ok look. Im sorry I cant post LIKE YOULL NEVER SEE ME AGIAN pt 2 because I left it up in northern cali at my sisters house. I thought I packed it but I guess I didnt.
. She is mailing it to me today at her lunch ill probly get it friday or monday im not sure but i will post. Heres my newest story I been working on last night. here it is tell me what you think ITS DIFFERENT
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The day Daisy brought him into this house I knew right from the start he was bad news. Not just bad new but bad. He wasnt the kind of guy to be faithful, he might be sweet at moments but thats to get what he wants. The day I got the news I was furious, heartbroken but furious. I was in my killer mode. This is about my sister Daisy valdez. Here it goes.
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"So I met someone..." Daisy told me
"oh yea...who??"
We were at the dinner table eating breakfast. Daisy knew how to cook. She was a cheff. She got it from my dads side.
"His names Jonathon, hes so sweet, has the most beautiful eyes and lovely smile!"
"lucky...wered you meet him?"
"Remember the other day when ma asked me to go pick up her medican at kiaser?"
"mhm" I popped some eggs into my mouth
"Well he was there, doing the same...well except for his grandmother but still, he was there!" she smiled big
I could tell she was happy.
"So...when you bringing him by you kno dad is gonna wanna meet him!"
"yea I kno" she frowned "but we havnt been dating that long...were going out tonight!"
"oh were to?"
"Olive Garden. His mom owns it!"
"forreals?"
"mhm" she smiled
"well Id love to meet him"
"you girls done, you need to clean up!"
I rolled my eyes "I have to go to school!"
"I kno you have time!"
"Time to be late if I do the effin dishes!"
"watch your mouth natalie how many times do I tell you!!"
I sighed "sorry..." I said wripping my bread to peices
"get to cleaning!"
I got up grabbing Daisys plate and cup with mine and took it to the sink.
"Im taking your dad to his appointment today so im gonna need you to come straight home and babysit!"
"ugh mom you said!"
"I kno but they called unexpectaly yesterday!"
"you tell me last minute huh?"
she sighed "please..."
"Fine!"
I through the dish towel after drying my hands. I heard Daisy honk. I ran up stairs and got my things and ran back down. I went outside and got in the car.
"finnaly took you long enough!"
"Sorry...ma held me up"
"Yea I know..." she opened her phone and closed it "fuck..." she whispered as she pulled away
"what?"
"nothing..."
"He hasnt called?"
"not last night either!"
"hes probly busy!"
"yea..."
She drove me to school in silence. I got out and ran up the steps to my and lillys spot. Lilly is my bestfriend, wev known eachother since we were in diapers. She wasnt there yet thoe. I waited and waited then my phone vibrated.
"Meet me at starbucks!" she text
Dayum. I walked out of the gate and ran across the street to starbucks. I saw here there talking to Angelica. Ugh I hate that bitch. I walked in and plopped myself on the coushin chair.
"hey..." she said smiling at me
"hi" I said
"I ordered you a carmel fraccino!"
"cool..."
"dont know why thoe!" Angelica whispered
"bitch-"
"OK OK"
"carmel frapaccino extra carmel for Lilly..." the lady said
"thats yours..."
"k..."
I got up and rushed to the counter. I grabed a straw and when I turned around I felt a hard shove.
"Ow foo fuck!" I looked up
"Im sorry!"
"you made me drop my drink!"
he still hadnt looked at me
"Im sorry im soo sorry here let me b-hi..."
Thats when I saw him, he had carmel brown eyes, big lips and light colored skin, nice body, I could see his biceps mm mm mm. I felt my lips bleed as I bit down on it.
"um hi..."
his smile dazzled me big time "Im martin..."
"Im Natalie..."
"what was your drink ill by you another..."
"no its fine..."
"well let me pay you back!"
"no its ok..."
he looked at his shirt and smiled
"Carmel frapaccino extra carmel?"
I smiled and nodded "how did you know?"
"Carmel is very strong..."
"I guess it is..."
He put his hand on the small of my back and lead me to the cashiar he asked for a carmel frapacinno extra carmel and paid for it.
"so how old are you natalie?"
"umm 17..." I smiled at him "and you?"
"17??wow...well i just turned 20..."
"oh well your not that much older then me...my birthdays next month..."
"oh a december baby huh?"
"mhm..."
"your drink is ready sir..."
"thanks man..."
he got it and grabed a straw then handed it to me.
"ill watch were im going this time!" he said
"no its my fault I shouldnt have been rushing..."
he smiled "see you around?"
"mhm..." I sipped my drink "every monday and wensday im here...stop by..."
he smiled "alrite then...bye natalie..."
"bye martin..."
I watched him walk away and I turned around. Lilly was smiling kool-aid at me.
"what?"
"who was that?"
"Martin..."
"martin...how old is he he has a car.."
"he just turned 20..."
"just like you..." said Angelica
"look lilly get your bitch bef-"
"befor you wat?"
we stared at eachother with a death glare
"thats what I thought!"
"bitch im not scared of you!"
"you should be..."
"hey now both of you stop!"
We stared at eachother for a long time till she got her back and walked out. We walked back to school.
"Hey nat..."
I turned to see my long time friend, no longer then Lilly, Dominik aka Dom.
"hey dom wassup..."
"nothing much were you coming from?"
"starbucks..."
"oh..."
DING
"I was waiting for you!"
"Im sorry!"
"Its coo..."
Dom always looked at me like he was the fat kid and I was the chocolate cake. I always pushed it back thoe. School came and went. Soccer practice came and also went. I waited for Daisy in the parkinglot were she always was and never was once late but she wasnt here. I waited and waited and just when I was about to call her she called.
"Were are you?" I asked picking up
"Im sorry I got held up at work cuz at my lunch I had met Jonathon and helped him get some carmel sta-"
"Well im waiting so you coming or what?"
"yes im on my way..."
"well hurry!"
"bye"
"bye"
I closed my phone and sat on the steps.
Tell me what you think...My titel dosnt really come in till later on in the story.
My Sister Daisy!
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