
good job uzi '&& Maleeka
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Old 11-21-2009, 02:05 AM   #5
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Thank you, Thank you females...

I gotta give it up to Maleeka... She is the one with the true talent... I am looking foward to doing more collabos with her... If she doesn't decline...

The next collabo, I want it to be something similar to Chris Brown and Rhiana or Ike Turner and Tina Turner.. I am joking

R E S P E C T !
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Hey young world wanna hear a story?
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"Never Again..."
It's just me and my alter ego, pardon us
I swore to never dumb it down if fans would smarten up...

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Old 11-21-2009, 02:20 AM   #6
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yea... i hope she dont decline either....
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Old 11-21-2009, 09:45 AM   #7
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muchas gracias, was great to collaborate with you..
i can never decline writing poetry especially with the talented, so thats a yeah

The next collabo, I want it to be something similar to Chris Brown and Rhiana or Ike Turner and Tina Turner.. I am joking
this made me lol... R E S P E C T -
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Old 11-21-2009, 11:12 AM   #8
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Glad to hear...

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just know that we are TOO parallel to ever meet

J o e
Hey young world wanna hear a story?
Closed your eyes and you can pretend you are me
P O W !
This is why I be so fresh
I'm trying to beat life cause I can't cheat death
"Never Again..."
It's just me and my alter ego, pardon us
I swore to never dumb it down if fans would smarten up...

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Old 11-21-2009, 01:12 PM   #9
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good job guys.....well written and flowed very well......props.
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Old 11-21-2009, 01:43 PM   #10
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i LUVED iT YOU 2 WORK WELL TOGETHER ..MAD PROPz..
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