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Old 10-13-2009, 09:24 PM   #1
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New story!..hope you guys like it let me know youre thoughts on it!




Today was like any other day in my life, I had the same routine. Eat, Sleep and Survive. I watched as the cars from the busy day passed me by and wondered how much money i could make today I rummaged through my pocket and jingled what little change i had left from the previous night. "Great" i mumbled to myself. 75cents to my name nothing more and nothing less. My stomach rumbled and i knew i had to think of way toget something to eat. Yes i thought to myself. The chinese restraunt on the corner. I got myself up and walked the 2 and half blocks to the Restruant. I made my way to the alley and sat patiently waiting for the morning throw out. I always wondered how people could throw away perfectly good food, But to hell with it i wasn't going to let that most precious food go to waste. The young chinese man came out with a box in hand. I hid behind the other dumpster not wanting him to see me. He emptied out the contents and they all poured out into the dump. I waited for him to go back inside and once he did i dove right in there scrummaging up as much food as my hands could get. I been doing this everyday for the passed six months and it never gets old. I never imagined my life to be this way. But that all changed when that asshole Luke came into my life. You see i had it all. A car a home and a warm bed to sleep in. I loved him and i thought he loved me, But little did i know that in a heartbeat he would change my life upside down. My name is Unique, and this is my story let me take you back 6mnths before the hell started.



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6mnths ago




Oh mother it's beautiful! i shouted as she handed me the pearl white table cloth. I been wanting that thing since i first layed eyes on it!. It will match perfectly with the black and white curtains i have in my house! i excitedly screamed. Mom was always so nice to me, well she should be im her only child. Mom demanded we go to my house and fit the new table cloth. I accepted and we hopped in my car and drove down the highway. I began to sing to the radio and mom just chuckled to herself. I rolled down my window and let the cool breeze hit my face it felt so good as it flowed through my hair. After a short drive we arrived at my house. I was excited to move out of an apartment and in to a house, A house was much more comfortable and cozey compared to a compacted one bedroom apartment. I threw the keys to Mom and proceeded to grab the bags from the trunk. We entered the house and mom gasped. What! mom what is it?...Nothing Unique..its just that its beautiful! she said sounding a little choked up."Are u going to be able to afford such a place?". Well about that, i put up a add in the paper for a roommate."..Well thats good dear, you couldnt possibly affored all this on your own unless you get a second job." mom said sounding a little sarkastic. She was right though, i would have needed a 2nd job but it's so much easier just to get a roommate. We tried on the table cloth and it fit perfectley, just the way it layed on the table was beautiful. I arranged the napkin holder and added to silver candled one on each side. Mom and i said our goodbyes as i watched her climb into the taxi i insited on taking her but she refused saying i looked real tired, that was no lie i was.

Its been a couple of days since i been in my new home i loved it, i loved everything about it. The way the nice green grass and the pink rosed just blended into eachother it was amazing. As i sat on the porch i noticed the neighborhood kids playing kickball, i always loved that game. Just then my phone rang. I picked it up and it was male on the other end.

"Hello?...yes this is she.

we talked for a good couple of minutes. His name was Luke and he was replying to the ad i had put in the paper. He asked if i had minded that he was i guy. Wich it did kind of bother me, but i'll check it out and see how it goes.He was going to come over in an hour. I decided to straighten out the house. Time came and went, and about a minute after 7 there was knock out the door. There he was dressed really nice, with a black mustang parked in my drive way.Oh my god he is definately going to be my new roommate. I was at a loss for words as drooled over his presence."Umm..Hello are u going to invite me in?"..he said. I apologized and invited him in and gave him a tour. He loved it. WE talked about the bills and what each of us would have to pay. He told me he had a girlfriend he had been with her for some time now."Aww man i thought to myself there goes that"...Well Unique thank you for your time and hospitality..by the way the house is beautiful, I will be moving in soon, Do you mind if i bring Jazlyn by?...You know my Girlfriend?..Sure i said!..its youre house to silly!..Great! he exlaimed you two will love eachother she's such a sweet girl!...Bye Luke i said as i waved to him. I watched as he drove off. Dreading the day when i get to meet her. Damn Luke was sexy as hell, just the way he stood there in those nice blue jeans and white polo shirt. His eyes were hypnotizing. Wow...But i couldnt think about that not as long as he had her.







Ok well let me know what you all think. i will Post more soon! hopefully if u guys like it so far!
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Old 10-13-2009, 10:58 PM   #2
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Old 10-14-2009, 04:05 PM   #5
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Thanks for the love ladies!





Two days have passed and Luke finally moved out of his apartment and into my house. Or shall i say our house. Luke was at work and i was enjoying my day off, there was still plenty to do around the house and i decided to put the finishing touches and paint my room. I decide to go a warm beige and brown trim. I threw on some old sweats and threw my hair in a ponytail. I layed out some plastic on the floor. I began to paint but quickly grew bored from it. I layed the brush down in the paint pan. And sat thinking on the floor, What is there to do? Just then my phone rang. I picked it up and it was Mom she decided she was going to have me and Luke a house warming party, How fun i thought. She was going to invite all the neighbors and all our family, Great i thought i didnt want everyone here. Oh well the more the merrier. Luke gave me his cell number and told me to call if i needed anything. I decided to hit him up and let him know about the party tonight. I called him up and he seem really excited. He said he was going to make his famous salsa. Yummy sounded good to me. I finished up the last of the trim after about 3hrs. I was sweating like a fucking pig. I needed to jump in the shower and get ready. I picked out a pretty pink strapless shirt and some white skinny jeans. I undressed and let the water run. I slowly climbed in and oh man the water felt so good as it poured throughout my body. I started thinking of Luke out of nowhere. I couldnt help it he was fine. The way his muscle shirt just hugged his muscles The was he smelled, oh my god. I imagined me and him together....Wait....I can't be thinking that shit he has a girlfriend. Come on Unique snap out of it. I wasnt that kind of girl. If anything i wanted to be his friend someone he can come to when he has problems. But i guess theres nothing wrong with daydreaming. I got out of the shower and got dressed. I combed my hair real nice. And applied some light make-up. I glanced at the clock it was all ready 5 Luke gets out in half n hour i thought to myself. The party is at 7 that gives me two hours to get shit done. I walked out into the hallway and heard the Tv on. What the hell?..did i forget to turn it off again i wondered. Just then i seen mom and grandma sitting there grubbing on my cheeto's and watching the spanish chanel. Grandma was shaking her fist at the tv and yelling obsenaties. She was a trip let me tell you. She has alzthiemers. So she flips out once in awhile.But i dint mind her i loved her behind all that craziness she was a caring and sweet lady. I greeted them both with a hug and kiss. Something smelled really good. Mom had made some chicken enchiladas and som spanish rice. Grandma made her special fruitsalad. I heard the front door open and all three of us turned our hea. There he was looking cuter then ever in his suit and tie. He came into the kitchen and greeted us. Hi luke i kindly said. This is my mom. Hello Luke she said while giving him a hug. "Oh my god unique u never told me u got married!..Grandma yelled. My face grew red and quickly turned to Luke who was laughing his ass off. No Grandma this is my Roomate Luke. Is that what the call it now days? Grandma said. Well Luke you are a strapping young man! you better be covering that willy you dont want no crybaby little brats running around. Oh my god! i cant believe she just said that. Luke was laughing even harder. I excused myself from the kitchen and grabbed Luke with me in to the next room. I explained to him about grandma and he kindly told me not to worry about it. Well Unique im off into the kitchen im going to make my salsa youre going to love it. He shot me a smile and a wink. My heart melted. Everyone was in the kitchen while i was straightning out the house. Guests and family began to arrive and we all went into the backyard. Luke started his grill. And i lit a little pit fire. We pulled out some lawn chairs. Me and my cousin Angela sat around the fire chatting about life. Me and that girl were really close but grew apart over the years. She got married and is now pregnant i was really happy for her, But sad at the time we didnt get to spend. Oh wow Unique who is that?...she must have seen Luke. Oh thats just Lu-- no Unique right there she pointed at the back door. And there she was, she was wearing a pretty white dress her hair curled realy nice. She had a nice figure and her face was really pretty, pretty enough to be a model. Just then i seen Luke go up to her and give her a hug and kiss he took her hand and made there way to me.


Unique, This is Jazlyn. I got up from my seat and gave her hug. She was really sweet. I took the both of them to where my mom was. And introduced her to mom then Grandma. So what is this?..a love triangle?..you all share the same bed? grandma said. Jazlyn grew uneasy and Luke just laughed. He explained it all to her and Jazlyn smiled and chuckled to herself. We all went our seperate ways and grabbed a plate to eat. I tried some of Luke's salsa, and he was right it was out of this world i loved it. Just then a chip got stuck in my throat and began to cough up a storm. Quick someone get me some water please!..Jazlyn ran to my side and handed me some water. Are u ok sweetie?....I'm fine i said... still choking. She patted my back like i was some little kid. Everyone was staring at me and for some reason i felt like i wanted to cry. Not because of that. But because i was humiliated. I went inside the house and went into my bathroom. I splashed my face with water And sat on the toilet. There was a knock at the door. Just a minute! i yelled..Unique its me Luke. I quickly opened up the door and let him. Are you ok?...yeah. I said sounding a bit hesitant. Are you sure?....Yeah im fine. Thanks. Dont worry about me Luke go enjoy our party and get back to your lovely girlfriend. I'll be fine it was just a chip...thanks Luke. Anytime he said as he walked out the door. No come back, i thought to myself.I need you. I finished up in the bathroom and headed back to the party. Mom asked if i was ok and i shook my head yes. I seen grandma having the time of her life dancing with my Uncle James. Great who supplied her with alcohol i joked with my mom. I did Unique...what!..just then she pulled out a bottle of Tequila. Here take a shot loosen up a bit. Did my mom really just pull a bottle of tequila out of her purse?...just then she motioned for Jazlyn and Luke to come over our way. She offered them a shot and they both kindly accepted. Wow Unique youre mom is kool Jazlyn said..I guess...i mumbled. We opened up our gifts, we got a lot of things. I loved the nice wall clock mom had bought us. It was beautiful. I looked around and Luke was nowhere to be seen, I figured he walked Jazlyn out. Everyone left and it was just me mom and Grandma. We cleaned up the mess. I was exhausted but i did have fun. After awhile Mom and i said our goodbyes and she headed out the door. I plopped myself on the couch. Luke walked in several minutes later. Sorry Unique to leave like that, its ok i said. He was holding something behind his back. Here i got you these. I gasped...they were beautiful!..pink and red roses along with some purple lilacs. I wanted to get you something kind of like a thank you gift. he said. You shouldnt have, i mean i didnt even get you anything. Dont worry about it you dont need to. I smelled the aroma of the roses and put them in the crystal vase i had and placed them on the table. Thats a really good spot for them Luke said. I agreed.


Party turned out good dont you think?..It sure did Luke. We sat at the kitchen table and pigged out on the rest of the salsa and steak. We were both growing tired and decided to go to bed. We said our goodnights. And i headed to my room and he headed to his. I layed down and all i could think about was the beautiful roses he got me. Wait...all i could think about was him. I couldnt sleep i tossed and turned. I got up to get a glass a water and noticed the TV was on again. I peered around the corner and seen Luke passed out on the couch in his boxers with the remote in his hand. I just stood there in awe over his body. He had ripped abs and nice muscle tone. He was starting to snore. I wanted to wake him up for him to go lay down but he looked so peaceful sleeping there. I heard something go off i ran to the kitchen it must have been my phone. Nope my phone was turned off...Then i noticed it was Luke's phone. I picked it up and turned down the volume i didnt want it to wake him. I decided to peek to see who the txt was from it was probably Jazlyn. I flipped open the phone and it said Amanda. I wondered who that was maybe someone he works with or a cousin or somethin. I felt bad for being nosey. Well it's not like i read it or anything. I tip toed to see if it woke up Luke..It didnt he was still chopping logs. I grew nervous i was contemplating if i should read it or not. Nah that would be fucked up of me to do. I placed his phone back where it was and as i turned to walk away it went off again. Gee he must be a popular guy i thought to myself. I glanced at his phone again and this time the txt was from another girl named Melissa. Wow why are girls txting him at 2oclock in the morning and didnt they know he had a girlfriend?.....





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keep it coming. i wanna know who those girls are. i wonder if she get caught.
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