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Old 02-06-2009, 07:19 AM   #11
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GURL..U JUS HAD T0 ST0P..K.iC.
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Old 02-07-2009, 04:45 PM   #12
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THANKS FOR THE REPLiES


Giggles:You alright esa
Smiley:Im alright but im not gonna let that dumbass ruin my night
Giggles:alright esa

Smiley was scared and didn't know what to do
So she just stayed a lil longer at the party with giggles
It was already 2 so her and giggles leave and head home

Giggles:you going home esa
Smiley:No is it ok if i crash at you pad
Giggles:Yea you know you don't have to ask
Smiley:alright
Giggles:Smiley are you sure you ok
Smiley:Yea esa im ok
Giggles:You know im here for you if you need to talk
Smiley:I know thanks girl
Giggles:Has he called you
Smiley:He's been blowin up my phone he called 20 times already
Giggles: Damn turn your phone off
Smiley:Yea i am fuck him

They finally get to Giggles pad and everybody was already asleep so her and giggles go straight to sleep
They woke up about 2 with Giggles brother jumping on the bed

Giggles:What the fuck Maniac(pulling the covers over her head)
Maniac:Get ya lazy ass up
Smiley:Get the fuck off fool
Giggles:I know buggin and shit
Maniac:Hurry get up so i can take ya shoppin
Giggles:For real both of us
Maniac:yes for real so hurry you to Smiley
Smiley: ok ok we're getting up and you better not be bullshitin
Maniac:Im not(walking out the room)

Hector aka Maniac:20 yrs old,light brown eyes,bald,built a lil,eyebrow pierced,a lot of tatoos,cholo,norteno,down ass vato,hella fine(Giggles brother)

So Giggles and Smiley start getting ready.they were both ready in an hour


i KNOW iTS SHORT BUT THATS ALL i CAN WRiTE FOR NOW
SO LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS
AND i WRiTE MORE SOON
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Old 02-07-2009, 08:40 PM   #13
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love it..more
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Old 02-07-2009, 11:06 PM   #14
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keep it coming chick and dont lagg it we like yor story
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Old 02-11-2009, 01:04 AM   #15
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Maniac:are ya ready
Giggles:yea were coming(walking out the room)
Maniac:about damn time
Giggles:shut up and lets go

THEY ALL HEAD OUT THE DOOR, AND GET iN MANiAC'S CAR

Maniac:Hey smiley where menace at
Smiley:shit idk and i don't give a fuck
Maniac: Damn mija what happened to ya
Smiley:just wasn't working out i don't want to talk about it anymore
Maniac:*turned to look a smiley*alright mija sorry but if there is anything you need let me know alright
Smiley:alright thanks

GiGGLES WAS ON THE PHONE WiTH FLACO THE WHOLE TiME.THEY FiNALLY PULL UP TO THE MALL 20 MiNUTES LATER.THEY GET OUT THE CAR AND HEAD UP TO THE MALL.THERE WERE A LOT OF PEOPLE.

Giggles:damn there a lot of fine ass vatos
Smiley:Hell yea there is
Giggles:It's about time to get you a new one*lol*
Smiley:Yep*lol*
Maniac:ya shut up and start shopping i got things to do tonite
Smiley:*turned to look at maniac*shut up fool your ain't got nothing to do*lol*
Giggles:i now right now lets go

SO THEY START WALKiNG THROUGHT THE MALL AND GOiNG TO THE STORES.SMiLEY AND GiGGLES EACH GET 4 OUTFiTS AND A PAiR OF SHOES.AFTER THEY WERE DONE SHOPPiNG THEY HEAD TO THE FOOD COURT,GET THEiR FOOD AND SiT DOWN

Giggles:You alright smiley
Smiley:Im alright.why
Giggles:cause your real quiet
Smiley:*putting her head down*ohh well im ok
Giggles:alright esa
Maniac:are ya ready to go or what
Smiley and Giggles:yea

THEY GET UP FROM THE TABLE AND THROW AWAY THE TRASH.THEY START TO HEAD OUT THE MALL.WHEN YOU HEAR SOMEONE YELL SMiLEY NAME.iN THAT TiME SHE FROZE.THEN TURNiNG AROUND TO LOOK AND STARTiNG WALKiNG FAST

Smiley:lets go maniac
Maniac:*stopped walking*it's menace
Smiley:i don't want to see him
Giggles:hurry maniac your heard her
Smiley:Plz maniac
Maniac:alright lets go

THEY FiNALLY GET OUTSiDE THE MALL, AND iNTO THE PARKiNG LOT.MENACE STiLL FOLLOWiNG.THEY GET iNSiDE THE CAR.BY THAT TiME MENACE COMES AROUND THE CAR AND KNOCKS ON THE WiNDOW.SMiLEY TURNS TO LOOK AT HiM.MANiAC LOWERS HiS WiNDOW

Maniac:whats up ese *giving him a handshake*
Menace:whats up
Maniac:what going on
Menace:I just need to talk to smiley

MANiAC TURNS TO LOOK AT SMiLEY
SMiLEY PUTS HER HEAD DOWN


Smiley:lets go maniac
Menace:smiley please i need to talk to you
Smiley:i don't have anything to say to you
Menace: please just hear me out
Smiley:no it's over menace
Menace: please just talk to me im sorry just come over to my house and talk then ill take you where you need to go

GiGGLES AND MANiAC TURN TO LOOK AT SMiLEY
SMiLEY HAS A WORRiED LOOK ON HER FACE
AND GiGGLES NOTiCES


Giggles:mija what are you going to do
Menace:Smiley plz
Smiley:alright ill go *taking a deep breath*
Giggles:are you sure mija
Smiley:yea im sure *looking up at giggles*
Giggles:alright call me if you need anything
Smiley: ok *opening the door*
Maniac:what about your clothes
Smiley:ill pick it up later*getting out the car*
Maniac:alright mija
Smiley:thanks maniac
Maniac:yea your welcome mija
Smiley:bye giggles
Giggles:bye mija

SMiLEY SHUTS THE DOOR AND LOOKS OVER AT MENACE
MENACE JUST SMiLES


Smiley:hurry up lets go
Menace:alright mija*grabs her hand*
Smiley:don't touch me*pulling away from him*

THEY WALK OVER TO HiS CAR AND GET iN
iT WAS QUiET ALL THE WAY TO HiS HOUSE
SMiLEY KEPT THiNKiNG TO HERSELF"WHAT AM i DOiNG HERE"
THEY FiNALLY PULL UP TO MENACE'S
SHE TAKES A DEEP BREATH AND GETS OUT THE CAR
HEADiNG TOWARDS THE HOUSE MENACE UNLOCKS THE DOOR AND WALKS iN


Menace:lets go to my room so we can talk
Smiley:why don't we just stay right here and talk
Menace:lets go to my room and talk smiley im not going to tell you again
Smiley: ok whatever menace

SMiLEY GETS UP FROM THE COUCH AND FOLLOWS MENACE TO HIS ROOM
MENACE TURNS TO SHUT THE DOOR
SMiLEY JUST SiTS ON HiS BED AND MENACE SiTS NEXT TO HER


Menace:look mija im sorry for everything i didn't mean to hurt you the way that i did and i know i messed up but i just want you to give me another chance plz
Smiley:*took a deep breath* menace i can't just give you another chance its not that easy and yea you hurt me a lot
Menace:i know mija and im sorry
Smiley:Menace sorry isnt good enough for me
Meance:well what do i have to do for you to give me one more chance
Smiley:nothing menace i cant put up with your bullshit anymore im tired of it
Menace:ill change mija just plz give me another chance
Smiley:no menace its over im done!!!and there is nothing that you can do to change my mind

MENACE JUST STARED AT SMiLEY NOT KNOWiNG WHAT TO SAY
SO HE PUTS HiS HEAD DOWN AND SiGHED
SO MUCH ANGER WAS BUiLDiNG UP iNSiDE OF HiM
WHEN SHE SAiD THOSE WORDS TO HiM
MENACE LOVED SMiLEY AND KNOW MATTER WHAT HE HAD TO DO
HE WAS GOiNG TO BE WiTH HER
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Old 02-11-2009, 01:39 AM   #16
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Keep It Coming Its getting better
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Old 02-12-2009, 12:47 AM   #17
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Gurl is good Keep on posting
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Old 02-13-2009, 02:28 AM   #18
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oh cheeeet sumthing gonna go down in a bad bad way!..more!
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Old 02-14-2009, 07:09 AM   #19
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Damn mija write some more that shit'z firme
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Old 02-15-2009, 07:17 AM   #20
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THANKS FOR THE REPLiES


THEN MENACE GETS UP AND SLAPS SMiLEY AND SHE FALLS TO THE FLOOR
SHE TRiES GETTiNG UP,BUT MENACE PiCKS HER UP
FROM THE FLOOR AND SLAMS HER AGAiNST THE WALL


Menace:you fucking know better not to talk to me like that
Smiley:menace plz let me go your hurting me
Menace:your going to be with me i don't care whay you say you understand
Smiley:*crying*yes im sorry
Menace:you just don't get it do you Smiley...mija i love you to death *looking into her eyes* i hate having to do this to you
Smiley:they why do you do it*still crying*
Menace:it's the only way to keep you in my life
Smiley:I HATE YOU
Menace:I will always love you mija

MENACE THEN THROWS HER ON THE FLOOR AND KiCKS HER
SMiLEY GASP iN PAiN


Menace:now get up and clean yourself up mija and ill take you where you want to go

SMiLEY THEN GETS UP HOLDiNG HER SiDE AND WALKiNG TO THE RESTROOM
SHE GETS iN THE RESTROOM AND REALLY STARTS TO CRY AND FALLS TO THE FLOOR
*THiNKiNG TO HERSELF*
WHAT HAPPENED TO MENACE MANN i DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO ANYMORE
i LOVE HiM SO MUCH BUT i CAN'T LiVE LiKE THiS..
WHY DiD HE CHANGE ALL OF A SUDDEN.
WHAT DiD i DO WRONG FOR HiM TO TREAT ME LiKE THiS.
2 YEARS JUST GONE


KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

Menace:Smiley what the fuck lets go
Smiley: ok *opening the door*
Menace:what the fuck were you doing shit i don't got all night
Smiley:sorry
Menace:yea whatever where do you want me to take you *opening the front door*
Smiley:giggles *walking out the house*
Menace:alright baby

THEY BOTH GET iN THE CAR
iT TAKES 5 MiNUTES TO GET TO GiGGLES
THEY FiNALLY GET THERE AND MANiAC AND ALL THE HOMEBOYS
ARE SiTTiNG OUT THERE DRiNKiNG
MENACE TURNS THE CAR OFF AND TURNS TO LOOK AT SMiLEY
SHE JUST PUTS HER HEAD DOWN


Menace:look at me
Smiley:what
Menace:if you tell anybody *touching her face* you already know whats going to happen you understand me
Smiley:yes *opening the car door*
Menace:alright baby i love you
Smiley:...*getting out the car*
Menace:i love you baby *looks at her mean*
Smiley:i love you too *not meaning it and then shuts the door*

SMiLEY THEN STARTS WALKiNG UP TO THE HOUSE
WiTH HER HEAD DOWN AND NOT TRYiNG TO PAY ATTENTiON
TO THE HOMEBOYS


Voice:whats up smiley *walking towards her*

SMiLEY TURNS TO LOOK AT WHO iT WAS

Smiley:hey silent long time no see *giving him a hug*
Silent:i know how you been mija
Smiley:umm ok what about you
Silent:good could be better
Smiley:yea *then puts her head down*
Silent:*notices she got sad* whats wrong mija
Smiley:nothing.why
Silent:just asking.but are you sure
Smiley:yea *giving him a fake smile*
Silent:well if there is anything you need let me know ok mija
Smiley: ok thanks silent

Angel aka Silent:18 yrs old,gray eyes,fade,built,tatoos everywhere,eyebrow and tongue pierced,cholo,hella fine,norteno,down ass vato

SHE THEN TURNS TO WALK iNSiDE THE HOUSE
AND GOES TO GiGGLES ROOM


Smiley:hey esa
Giggles:whats up about damn time you get here
Smiley:yea *lays on the bed*
Giggles:so what happened
Smiley:well we got back together
Giggles:what ya did
Smiley:yep
voice:damn your still with menace *walking out giggles bathroom*
Smiley:traviesa *jumping up from the bed and giving her a hug*
Traviesa:hey mija long time no see
Smiley:I know how you been
Traviesa:good how about you
Smiley: ok you know
Traviesa:well thats good

Daniella aka Traviesa:17 yrs old,light brown eyes,long blk hair,morena,thick,nose pierced,hella pretty,smiley and giggles best homegirl,down ass hyna
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