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Old 06-12-2009, 12:58 AM   #21
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dayum!
thats crazy;

post more asap plz.
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Old 06-12-2009, 01:19 AM   #22
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daaamn its good.

u got some talent for sure..

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Old 06-12-2009, 06:04 AM   #23
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keep it coming damn Rey is fucken rich!!!
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Old 06-14-2009, 10:20 AM   #24
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thanks for the luv,heres more

while chris was laying on the floor all bloody and beat up rey stood there laffing.

rey-motherfucker did you think i was playing with you? i thought i told you,i dont fuck around when it comes down to my money

chris tried to catch his breath and get up.then rey stomped on his hand and he started screaming

rey-hahahaha do you actually believe somebody can hear you?how stupid can you be.

he pulled out a knife from his back pocket and chris looked up in fear for his life.

rey-stand his ass up

reys thugs picked chris up and held him.rey grabed chris's left hand and started cutting his thumb off.chris screamed out super loud in pain.rey kept cutting till it was off.then he grabbed it and held it infront of chris's bloody face.

rey-see this shit nigga? if you dont get me my money by tomorow night,then ima be cutting up the rest of you.are we clear?
chris-ye...ye...yess wer clear
rey-orite then.keep this shit de recuerdo
(he put chris thumb in his pocket)
take this garbage out the back,o and clean this mess up,this bitch got blood all over my floor
thugs-yes sir,right away

3 of his thugs dragged chris out of reys office and the other 2 started cleaning the blood off the floor then they left the room to throw the bloody rags away.


candy was having a good time dancing with her girls and getting drunk.when she noticed some guys dragging a a body out of a room,she assumed it was reys office so she decided to go see what had happened.


candy-ill be back girls
girls-whoooo,ok girl hurry back!

she left and walked thru the crowd of people till she got to the door and she went inside.inside it seemed like a kick back spot,there was a huge tv and speakers everywhere and huge couch against the wall and there was another door on the other side of the room so she went to it.she slowly opened it and saw rey sitting in his chair wiping his hands.she went inside.
she was already drunk,and she was really attracted to rey she wanted to try to seduce him into wanting her.
she slowly walked up to him walking all sexy,she almost stumbled cuz she was drunk but she pulled it off,rey just looked up at her still wiping his hands with the towel.


candy-hey,what happened
rey-nada,just business
candy-o is that right

she sat on his lap and made sure to pull her skirt up a lil bit to get his attention.rey put his hand on her inner thigh and the other on the arm rest of the chair.
rey-yup,so what you having fun?
candy-yes im having a blast,but...
rey-ummm yea?
candy-i really rather be with you...alone.and uh idk see wassup

she looked into his eyes trying to look as sexy as she could

rey-o yea? thats cool...not today tho
candy-o,why not?
rey-you cute n all but you aint 18 yet,im just letting you kick it cuz you caught my attention.
candy-o papi but who cares if im not 18 yet just 2 more months till my birthday

she said as she rubbed her hands on his chest and arms and started kissing his neck

rey-then you can wait those 2 months.

candy was really surprized that she could not seduce rey,usually she would just have to talk nice to a guy to get anything she wanted from him and with him she was practically throwing herself at him and he was unphased.
she noticed all the tattoos he had.besides the tear drop by his eye and the lips on his neck,on 1 arm he had grip of skulls, some looked old some looked fresh,like if he had burly added some recently.on his collar bone he had "death before dishonor".o his other arm he had a crown with "el rey" in old english,on that same arm on his forearm he spider webs,then the spider webs seemed to tear,and inside the tair it had a picture of a naked girls body laying on money.on his back he had "lost angel" with some broken wings on the ends.


candy-what do all your tattos mean?
rey-huh?
candy-yea,whats with all the skulls on this arm

he didnt want to say that each skull represented a person he had killed

rey-o that,nada i just like how it looks
candy-o...do you like the way i look?
rey-haha yea lil mama you look good
candy-o yea?
rey-yea

she kissed him and he didnt stop her,after a while of kissing she felt like if she had succeed in making him want her.

rey-orite lil mama,i got business to handle go chill with your girls the club is burly starting to get cracking
candy-ok mijo

as she stood up she made sure to stick her ass out so rey would notice.rey stood up and walked her to the door,as they got to the door,it opened and a girl walked in wearing a tiny little skirt with her ass hanging out the back and a tiny lil top with her tits all out.

girl-hey daddy

she said as she hugged rey and kissed him, he slapped her big ass....
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Old 06-14-2009, 11:30 PM   #25
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OMG!! KEEP IT GOING PLEASE!!
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Old 06-15-2009, 05:26 AM   #26
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keep it coming!!!!!!! that was funny when he put his thumb in his pocket and told him to keeep it for recuerdo haha but shit that must of hurt like a bitch!! well anyways keeep it coming and uuuu i bet candy is going to get jelous
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Old 06-15-2009, 10:41 AM   #27
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keep it comming
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Old 06-15-2009, 01:03 PM   #28
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Old 06-15-2009, 04:10 PM   #29
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keep it komin
its really intrestinq
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Old 06-15-2009, 04:25 PM   #30
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iLOVE yAHH StORy ...and bet candy is gOinG to be all jelOus and shxt.! and damm rey sounds like sexy mothafUCkER lOl keep itt cOMing ...-sOOn
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