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Old 01-04-2009, 07:31 PM   #1
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WELL BP THiS iS MY 1ST STORY ON HERE SO READ AND REPLY AND TELL WHAT YOU THiNK.





Angelica aka Smiley:16 yrs. old,light brown eyes, long blk straight hair, thick in all the right places,nose pierced,hella pretty,all the vatos wanted her,down ass hyna(Menace's hyna)


Joanna aka Giggles:17 yrs old,light brown eyes,blk straight hair,thick,lip and belly pierced,hella pretty,down ass hyna (Flaco's hyna)




Smiley wakes up with her cell ringing


Smiley:Hello (sleepy voice)
Giggles:Hey bitch wake your ass up
Smiley:...
Giggles:Hello you there
Smiley:What (sounding annoyed)
Giggles:Get your ass up and get ready it's 2 in the afternoon
Smiley:Why what we going to do
Giggles:We going to the mall cause there is a party tonight and we are going ok im giving you an hour and a half ok esa
Smiley:But..


'Click'
Giggles hung up.so Smiley gets up and jumps in the shower she gets out and looks at her cell she got 4 missed calls from Menace so she calls back


Menace:Hello(sounding mad)
Smiley:you call baby
Menace:Yea what the fuck you doing that you didn't answer your phone
Smiley:I was in the fucking shower Menace(getting mad)
Menace:And where do you think your going
Smiley:You know what menace I don't got time for your bullshit Im gonna get ready to go out with giggles and you can call me when you ain't talking shit!!


'Click' She hung up the phone and threw it on her bed she finish getting ready and called up giggles


Mario aka Menace:18 yrs old,hazel eyes,bald,built a lil,eyebrow pierced,had a few tatoos,cholo,hella fine,norteno,down ass vato,was in love with Smiley


Giggles:Hello
Smiley:Hey bitch you ready
Giggles:Yea I'll be there in 5 minutes so be ready ok esa
Smiley:Ok well hurry your ass up
Giggles:Bitch I'll be there(laughing)


'Click' Giggles showed up 5 minutes later


Smiley:Hey esa you took long enough(getting into the car)
Giggles:Shut up bitch(laughing)
Smiley:So who's party is it
Giggles:You know that one vato Joker
Smiley:Yea I know him
Giggles:Well it's his b-day he turning 21 so he having a big ass party
Smiley:Thats whats up esa


They finally pulled up to the mall, got some outfits for the party and left


Back with Menace
Menace was hella pissed
So he decided to call up the homeboy Flaco


Fernando aka Flaco:18 yrs old,grey eyes,bald,lower lip pierced,had a few tatoos,hella cute,cholo,norteno,down ass vato,was in love with giggles


Flaco:Whats up ese
Menace:What you doing ese
Flaco:Just kickin back here at the pad
Menace:Well shit whats going down tonight
Flaco:That vato Joker having a party tonight you want to hit that shit up ese
Menace:Simon ese you know Im down for that



Sorry it's short but tell me what you think and let me know if i should keep posting
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Old 01-15-2009, 02:22 PM   #2
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Flaco:Alright ese be here at my pad in an hour
Menace:Alright ese

They both got off the phone and got ready
Menace finish getting ready and headed over to Flaco's pad

Flaco:Whats up ese (opening the door)
Menace:Whats up (giving him an handshake)
Flaco:I just called up the homeboy Pelon he going to ride with us
Menace:alright what time the party start ese
Flaco:at 10
Menace:Well Pelon need to hurry his ass up

Then there was a knock at the door
Flaco opens the door

Pelon:Whats up ese
Flaco:Whats up its about time you get here (laughing)
Menace:So you vatos ready to roll
Flaco & Pelon:Simon

Marcos aka Pelon:19 yrs old,light brown eyes,bald,built,eyebrow pierced,had a tatoo on the back of his head,cholo,hella fine,all the hynas wanted him,norteno,down ass vato

Smiley and Giggles got ready at Giggles house
They were ready by 10 so they headed out

Smiley:Hey esa have you talked to flaco
Giggles:Yea like 2 hrs ago
Smiley:Was he with Menace
Giggles:No he wasnt
Smiley: Ohh(putting her head down)

Giggles looked over at Smiley and noticed she looked sad

Giggles:Whats going on Smiley
Smiley:Nothing just having problems again
Giggles:He trippin again
Smiley:Yea i don't want to talk about it
Giggles:Alright esa
Smiley:I just want to have a good time tonight

They finally pulled up to the pary and there was alot of people there already
They get out the car and go inside the house

Giggles: Damn esa it's paked in here
Smiley:Hell yea esa
Giggles:Shit lets go get us a drink
Smiley:Simon esa

They push their way through the people to get to the kitchen and they run into Joker

Giggles:Hey Joker happy b-day
Joker:Thanks mija (giving her a hug)
Giggles:How you doing
Joker:Good mija just trying to stay on the low
Giggles:Yea I know how that is well this my homegirl Smiley,Smiley this is Joker
Smiley:Hi(giving Joker a handshake)
Joker:Whats up Mija(looking at her up and down)
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Old 01-28-2009, 10:46 PM   #3
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its good keep on posting
what happens next
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Old 01-29-2009, 12:42 AM   #4
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keep the story going. u got me interested.
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Old 01-29-2009, 05:17 AM   #5
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Keep It Coming It Is Interesting
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Old 01-29-2009, 08:03 PM   #6
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Intresting story But isen't it suppose to be in the story board?
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Old 02-01-2009, 08:24 PM   #7
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THANKS FOR READiNG MY STORY
iLL TRY TO POST MORE AS SOON AS i CAN
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Old 02-03-2009, 02:22 PM   #8
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Smiley just smiled at him and looked away

Joker:Well thanks for coming

Smiley and Giggles walked off and go get a drink

Angel aka Joker:21 yrs old,brown eyes,bald,built,had a few tatoos,cholo,cute,down ass vato

Menace,Flaco,and Pelon leave the house and head over to the party they get there in 30 minutes.They get off the car and head into the house.They are walking through the house and say whats up to all the homeboys.

Giggles and Smiley are standing in the corner of the living room not realizing Menace was there.They were talking to some homegirls

Menace: Damn ese there are some fine ass hynas
Pelon:Yea I know ese (looking around)

Then Pelon sees Smiley and Giggles

Pelon:Hey Menace
Menace:What ese
Pelon:Look over there (pointing to where Smiley was at)

Menace looked over to where Pelon was pointing and saw Smiley.He got hella pissed to see her there.So he started walking over there.Smiley had her back turned to him.

Menace:WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING HERE!! (grabbing Smiley's arm real hard and pullin her towards him)
Smiley:What the fuck Menace don't be grabbing me like that
Menace:What the fuck are you doing here
Smiley:What do you think Im doing
Menace:Being hoe

With that said Smiley slaps Menace
Giggles grabs Smiley and pulls her back
Menace just looked at her in shock

Smiley:Fuck you Menace we're through Im tired of you and your bullshit

Menace just stared at her not knowing what to say he was thinking to himself "this bitch just fucked up"and Smiley deep down knew she did

Menace:Alright esa it's like that fuck you then (turns and walks out the house)

Flaco and Pelon walk after him and they all leave.

SORRY THATS ALL i CAN WRiTE FOR RiGHT NOW
iLL TRY TO POST MORE REAL SOON
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Old 02-04-2009, 05:57 AM   #9
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Keep it coming its good
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