pimpass paradise:strictly business

[fresko]

ok well yea ima start writing a 2nd story cuz im feeling creative,ima keep rags to riches going still tho ill try to post a new part for 1 story 1 day and for the other the next day,or witchever im more in the mood for haha

this story the tittle is inspired by the bob marly song,but the actual story is fully original i made it up.i aint gonna say too much about it so you guys the readers can try to figure stuff out on your own.ok pues here it goes....


its 11am in LA,its a hot saturday.a 17yr old girl was all dressed up nice cuz she wanted to go to the mall with her friends.her name is alicia but her friends call her "candy" cuz shes a sweety.she was a beautifull girl she had a really good body with a nice round apple booty and a really cute face,she had long dark hair and brown eyes she was short about 5'2,she was very innocent and still had a lot to learn about life,but if you asked her she was "grown up".she lived with her parents and was still in high school,she had a boyfriend before that left her brokenhearted so she wasnt looking for a boyfriend,she was used her looks to get things she wanted from guys.
she called up her best friend veronica.
veronica was also very pretty she was already 18 and she had a man.her and candy had been best friends since middle school



vero-hey girl wassup
candy-nothing vero,lets go to the mall!!
vero-i dont have money
candy-so me neither lets just go look around
vero-i cant today candy ima go out with my man
candy-aww ok then whatever i guess ill go by myself
vero-sorry mi candy
candy-esta bien go out with your man,ill let you go then bye
vero-ok bye

candy didnt want to stay home so she asked her mom to go drop her off at the mall.when she got there she was walking around looking at the clothes and trying them on.guys would come up to her trying to get her number but she didnt give it to them.she did get some free food from some guys tho.she kept on looking around the mall when she got to the gucci store she saw an outfit in the display window that he really liked,it was a cute top with a little skirt.
she thought to herself,"dam if i wore this to a party i would be the center of atention,i dont have money but i wonder how much it cost"
she checked the price tag,"$1,500!!! dam is it made out of gold or what,fuck i cant ever afford this".
she stood there infront of the window just stareing at the outfit picturing herself in it making all the guys want her and all the girls jealous.


a guy was sitting close by behind her just chillin he was drinking a soda.his name was victor but everybody called him "rey" or "king".he had on some levis,a versace black shirt,a black leather jacket,some black timbs and some cartier sunglasses.he had a fade and a goatee and was skinny and not too tall he was 5'11 and he was 22 years old.what stood out about him the most was his jewlery,he had 3 diamond rings,a platinum rolex watch and a platinum chain with diamonds on it and a crown hanging from it.
he noticed the girl and she caught her attention so he walked up next to her.

rey-you like that dress?
candy-huh? o yea its so cute i want it really bad
rey-is that right,then get it
candy-uh no its too expensive i cant afford it its $1,500
rey-is that all?
candy-yea thats a lot
rey-haha i guess for some people it is

she looked at him and noticed his clothes and jewlery

candy-are you a rapper or something?who are you?
rey-o im victor but everybody calls me rey or king however you want,and no i aint no rapper
candy-im alicia but everybody calls me candy,well you look like a rapper to me
rey-i aint no rapper...but people do tell me i got a way with words...i guess you can call me a motivational speaker haha
candy-do you do speeches at schools or what
rey-nah i ummm motivate people to do things they normaly wouldnt do.
candy-like what?
rey-anything i want

candy thought that was kinda strange,but it got her attention she started thinking maybe he was the boss of a company.

rey-wanna try on that outfit?
candy-omg i would love to but nah then ima just fall in love with it more
rey-come on just put it on

he took her inside and made her try on the outfit.she went to the fitting rooms and put it on then she came out to show rey.

candy-omg i love it!!! what do you think

rey just nodded he wouldt take his eyes off her

rey-ill buy it for you
candy-what?!
rey-yea ill buy it for you come on

candy couldnt believe it,guys had done a lot of stuff to try to get her attention but never something like this.she went to change into her clothes again and came back to the cashier where rey was waiting.it was $1,500 plus tax like $1,650.he pulled out a money clip he had in his pocket and it was a thick stack of pure hundreds.candy and the cashier just looked at eachother like "dam!".
he paid for the outfit and then told candy

rey-ok there now have a good day bye

and he walked away like nothing he didnt even ask for her number witch left candy just stunned standing there like "wtf just happened",after a lil bit she kinda snaped out of it and ran after him

candy-wait!! wait!!
rey-what
candy-arent you gonna atleast ask me for my number?
rey-you wanna give it to me?
candy-ummm well yea,you just bought me the best outfit like if it wasnt nothing i gotts repay you somehow
rey-hhhmmm how old are you?
candy-im 17
rey-o...nah your too young for me

that got her kinda mad cuz se didnt want to be considered like a lil kid

candy-wait but ima be 18 in 2 months,see im not that young
rey-i guess....you drink?

she burly ever drank alcohol just sometimes when her friends were able to get some from older friends but she wanted rrey to think she was mature

candy-ummm yea i drink all the time
rey-ok come with me to a bar nearby and have some drinks with me
candy-ummm but they aint gonna let me in
rey-haha dont trip about that lil mama you rollin with me

candy got excited and thought to her self "wow i found me a guy thats powerful"
they left the mall and went to the parking to reys car.he was driving a all white brand new cadillac dts with big rims on it
candy-wow thats your car?
rey-yup,thats 1 of them

she was in awe,she felt like in a fantasy.
they got in the car and it had really nice comfortable white leather seats.and there was a computer where the stereo is at.
they drove away a few blocks away to a bar,candy was scared that they were gonna ask her for id but when they walked in the security guard just shook reys hand and let them in,they sat at a booth and the bartender came to them

rey-what do you want
candy-ill have whatever you have
rey-ok
(he turned to the bartender)
bring us some jack daniels and keep it coming

they sat there for a while just talking and candy was getting more comfortable around rey,and after 2 drinks candy got a buzz and started getting more loose and touchy feely with rey and flirting with him.thats exactly what he wanted,rey knew what he was doing,he had been drinking but he was still very aware of everything,he had plans for candy.he thought she was a nice girl but he knew he could make some money off her,it wasnt personal,just strictly business.so he started asking her questions

rey-so you got a boyfriend?
candy-hell no,im very single and ready to mingle.i broke up with my ex a while ago after 2 years of being with him that fucken dog cheated on me!
rey-o is that right?so im guessing you aint a virgin right?
candy-no i made the mistake of letting hm be my 1st but whatever tho.

he took out a big cuban cigar and started smoking it

rey-you smoke?
candy-ummm yea sometimes

no she didnt,but she didnt want to seem like a little girl
he gave her a cigar and lit it for her,she started coffing and he smiled
she tried to play it off

candy-haha i havent smoked in a while
rey-yea whatever its cool....so you know how to fuck right?
candy-ofcourse i do its easy
rey-is that right? how do you fuck then
candy-well when i was with my ex i would just lay down and he did everything
rey-thats it?
candy-well yea it is
rey-haha dam you got a lot to learn...how old was your ex
candy-he was my age
rey-no wonder,he just a kid haha,you ever been clubbing?
candy-no not yet i want to go to a club downtown tho called "paradise nights" all my friends that are 18 and over go there every saturday and they tell me its the bomb

rey started laffing softly and puffed on his cigar

rey-is that right?
candy-hells yea i cant wait to go there

reys cell phone started ringing he was talking to somebody about some money
after a lil bit he clicked

rey-hey lil mama i gotta go,pero let me get your number then ill hit you up this weekend...so you can wear your new dress haha

candy got excited cuz she thought he was interested in her,she didnt know what was gonna happen but she didnt care tho she realy liked rey a lot.so she gave him her number.after that they left and he droped her off at the mall again and he left.candy stayed and calle her mom to come pick her up.

her mom-cabrona estas boracha?!
candy-ooo ummm no mom!

she forgot she was drunk she tried to play it off but you know moms aint dumb,she got in trouble but she didnt care she wanted to see rey that weekend....

[loretta03]

sounds cool keep writing i like it

[.:LA_PERLA:.]

i like it, wacha Ray going to sell her body and she going to suffer. Keep it coming i like it!!!!!

[payasita313]

r3y's gonna b3com3 h3r pimp, pu3s k33p it komin.

[_xX.HiS BAbBy]

ORales sOunds gOOd; i like itt! KEEp iT COMiNGG

[mexi_chika]

i like i so far kic

[fresko]

thanks for the luv im glad you guys like it so far,heres more

the rest of the week candy was excited about meeting Rey and couldnt wait to go out with him that weekend. she was telling her friends about him when she went back to school.
she had 2 other close friends besides veronica,they were cynthia and bianca.they werent as pretty as candy or veronica,but they were all good friends.

candy-omg you guys i met a really cute guy at the mall on saturday.
vero-o really? wow about time you find a guy that took your mind off whats his face
bianca-yea i know,well tell us about him already what does he look like
cynthia-yes,yes,yes!!! tell us everything!!
candy-ok girls well,el se llama victor but they call him king witch is perfect cuz i wanna be his queen haha.hes so cute he looks kinda skinny but built and he has tattoos.he has a teardrop by his left eye and he had some lips on his neck idk if he had any on his arms he was waring a leather jacket.
bianca-wait umm doesnt the tear drop by the eye have a crazy meaning or something?
cynthia-yea it means he killed somebody or something like that que no?
candy-ugh who cares people dont take stuff like that serious im sure he got it just cuz he liked it.but anywayz he had a fade and a goatee and omg you guys shouldve seen all the diamonds he was wearing.he had on diamond earings,a chain,a rolex and like 3 rings....im pretty sure if i get with him hes gonna keep me in diamonds too hehe
vero-so he has money?
candy-hells yea girl he bought me a $1500 gucci outfit like nothing and his car,wow it was so cool.
bianca-what does he do or what
candy-idk i didnt ask him i thought he might be the boss of a company or something witch is really cool cuz hes just 22.but he said he was a motivational speaker or something like that.
cynthia-wow girl ima need to find me a man like that too hehe has he called you?
candy-no im really hoping he does tho,he said he was gonna cal me to go out on saturday.
vero-thats good now we dont gotta feel bad for going clubbing and not taking you with us.
candy-your going clubbing again?
vero-yea my man is gonna hangout with his homies and play videogames so fuck that ima go out with my girls
candy-omg you guys are lucky i cant wait to turn 18 and go with you guys,witch 1 are you going to?
cynthia-we going to "paradise nights" again i swear that club is so good,its crackin all nite till it closes
candy-ah i need to go to that club for reals!!

the rest of the week candy was excited and wouldnt shut up about the day she met Rey.everyday she hoped he would call her atleast just to talk a lil while, she was thinking that maybe he wasnt as interested as she thought.as eachday passed and he wouldnt call she would get more desperate to hear from him.
it was already saturday and rey still hadnt called her,candy was feeling disapointed cuz she really liked him.it was around 4 in the after noon and she was in her room bumming it just laying in bed listening to her ipod when her cellphone started ringing.the number came out private so she answered.

candy-hello? whos this
rey-wassup lil mama
candy-victor? is that you?
rey-yup,the 1 and only

her heart started beating fast from the excitement

candy-omg i thought you werent gonna call me i thought you didnt like me
rey-haha nah dont trip i liked you.you got plans for tonite?
candy-no not yet i dont
rey-orite cool,cool,so then you wanna get wild tonite o que mija?
candy-sure,que vamos hacer rey?
rey-dont trip,just be ready by 9
candy-ok i will!
rey-yup,let me get your adress then so i can pick you up
candy-ok cool

she gave him her address

rey-orite then ill be there around 9 be ready bye

he clicked before she could even answer.she got all happy and started getting ready imeadtly,she went to take a shower and shave her legs and everything,then she started doing her hair she did it straight.then she did her make up all pretty.thenshe put like a tanning lotion all over her body so she could have a nice lookiing tan,especially since she was gonna be showing off a lot of skin in her new outfit.she put it on and she put on some high heels and she stood infront of the mirror checking herself out making sure that she looked perfect.after she saw that she did look good she put on some perfume and then she waited a lil while.it was like 9:15 when rey got to her house he called her to come out.when she did she saw he was in a different car then last time.now he was in a black maserati gt,this 1 was way nicer then the cadilac.it had laborghini doors so when she opened the door to get in it swung up,she had never been in a car like that.she was way more impressed now then she was before.
rey was wearing an all black suit with a tie and everything and ofcourse he had his jewles on, they seemed to stand out more cuz of the black suit.

rey-whats cracking sweetheart you look amazing
candy-thanks you really like how i look?
rey-yup aint no doubt you a pretty lil thing

she blushed

candy-thanks,you look really good too and your cars amazing
rey-haha i guess its alright

he pulled out a cuban cigar and light it up and started smoking it.candy was just wondering where they were going.she kept on trying to start up conversations but rey wouldnt really respond much he ended up just turning up his music really loud.after a while of driving candy notices they start pulling up at a building with a lot of lights and a big sign in fancy cursive letters it said "Paradise Nights"

candy-omg its the "paradise nights" club ive been wanting to come here since the longest,they wont let me in im not 18 yet,my friends are gonna be here!!!
rey-haha chill lil mama it aint a big deal
candy-omg yes it is,ive heard so much about it.are you sure theyll let me in?
rey-i dont see why not,if i say you getting in then your in
candy-are you friends with the manager or something,hel be cool with me getting in?
rey-what? haha well he shouldnt say anything after all i am paying him
candy-o your paying him to let me in how sweet thank you

rey started laffing

rey-babygirl dont you get it? i am the owner,the manager works for me...

[_xX.HiS BAbBy]

DAM iS HEllA GOOd SO faR nO lie! Ahh i wOuld lOve tO meet a vatO like dha! KEEP itt COMinG

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keep it coming, dat girl is lucky!!!!hahaha keep it coming

[B4By_B00]

lovin' this story too;

keep it coming!