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Old 10-31-2009, 10:20 AM   #1
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It was weird, it was crazy
how this classy lady
would fall from a vato from another clicka
This lady’s a goddess a beautiful mamacita
face of an angel mind of a killer
This vatos a hustler a hard chore gangster
he had every ones respect
But except …
From this lady who knows she’s hardcore
So she cruises through the varrio of that vato loco
Shes wearing a color that the vato dislikes
So like the leader he is he pulls out his knife
The chick starts to panic but puts on no show
She stays firme For she has a reputation also
Bien parada standing tall
just hoping not to fall
She says;
“come on puto don’t trip! don’t be scared of no chick!”
The vato’s now pissed he starts to walk forward
But as he gets closer he was stunned by her beauty
She knows she cant lie she though he was a cutie
Their moods start to change as they stare at each other
El vato le dice;
“♥I’ve never seen a star up so close you shine so bright
I think this is what you call love at first sight♥”
She try’s hard not to smile so she wont show her weakness
Pero algo le paso this lady couldn’t resist
As they lean in close trynna get a kiss
The vatos homie comes from behind
Holding up a four-nine
He puts the toy to his head
CLiCk! CLiCk! The vatos dead
The lady starts to scream trynna put up a fight
But the homie points at her and ends also her life,
The “homie” standing tall as he looks down at his “friend”
He thinks in his head “this vato was better off dead,
he thought he was the big boss
he made me feel little
but whos standing now muthafuker?!! Im the new leader.”
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Old 10-31-2009, 10:36 AM   #2
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interesting storyline..

hmmm call it reymundo y julieta
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Old 10-31-2009, 01:50 PM   #3
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Default Re: A POEM i MADE DNt kNOE WUt tO NAME iT ANy iDEAS??

Originally Posted by Senorita Maleeka View Post
interesting storyline..

sure was.....

hmmm call it reymundo y julieta
lol......i get it though.
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Old 10-31-2009, 07:14 PM   #4
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Originally Posted by Senorita Maleeka View Post
interesting storyline..

hmmm call it reymundo y julieta
HAHAHA HMMMM....... jk
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Old 11-01-2009, 09:35 PM   #5
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its dope,keep it up ma..

"position of power" or "deadly attractions" could be good names lol
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Old 11-03-2009, 03:28 AM   #6
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ORALE THATS FRIME ESA I LIKE THAT STORY CAUSE ITS SO DAMN TRUE I GIVE YOU PROPS CHAVITHA
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Old 11-06-2009, 03:46 AM   #7
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Originally Posted by shadow aka el colombo View Post
its dope,keep it up ma..

"position of power" or "deadly attractions" could be good names lol



LOL i WOULD OF NEVER tHOUGHt OF SOMEtHiNG SO SOPHiStICAtED SOUNDiNG tHAtS SiCK!!
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Old 11-06-2009, 03:47 AM   #8
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Originally Posted by LA_PURTROA View Post
ORALE THATS FRIME ESA I LIKE THAT STORY CAUSE ITS SO DAMN TRUE I GIVE YOU PROPS CHAVITHA

GLAD yOU LiKED iT CHiCkA!

tHAnK yOU!!
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Old 11-10-2009, 02:17 AM   #9
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DAM DAT WAS BAD I LIKED IT GRL, U SHLD WRITE LIKE A STORY O SUMTN LOL U NO!!!!
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Old 11-11-2009, 05:38 PM   #10
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Default Re: A POEM i MADE DNt kNOE WUt tO NAME iT ANy iDEAS??

Originally Posted by LAD13_FLAKA_LUVZ_MORENO View Post
DAM DAT WAS BAD I LIKED IT GRL, U SHLD WRITE LIKE A STORY O SUMTN LOL U NO!!!!

i AGREE WItH tHiS HyNA,,yU SHOULD WRitE A StORy, tHiS POEMS FiRME
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