Passion

mz_cutie · 07-21-2005, 06:35 PM

~hey people this my second story check out my first story "crazy love" and no this isnt part to to crazy love if you want a part to then go to my "crazy love" story and tell me on there and if i get alot of replies on u want one then ill start writing it...i hope ya like this one~

CHAPTER 1

A 12 year old and her mother are arguing about boys and school....

Mom: i said no Passion ok your grounded until you pull these grades up there will be no boys or no party..intiendes

Passion: thats not fair mom your being uncool i really like this boy and he wants me to go to his party ok and thats where im goin

Mom: *turns to her [img]/images/graemlins/mad.gif[/img] * PASSION GET OUT OF MY FACE GO TO YOUR ROOM YOU ARE NOT GOING ANYWHERE OK AND DONT YOU FUCKIN BACK TALK ME

Passion: *teary* I HATE YOU

*she runs to her room and slams the door and her mom just sits on the chair crying..she hated fighting with her daughter over stupid things...her husband just died and her daughter wasnt doin anything to help her through this..she was goin to go 2 passions room and talk to her the right way*

Mom: *gettin up* passion

* No response*

Mom: *knocking on her door* Passion

*She opens the door and passion isnt there and she sees her window open*

Mom: ay dios mio

*She got her car keys and left and went to go look for Passion...she was no where to be found*

HONK HONK!!....CRASH

* With Passion...She was at the cemetary visiting her dad tellin him about her problems until she heard the crash and she stood up*

Passion: wdf?

* She left and she saw a big truck and a car smashed against each other head to head...she went down for a closer look...it was her moms car*

Passion: OMG!!!

* She ran down there and opened the car door and she started crying*

Passion: *crying* mommy get up

*shakes her a lil*

Passion: plz mommy get up plz

*nothing happened...she held her mom... crying so hard..Passion knew her mom wasnt coming back*

WELL TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK IF I SHOULD KEEP GOIN WITH THIS ONE OR NOT [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

CRAZY_MEX_RUCA · 07-21-2005, 06:44 PM

i like it so far so keep it coming

MizzAngelBaby · 07-21-2005, 06:59 PM

aww thas so sad. but i like this story it's good. keep writing.

~Angel Baby~ [img]/images/graemlins/angel.gif[/img]

LaViCtOriALiNdA · 07-21-2005, 07:50 PM

ESTA LOCA?!!! KEEP WRITING [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

mz_cutie · 07-21-2005, 07:54 PM

Chapter 2

4 years later

Passion- Brown str8 hair, Fine ass body, Big ass and C cup boobs, Fine ass hell

*At a party..Passion walks in wearing black capris a tight white shirt her hair was crunched her make up was chola style..All the vatos were looking*

Hyna: damn girl you made it
Passion: oh wuz up baby doll

Baby Doll-white complected,her hair is up to her shoulders,fine ass body, big ass and tits, but passion looked better,her make up was chola style and she was wearing a pink mini skirt and a white muscles shirt*

Baby Doll: nada but im glad your here look at all these fine vatos
Passion: there fine alright

*Passion and Baby Doll stare at all the vatos..all of a sudden Passions Song comes on "La Tortura" by Shakira*

Passion: [img]/images/graemlins/shocked.gif[/img] my song
Baby Doll: lets go dance..show these vatos what they can have*winks at her*
Passion: orale

* Passion and Baby Doll go to where everyone was dancing and they start dancing on each other all sexy...Passion turned around and started goin down while Baby Doll was behind her...All the vatos were staring...Then 2 vatos got the courage and stepped up one infront of Passion and one behind Baby Doll*

Passion: sup chulo
Vato: sup mami you dance firme and your firme..como te llamas*puts his hand behind her and presses her against him and they start goin down*
Passion: My name is passion y tu
Vato: David but they call me Dreamer
Passion: and why is that
Dreamer: becuz i dream of hynas like you
Passion: *blushes*oh yeah
Dreamer: simon

*Passion turns around and drops down and comes back up rubbing her ass all over his Dreamers dick..he got hard and Passion smiled cuz she felt it*

Passion: wanna get out of here
Dream: hell yeah mami
Passion: orale..BABY DOLL

*Baby Doll was freakin with that one vato..she turns around*

Baby Doll: que
Passion: im out mija ill catch you later *winks*
Baby Doll: oh shit lol orale pues hit me up later
Passion: you know it

*Passion and Dreamer left*

Vato: Damn tha girl just met him and now they left together
Vato 2: yeah thats Passion..shes bomb huh
Vato: yeah but why does she do that
Vato 2: i dont know but i been with her already
Vato: damn..well im out homie thanks for the invite
Vato 2: fa sho homie hit me up

*He leaves*