from rags to riches,to girls not bitches - Page 2

SandyCheeks · 05-02-2009, 02:49 AM

lol... she must look extra jessica alba.. hawt for you know be able to say one word to her... lol

liken it.. keep them coming....

<3 cheeks

purdy_gata · 05-02-2009, 05:20 AM

new reader here..i like ur story so plz keep going

fresko · 05-02-2009, 11:01 PM

fresko-that foos stupid no le hagas caso
my girl-whatever

damn! she had an attitude but i liked that

fresko-whats up with you? you mad o what
my girl-dont trip thats my shit
fresko-dam orite.como te llamas? im fresko
my girl-dont worry about it. so?
fresko-nada just asking since i saw you here by yourself i thought you would wanna have some1 to kick it with
my girl-i aint here by myself im with my cousin

i looked over at wicked and angelique and thought to myself "well it look like she dont even remember you here mija"

fresko-um riiight if you say so

i decided to just chill a lil bit maybe try talking to her in a different way but i couldnt help but to feel like some1 was staring so i turned to my right where baby wicked was with the other 3 girls. baby wicked was all into her conversation but i noticed the other 3 kinda kept on looking over and dogging sick status but they werent looking at me.they kept on looking at the beautiful girl next to me i just thought to myself "dam these jealous ass bitches hating like krazy".

then 1 of them got up and came next to me

hater bitch- ey wassup mijo remember me? im monique i saw you here last time i came. i wanted to talk to you last time pero you left before i could get the chance.

if it wasnt about money then i dont remember shit

fresko-uh nah i dont remember you
monique-o...well yea prolly cuz i didnt talk to you
fresko-if you say so
monique-they call you fresko que no? i was asking baby wicked about you and she told me you dont got a lady is that right?
fresko-yup

she kept on asking me dumb questions but i just kept on thinking about the girl i really wanted to talk to

monique-let me give you my number yea?
fresko-i dont want it
monique-why not
fresko-i aint interested in you
monique-dam like that? thats fucked up
fresko-bitch do i care?
monique-whatever then asshole
fresko-fuck it thug life

and she started walking away but she turned real quik and said

monique-if you change your mind get my number from baby wicked i hope i do hear from you orite?

i just looked away.then baby wicked came next to me

baby wicked-dam asshole i knew you were fucked up pero tanpoco like that you coulve just said "no thank you" now the poor bitch is all emo and shit cuz of you
fresko-i dont give a fuck what that bitch feels
baby wicked-sabes que? you and my brother have been best homies for a while and you practicaly like part of the family pero on the reals vato you should check yourself if you keep acting the way you do you gonna end up being a lonely ass vato
fresko-whatever just go back to your stupid ass chismes and let me chill
b.wicked-ugh pinche vato grocero

as she walked away it suddenly hit me that the girl i wanted was right next to me and she heard everything that happened and i didnt want her to get the wrong impression of me.

my girl-dam your just a straight up asshole huh

i felt embarased and didnt know what to say

fresko-nah its not like that
my girl-yea whatever you probably just another low life motherfucker
fresko-nah
my girl-como que no i just saw how you treated that girl and your home girl and i see how your dumb friend is with my cousin and i know thats all you want with me i aint stupid

angelique came up tot he girl and said

angelique-celeste ill be right back ok cuz?
celeste-yea whatever

i turned to wicked and saw him give me that face again for the second time that nite.dam i guess shit was going good with his dumbass and i was like the most hated vato in the room.

angelique walked away with wicked and i was left in the room feeling fucked up the homegirl b.wicked and her dumb ass friends were dogging me and the girl i wanted to talk to witch i found out her name was celeste.that was a pretty ass name for a pretty ass girl.

i over heard the girls whispering to eachother

1st girl-man who the fuck does that bitch think she is
2nd girl-i bet that bitch think she better than us
monique-man fuck that bitch she the reason that foo was such an asshole to me
b.wicked-nah hes always like that no matter what trust homeboy got some issues

even tho they werent really talking shit about me i got mad cuz they were talking mad shit about celeste and they didnt even know her...well i didnt either at that time pero for some reason it hurt me and i can see celeste got mad too

fresko-ey you dumb bitches do know i can hear you right? dont be fucken running your mouths trying to be slick about it if you got something to say say that shit straight up si no then mejor just shut the fuck up serio

dam i couldnt believe i just stood up for celeste like that but i couldnt help it i just felt i had to

the girls just dogged me sick status so i did what i do best and threw up a big ass middle finger in the air.i heard the door close behind me and i turned and celeste was gone so i followed her outside

fresko-ey celeste? hold up
celeste-leave me alone
fresko-hells nah its like 11 and this hood aint safe for a girl like you something might happen
celeste-a girl like me? man tu ni me conoces!
fresko-i know!....but i want to
celeste-dumb you just wanna fuck me like your dumb friend is with my cousin

i stopped to think about it and realized that for once this was the 1st girl that i actually wanted to get with like that

fresko-umm well on the reals i wouldnt mind but thats not even what its about i just wanna get to know you
celeste-what?dam boy i think your a little too real
fresko-is that bad?
celeste-i dont know, its a change from all the rest of fucken mentirosos...that dont mean we cool now tho you still an asshole
fresko-orite i guess....but atleast im a real asshole not a fake 1
(isaid trying to be funny)

she tried not to laugh

celeste-yea i guess.dam you a crazy ass motherfucker huh
fresko-i dont know im just me
celeste-i guess

we were out by the parking lots of wickeds apartments

fresko-how old are you?
celeste-dont you know its rude to ask a woman her age?
fresko-o...my bad
celeste-im 16 and you?
fresko-"well dont you know its rude to ask a man his age" haha nah im just playing im 18
celeste-dam so you an asshole and a smartass haha
fresko-so i heard you just came from chicago is that right?
celeste-yea
fresko-why? how long you gonna be out here in LA
celeste-personal shit so my mom sent me here to live with my tia and cousin
fresko-ive never been outside of cali before whats it like for you coming here for the first time
celeste-its weird back home i had a bunch of friends and i knew everybody and i miss the huge buildings
fresko-dam that sucks...wait you havent been downtown yet? we got some big ass buildings too, wanna see them?
celeste-uh right now? im not getting in a car with you by myself i dont know you
fresko-haha nah i dont mean it like that come on follow me

i wanted to take her on the roof of the apartments next to wickeds, they were taller than his and me him would go up there all the time to just drink and smoke out listen to musik and just chill and think.we had never brought any girls up there it was like like our own kick it spot.but something about celeste just made me want to bring her up there.

i pushed open the buildings garage door a lil bit just enuff for me to get my arm in and open the door next to it.

fresko-come on
celeste-wait uh this dont seem legal
fresko-just come on
celeste-umm ok then

we went inside and walked to the back of the garage where the stairs were at and we started going up we got to the top floor but there wasnt stairs to get on the roof so we had to climb over the hand rail on to the slope of the roof and walk up on top.i didnt know if she was those type of girly girls so i said.

fresko-come on dont be scared of breaking a nail haha
celeste-fuck you.thats too high for me to climb ummm fresko?

that was the first time she said my name and it sounded so good coming from her

fresko- yea dont trip ill help you up
celeste-orite pero ooohh if you try to feel me up im gone i dont care if i gotta go walking and leave my cousin here
fresko-nah dont trip

i grabed her around the waist from the back and as i was gonna lift her up i smelled her hair and ahhh it smelled so bomb like berries or something like that

celeste-uh hello you gonna lift me or are you just gonna stand there like a dumbass

i honestly wouldnt have minded just standing there with her but yea haha

fresko-yea hold up im just ummm getting my strenght

idk that was a dumb excuse pero i couldnt think of anything else

i lifted her up over the hand rail and then i climbed over too.and we walked to the flat part of the roof.wicked and i had set up a fucked up old couch that somebody threw away up there.that day that we were getting it up there we almost broke our fucken necks but it was worth it. there was some empty corona bottles on the floor and some cigarete ends and the ends of those black n mild cigars that wicked and i had left from last time we came up here. and we can here a crackhead walking in the alley talking to himself in crackhead language and could see people from wickeds apartments.there was paisita party going on cuz they had the tamborazos and corridos all loud.and there was a mom screaming at her lil kid cuz he kept on getting cookies and he was suppossed to be sleeping. and what was funny as hell to me but celeste found disgusting was wickeds window.hahaha dam that stupid ass forgot to close the curtains and you could see everything!! hahaha

i pointed towards downtown where the "famous" LA buildings were

fresko-look see we got big buildings too
(she smiled)
celeste-yea i guess...they do look beautiful with the lights and stuff....umm thanks
fresko-for what
celeste-for showing me this...i guess for being a real asshole hahaha you aint too bad
fresko-o umm thanks i guess
celeste-dont tell me you dont know how to take a compliment?

i had never received a compliment from somebody that i actually liked besides my mom but that was different.so it was weird cuz i was used to hoodrats and other girls flirting with me and shit like that but i had never took any of them serious

fresko-something like that
celeste-ah manito you got some issues huh
fresko-i guess i dont know

we were kinda quiet for a while jsut enjoying the view i didnt wanna say nothing to ruin things.

after a while we went back down and wicked called me

wicked-ey foo where you at? they gonna come pick up the hynas foo
fresko-o orite then foo wel see you right now

we met up with wicked and angelique and angeliques hair was all fucked up and her skirt was sideways it was the funniest shit ever and wicked was just standing there looking like a dumbass with a big ass smile and sleepy ass eyes.so celeste started helping angelique fix herself so that her mom would say nothing

wicked-dam im hungry ima make some tacos,want some foo?

i wanst hungry at all but i told him to make me 5 and he went in to make them

i stayed outside with the girls waiting for their ride.after a while a lady got there in a dark honda civic and the girls were getting in

fresko-ey wait i still didnt get your number
(she laughed)
celeste-ok well today you got my name and if theres a next time you might get my number cuz you still an asshole haha bye
fresko-ah orite then latez
(they left)

i went inside to wickeds house and the other girls had left already and b.wicked had knocked out on the couch cuz her and wicked share the room and i guess she got tired of waiting for him to come out. and wicked was next to the stove making a grip of tacos hahaha that fucker could eat.

wicked-here foo yours are done
fresko-ora pues ill eat them when i get to my crib foo ima go
wicked-orite then foo ill hit you up tomorow. laterz
fresko-latez

when i got to my house i opened the door and i saw my madrecita knocked out on the couch in her uniform from work still.she worked nites at a candy factory and days cleaning houses. i went over to her and kissed her forhead and she woke up

mom-que paso mijo? que hora es?donde andavas?
fresko-nada ma estava donde el erik. tienes hambre?te traje unos tacos
mom-ay si mijo tengo mucha hambre
fresko-ok pues ma deja nomas te los caliento que ya se pusieron frios

i went to the kitchen to heat up the tacos for my mom and i saw her purse on top of the counter so i grabbed it and i pulled out my half of the $120 me and wicked got earlier and put it in before she could see me i didnt want her to ask me where i got the money. i stayed up with her while she ate her tacos and she told me about her day then i told her to go sleep in my bed that ill stay on the couch

as i layed in the couch i tried going to sleep but i couldnt i couldnt stop thinking about celeste she was the only thing on my mind....

.:LA_PERLA:. · 05-03-2009, 01:17 AM

awww u hope him and Celeste get together. thats sweet how he treats his mom keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love this story

L@kittygurl · 05-03-2009, 01:49 AM

just started reading n its hella good
keep it coming

fresko · 05-03-2009, 07:35 PM

thanks for the comments i appreciate it, well yea heres some more

She came to me in the middle of the night,with tears in her eyes and her clothes all wet from the rain.i couldn’t help to just stare at her,such a beautiful sight but so full of pain.i went outside to her I was just in my muscle shirt and basketball shorts I slept in.as soon as I opened the door I felt the wind push me back a little,it was freezing cold.colder than it had ever been.i thought about going inside to change but I said “fuck it who cares if I get sick”. As I walked up to her I felt the wind push me back more and more,with each step it pushed harder and it got colder.

Fresko-celeste! Come here its cold as hell.come inside its warm

But she just stood there as if she didn’t hear me, just crying and crying

Fresko-whats wrong? Why you crying?

I said as I struggled to get close to her.i was a couple feet away from her and she whispered

Celeste-I……..I need……..i need you
fresko-you need me for what celeste
celeste-I need you…..to fight for me…….i need you to be there for me…..i need you to let nothing take you away from me…….protect me

I could barely take another step but I kept trying with all my strengh to get to her.i wanted to hold her in my arms and tell her to not cry that everything was ok.

Fresko-ill always be here for you don’t trip,protect you from what? Celeste your not making any sense

I was lost,I liked her a lot but dam I had barely met her and how the fuck did she know where I live at.and what the fuck was up with the weather man something didn’t feel right.she kept crying and I kept trying to get to her.i was almost with her and a grip of fog came out of nowhere and surrounded us.i couldn’t see her but I heard her whisper.

Celeste-fight for me…..dont let nothing get in the way

I was determined to reach her so I just kept on slowly taking steps towards her and tried to ignore the fog and the wind in my eyes
Finally I reach her and put my arms around her.and everything just seemed to have stopped and cleared like if nothing had happened,and I thought to myself “fuck why couldn’t that shit gone away sooner” pero it didn’t matter to me anyways all that mattered to me was that I was with her.i tried to kiss her but as I was gonna kiss her everything went dark and I could hear the song “ambitions as a ridah”.i realized it was my ringtone and it had all been just a dream.i opened my eyes and checked my phone and it said “Wickeds dumbass”

Fresko-hello
Wicked-dam foo finally you fucken answered I thought you died I was gonna go ask your mom if I could have your chain.

My silver chain was the only thing of real value that I owned.my grandma had given it to me before she died so it meant a lot to me trust I would defend it to the end.

Fresko-fuck you puto
Wicked-on the reals tho dog its like 2 in the afternoon I been trying to reach your ass I gotta talk to you
Fresko-o shit serio? Why whats crackin
Wicked-nah I cant tell you on the phone foo, it aint safe, meet up with me at the playground,o and don’t forget to my bring my clothes.
Fresko-umm orite then ill be there in a lil while latez
Wicked-alratoz

I clicked and saw I had like 5 unread txt messeges and they all said “wake up you lazy motherfucker” and 10 missed calls all from wicked except for 1 witch was a number I didn’t recognize so I didn’t call back.
I went to take a shower and got dressed and I got a pan dulce to eat.the whole time I was just thinkng what could that dream have meant.i got the clothes wicked had let me borrow and put it in my old backpack from when I was in highschool. it was all tagged up since I couldn’t afford a yearbook I let all the homies and homegirls write all over it and shit so there was numbers on there girls had left that I never called and some old homies saying we should kick it but I hadnt heard from them since the last day at school.none of it meant anything to me but it was cool just having the memory I guess.

As I left I took the electronic organizer with me so I could go sell that shit later

When I got to the playground wicked was already there and he had 3 boxes with him

Fresko-whats up with the boxes
Wicked-that’s what I wanted to talk to you about foo look.
He opened 1 of the boxes and it was full of knives
Fresko-whats up with all the knives foo?where you get them?you gonna join a circus and throw knives as your trick or what?hahaha
Wicked-no stupidass! WE gonna sell these shits.un chino at the swapmeet told me the cops don’t let him sell these and he had 3 boxes full of them so he that hel give me each box for $20 i used my 60 bucks from yesterday.theres like 50 in each box.

I took 1 out,it was 1 of those butterfly knives that you gotta flip open, it was black.wicked took out a silver 1

Wicked-theyre sick huh foo,keep that 1 and ill keep this 1 znd wel sell the rest
Fresko-foo if we sell them for like 5 bucks each we can make like $250 off each box and maybe a little more if we find dumbasses that will pay more for them
Wicked-exactly,we can sell them to the youngsters running around in the gangs that try to act hard haha
Fresko-yea huh?....ummm ey foo did you get that 1 bitches number,the 1 from last nite.
Wicked-angelique?simon haha shit an ass that good I gotta fuck a couple times before I drop it.
Fresko-orite cool,hit her up foo tell her to kick it this weekend and to bring celeste
Wicked-siiiick you didn’t even get her number? Hahaha pinche fresko
Fresko-shut up bitch just call her
Wicked-haha ora pues hold up

He took out his phone and called.the funny shit about this foo was that whenever he would talk to a girl over the phone he would make his voice deeper.

Wicked-hello, whats up mija……..what you doing…….ora that’s cool,im just chilling here thinking about you
(he looked at me and made a face like “thinking about her my ass”)
Ey mija lets kick it this weekend yea?.........ora pues o and to bring your cousin cuz the homie keep bugging about her hahaha…..ora pues laterz
Fresko-what she say?
Wicked-que no foo that they gonna go kick it with some other foos
Fresko-o
Wicked-im just fucking with you foo, que si guey! To just hit them up to let them know what time we going.shit you aint gotta get all butt hurt hahaha
Fresko-ima beat your ass motherfucker
Wicked-hahaha whatevers nigga

We put the boxes in the trunk of my car.i thought to myself that if we sell these knives fast enuff I could afford to go buy some new clothes to wear for the weekend and take celeste somewhere.so I thought of all the gangbangers that I knew and the different gangs and witch foos would want to buy some knives and I knew a couple that would buy a grip and I knew another few that I could hustle and charge them more so everything looked like it was going good so far.i just had to get shit ready for this weekend for when I was gonna see celeste again.dam that girl got me acting like im not even me……