from rags to riches,to girls not bitches

[fresko]

so yea this is my 1st time trying to do something like this so let me know what you think and ill keep it going.

Intro: this story takes place in LA and its about a young man named fresko with no money and must do what he can to survive,and because he has suffered so much he was never able to have some1 special to call his own,his attitude and rudeness pretty much drew every girl away that ever tried getting close to him.All he had was his mom, his pride and his best friend Wicked. Will he find some1 special to understand him or will his ways be too much?

(sounds of hitting and grunts)
wicked-hurry up foo take whatevers and lets go before some1 comes
fresko-hold up i cant get this fucken watch off.
random person-please just leave me alone
fresko-shut the fuck up
(turns to wicked)
fresko- orite lets go then

wicked and i ran out of the alley a few houses down where my car was parked and we got in. it was an old ass honda accord that smelled like something died in it.my moms friend had given it to me as a gift when i turned 18.it was a piece of shit but it got me around and with enough cologne the smell wasnt too bad.

wicked-lets go step on it
fresko-man this piece of shit wont start

finally the car started and we left as fast as we could to the nearest pawn shop.

store guy-can i help you guys?
fresko-yea here we got some stuff how much can we get for it

we emptied our pockets and came up with about $20 a ring and an ipod and a nice gold watch that we had just took.we put the ring the ipod and the watch on the counter and waited for the store guy to tell us how much hell give us.we waited in silence for a few seconds and finally the guy said.

store guy-hmmm ill give you $120 for all of it
fresko-what! man thats too little,we got some good shit
store guy-take it or leave it

i was about to answer when wicked said

wicked-well take it
(i looked at him like "what the fuck")
wicked-chill dog its enuff for now dont trip lets just take that shit and go
fresko-fuck it then

so the store guy gave us the money and we left.the 1st thing we did is go to the gas station to put 5 bucks in my car.

fresko-dam its barely even a gallon i swear gas prices arre fucked up right now
wicked-serio?dam foo dont trip tho i got an idea and hopefully we can come up on some more cash.
fresko-what is it?
wicked-nah foo ill tell you later when i see whats up cuz i know your ass will try to talk me out of it
fresko-ummm alright then i guess

at that time some nice looking girls were passing by they had gone into the gas station to buy something

wicked-eeeee ay guey dam foo did you see those 2 hynas dam they were fine lets go see whats up with them.
fresko-orite then fuck it

so we went inside to talk to the girls and they were standing by where the chips were at so we went up to them and wicked started talking

wicked-dam whats up girls you 2 looking really beautiful serio you caught me my homies attention sick status im lil wicked by the way this is fresko
1st girl-hi im denise and this is my besty jessica

i stood there not saying anything i just smiled when they looked at me.see wicked was the type of foo that could walk in anywhere and talk to any girl and hook up with them with quickness so he would be hooking up with different girls all the time. on the other hand i was the quiet laid back 1 that wouldnt talk unless i was talked to 1st,its not that i didnt know what to say i just never was attracted in a way to make me be like "dam i gotta go get at her now" i always believed whatever happens happens so fuck it let it happen" when i would get a girl it was always the homegirl of the girl wicked was getting at.

jessica-hi umm fresko?
fresko-wussup
jessica-sooo umm what are you guys doing right now
fresko-nada just chillin cruisin around and you?
jessica-o well me and denise came to get some chips and drinks we gonna go back to my house and just chill since my parents arent home and theres nothing else to do,you know just 1 of those fridays that nothings happening,omg are either of you guys 21 yet so we can get some beers or something better cuz idk about denise but i wanna get tipsy....

dam she was talking so much she wouldnt shut up for reals maybe i got a.d.d or something but i got lost in my own world after about a minute i just kept saying "o yea? thats cool" until suddenly i kinda wake up from daydreaming and hear her say

jessica-your cute i like you, do you and your friend wanna come back to my house and kick it with us?
(wicked and denise came back from the refridgerators)
wicked-ey rfoo they invited us to they crib lets go
fresko-i know, orite then lets go
wicked-wel take you ladies in the homies car so you dont gotta walk, its late and we dont want something bad to happen to you beautiful ladies,unless we being bad together haha just playing
(they all laughed and i just smiled so i wouldnt be the weird 1)

the girls went to my car and were getting into the backseat and wicked and i stayed in the store a lil longer.

wicked-haha we gonna need lots of condoms foo cuz im fucking tonite shit i already started macking with that bitch while we were there in the back
fresko-o shit serio?dam i guess that other bitch is alright she got a big ass pero idk about the face
wicked-fuck it foo pussy dont got a face haha my bitch is bomb tho ima fuck that ass up!!
fresko-watch out "mr.porno" haha fuck it tho i am kinda stressed out so fuck it ill pipe that bitch

we pay for the condoms and put them in our pockets so the girls dont see them

denise-what took you guys so long
wicked-nothing beautiful we were just getting some gum want some?
both- sure

we got in the car and drove a lil bit down the street and around the corner,it was already like 7 at nite but the sunset still looked nice,i was admiring the sunset thru my rearview mirror then i hear jessica say

jessica-its right here mijo park in the driveway my parents arent coming till sunday
(i parked in the street i didnt trust her)
jessica-o umm ok nevermind i guess

we walked inside it was a very nice house i was just looking around to see what i could take,shit i gotta get my money..we sat on the couch and put on some musik,wicked and denise were sitting by the corner whispering to eachother and making it up.i sat there just chilling that couch was comfortable as hell it beat the fucked up chairs at my house so i was enjoying the chairs and the musik.then i guess jessica didnt wanna feel left out and she sat on my lapjessica-what you thinking of mjo,did i tell you i think your cute for reals your honey brown eyes are sexy as fuck.
fresko-nah you trippen they just eyes
jessica-no im serious papi idk something about them,o let me get your number yea? so we can talk more
fresko-orite then
(i gave her my number)
jessica-do you want mine?
fresko-ill get it when you call me

wicked and denise got up and started going to the back of the house where the rooms were at

wicked-well be back haha we gonna ummm
denise-ima show him something haha
wicked-yea she gonna show me something wel be back
(he looked at me with a face that i already knew what it meant, i had seen ot a lot of times before)

they disapeared thru a door and then it was just me and jessica alone.
she changed how she was sitting now she was sitting on top of me with her legs open and she looked at my eyes and said

jessica-i dont have a boyfriend i just been looking for the right guy
fresko-thats cool
jessica-yea and i want you to be that guy papi
fresko-um orite then i guess i can be that guy for a lil bit

she started kissing me and putting her tits all in my face,so i just went along with it and grabbed her ass,i took off her sweater and her top and yea i noticed she did have a great body but the face still didnt catch my attention,but either way i guess cuz i didnt really have a choice i started noticing more stuff about her,i had barely noticed her hair was dark brown with some highlights and that she smelled good i dont know about perfumes but that shit smelled good.still a part of me felt like if i wasnt even there.we were about to start fucking and i membered i still didnt have a condom on,so i got my jeans real quik and checked in my pockets and grabed the condoms and put 1 on.she was on top of me holding onto my shoulders riding me and moaning,i was there waiting for her to stop or get tired until finally she stopped outta breath and i threw her off and turned her around then made her bend over.now i was a lil bit more into it cuz dam she did have a bomb ass and that did catch my attention alot.after a while we stopped and i got dressed real quik but she stayed there naked looking super tired and she looked at me and said

jessica-omg that was incredi....
(we heard keys at the door)
jessica-fuck my parents! they gonna kill me!

i ran to the room wicked was in and opened the door,denise was naked on top of wicked, i said

fresko-ey foo we gotta go now the bitches parents are here lets roll!!
wicked-o shit!

and he threw denise off of him,i felt like laffing so hard but there wasnt time for that now.wicked just put on his dickies and got his shit and we got out thru the back window and all we hear is yelling in the background.we ran around the house to the fron and got in my car and left as soon as we could.

wicked-hahaha o shit that was close dam what a rush foo hahaha dam
fresko-hells yea and the way you threw that bitch was fuken funny as hell,o and look at what i came up on
(i reached into my pocket i pulled out and electric organizer)
wicked-o shit pinche fresko,you dont miss a chance huh
fresko-nah, im sure we can get something for this shit foo
wicked-yea pero fuck it lets go back to my crib im tired hahaha
fresko-fuck it lets go

we got to wickeds house and his sister was there with 5 of her homegirls.by the way his sister was the main way we would hook up with girls,she would bring different homegirls over all the time and wicked and i would end up fucking them.but this time was different.outta the 5 girls just 2 caught my attention imeadtly wicked started talking to 1 of them witch left the oter 1 for me.i didnt mind as a matter a fact when i saw her i felt something inside me just kinda wake up,i got a weird feeling in my stomach and i felt as if she was already mine i had never felt that way about no girl in my entire life it made me nervous as hell but it felt really good at the same time.i had to make her mine.....:cool2:

[El Camaleon]

This is pretty good. Is this a novel your working on?

[fresko]

nah i just got a lot on my mind that i gotta get off and since im in class not doing nothing i thought i would write about a part of my life.thanks by the way

[lagranpuchica]

Originally Posted by El Camaleon

This is pretty good. Is this a novel your working on?

fag

[superwhitemexican]

Eres Grande Muy Grande

[El Camaleon]

Originally Posted by lagranpuchica

fag

Don't hate on Fresko's literary work. Appreciate his talent.

[SandyCheeks]

your starting good, i like it.

i hope u post more!

<3 cheeks

[mommyslilangels]

I'm liking it....keep it coming....I wanna see what happends.

[fresko]

orite thankz for the comments.

she had on some dark blue tight jeans that complimented her body perfectly and she had on a baggy black sweater that looked really sexy on her.she was about 5'4" and her skin was light but not white either and she had a beautiful face every part of it from her eyes to her nose to her lips were flawless.her eyes were big and a beautiful brown that by looking in her eyes i felt lost in another world. she had some long eyelashes that when ever she blinked just seemed to wave in the air.she had a cute little nose and some gorgeus juicy lips that had me craving them like a fat kid craves a chocolate cake serio.her hair was long and black with like some blonde streaks or highlights and it just made it seem like a piece of heaven was trying to peek out thru her hair.i honestly have to say she really had face of an angel and the body of a goddess and even tho i had never said 1 word to her and just saw her for the first time i knew she was speacial i just felt something about her was different then the rest of the girls in the room. i didnt even notice the other girls in the room besides the one that the homie wicked started talking to.shit and i know the only reason he went for her was because she had on a mini skirt and for him that meant easy access.i was kinda in shock i didnt know what to do i was super nervous so i went to the kitchen with wickeds sister,baby wicked.i called her midget cuz she was really short like wicked. she called me asshole cuz yea i kinda was at times haha.

fresko- ey midget,whos that girl right there sitting at end of the couch
baby wicked-o shit y eso you didnt refer to her as a bitch like always?
fresko-huh?shit i dont know.who is she tho
baby wicked-ha! well i dont know her,shes angeliques cousin you know the 1 talking with my brother.but yea i just know she just moved here from chicago she staying with angelique i forgot to ask her name tho.ve hablale cabron if you wanna know so bad shit she aint talking to nobody since nobody know her abd my dumbass brother is all up on her cousin.
fresko-nah i dont know what to say,i dont wanna look like a dumbass
baby wicked-what the fuck asshole shes just like any other girl youve talked to before shit just go up to her and do your thing.ya leave me alone i gotta go talk chismes GO!
fresko-ah orite then chismosa thanks i guess

i was kinda trying to work up the courage to go sit next to her and start talking without looking like and idiot but the more i thought about it the more nervous i got and my stomach was hurting like a bitch and befor i could do anything i had to go pee.

(thinking to myself)
fresko-fuck what am i gonna say,i need to atleast know her name if anything.dam what the hell is up with me this has never happened before.
(i check myself in the mirror to see how i look)
ok my fade and line up are still clean,i shaved in the morning so im still good.

i thought i was ready but then i remembered about jessica earlier

fresko-o shit i smell like ass still

i opened up the mirror cabinet,hopefully wicked or his uncle had left an axe spray or something that i could use

fresko-come on fucken wicked dont tell me you dont got shit. yes!!!

luckily i found and old axe spray it was almost empty pero it was better then nothing,i got some toothpaste and started chewing it and put some water to rinse my mouth and i washed my hands like 5 times.

fresko-ok i think there.

i noticed my clothes and yea i looked a mess.i had on my fucked up dirty black chucks.some ripped jeans and a dirty white t wih blood stains from earlier.i decided to go ask wicked if i could borrow some shit for that while.he was still talking to that girl angelique and he had her all wrapped around his pinky finger.

wicked-damn babygurl your really sexy as hell i wanna see myself inside you.
angelique-is that right papi? dam i want that too but i dont wanna leave my cousin alone in the room.
wicked-nah dont trip mija ill make it quik just a sample you know?

i interupted them

fresko-ey foo come here i gotta ask you something
wicked-huh?o orite then
(to angelique)
hold up mija ima see what this foo wants

he came to where i was at

fresko-ey foo let me borrow somw clothes for a lil bit yea? ill give it to you alratito
wicked-for what foo te cagaste o what?
fresko-no bitch! cuz my clothes are all fucked up and i wanna go talk to that girl right there.
wicked-girl? what happened with bitch?
fresko-shit i dont fucken know!are you gonna let me borrow the clothes or what!
wicked-haha shit,ora pues just cuz you my homie and so you can go talk to that hyna so i`can bring the 1 im talking to into my room, cuz yea the dumb bitch dont wanna leave her cousin alone.
fresko-orite whatevers foo just with the quikness give me some shit

we went into his room and found a white t that fit me perfect luckily that foo wore baggy shit so i got some jeans too that fit me orite they were kinda short but if sagged them a lilbit they were good.but then the shoes was a problem cuz my feet were bigger then his.he let me borrow some white airforces that looked almost new he barely wore them cuz they fit him a lil big but when i put them on i had to bend my toes to make my foot fit,i was uncomfortable as fuck but i decided to just try to play it off.

wicked-ora pues homie go handlez so i can do my thing with the other 1
fresko-umm ok ill try foo bu i dont know wha tto say
wicked-foo just do what i do, introduce yourself and tell her you wanna fuck that always works for me haha
fresko-nah foo i dont wanna look like a dumbass
wicked-fuck it just go with it

we went back to the living room and i went back to the kitchen it was the only place i could keep my eye on her but pretend i was looking thru the kitchen incase she saw me.dam she was gorgeus.a lil bit later wicked came

wicked-what the fuck you waiting for que quieres una serenata when you walk up to her o what
fresko-nah bitch im just trying to think of what to say
wicked-just go

and he pushed me over in her direction and she looked up and i thought to myself "o shit" i tried to be cool about it and just smiled at her and she just looked away she looked mad pero dam idk why she just kept on looking better and better. i sat down a lil bit away from her to not make it to obvious i wasnted to talk to her.and i was just sitting there thinking of a way to start talking to her and then i hear

wicked-ey you girl! my homie wanna talk to you

Fuck!! he just laffed as he drank a corona

my girl- and?

it was the first time i heard her voice and i swear i felt like i was melting inside.finally so i wouldnt look stupid i decided to say something

[.:LA_PERLA:.]

i love your story its really good!!! keep it coming