[[What Is Real Love]]

[Lalala_me]

Keep It Coming I Love Your Story Chick

[BaBiiCakez]

Damn he's such an asshole...more

[.:TROUBLE:.]

DAM MIJA KEEP IT COMING....

[SMiLEY_325]

THANKS FOR THE REPLiES..i CAN'T POST RiGHT NOW
BUT iLL TRY 2 POST MORE AS SOON AS i CAN

[Heartbr0keN]

NO JOKE STORY IS GREAT
BUT THIS IS PROSE&POETRY

POST THE REST IN THE STORY BOARD

[BaBiiCakez]

Start a new thread on the story board please cause i know i'll forget to check it here.

[SMiLEY_325]

THANKS FOR THE REPLiES
HERE iS MORE
ENJOY=]


Smiley:yea i guess you can say that..but lets talk about you..are you with anybody

Traviesa:Naw homegirl stayin single you know how i do*lol*

Smiley:yea i know*lol*


MANiAC WALKS iN THE ROOM


maniac:hey what ya doin

Giggles:damn can you knock

Maniac:my bad shit anyways ya girls want to smoke

Smiley & Traviesa:yea

Maniac:what about you sis

Giggles:i guess*rolling her eyes*


THEY ALL LEAVE THE ROOM AND GO OUTSiDE WiTH THE HOMEBOYS
*SiLENT, SOLDiER, CUETE, LOC, AND SLEEP*

Giggles:what ya vatos doing*walking outside*

Cuete:whats up giggles how u been mija

Giggles: ok *hugging him*

Cuete:thats good well ya girls ready to smoke

Giggles:hell yea we are*lol*


CUETE THEN SPARKS UP THE BLUNT
THEY ARE SMOKiNG AND TALKiNG ABOUT THE OL' DAYS
WHEN A BLACK CARS ROLLS UP ON THEM AND STARTS SHOOTiNG
ALL THE HOMEBOYS START SHOOTiNG BACK
GiGGLES TRAViESA AND SMiLEY HiT THE FLOOR
THEN THE SHOOTiNG STOPS THEY GET UP AND SEE CUETE LAYiNG ON
THE GROUND HOLDiNG HiS SiDE


smiley: oh shit cuete got hit

Silent:fuck get him in my car

SO THEY GET HiM iN THE CAR SMiLEY SiTS iN THE BACK WiTH CUETE
JUST HOLDiNG ON TO HiM THE OTHERS ARE FOLLOWiNG

Cuete:I...I..m going to be ok mija

Smiley:cuete just relax of we are almost there

Cuete:d...damn mija this shit hurts*closing his eyes*

Smiley:keep your eyes open cuete plz*scared*


THEY FiNALLY GET TO THE HOSPiTAL SiLENT AND SOLDiER
CARRY HiM iNTO THE EMERGENCY


Soldier:WE NEED HELP!!


DR COMES RUNNiNG


Dr:what happened*grabbing a stretcher*

Silent:he got shot

Dr: ok nurse get this young man into an operation room quick he is loosing a lot of blood


THEY TAKE CUETE iN AND SMiLEY GiGGLES AND TRAViESA ARE FREAKiNG OUT


Giggles:is he going to be ok smily*crying real hard*

Smiley:yes giggles he'll be ok

Giggles:I hope your right smiley

Smiley:It will be alright promise*crying*


ALL THE HOMEBOYS ARE JUST PACiNG BACK AND FORTH NOT
KNOWiNG WHAT TO DO


Maniac:those mutherfuckers are going to pay

Sleepy:Hell yea ese

Giggles:CAN YA NOT WORRY ABOUT GETTiNG THEM BACK RIGHT NOW SHIT WE GOT A HOMEBOY IN THERE FIGHTING FOR HIS LIFE *crying*

Maniac: *walks up to giggles* sorry sis *hugging her* it's going to be ok

Giggles:i hope your right maniac

Traviesa:giggles come sit down over here


GiGGLES GOES AND SiTS DOWN WiTH TRAViESA AND SMiLEY
MANiAC GOES BACK WiTH THE HOMEBOYS


Loc: your sis alright ese

Maniac:i don't know ese *putting his head down*


WELL THATS ALL i CAN WRiTE FOR RiGHT NOW
iLL POST MORE SOON

[Wendy Wooo]

Hey girl you're story is hella good! Keep it coming!

[Lalala_me]

Dam Keep Coming This Story's Firme ass Fuck

[SMiLEY_325]

Sleepy:she taking it hard

Loc:yea she is but her and cuete were together for a long time

Soldier:yea they were and i know cuete still loves her

Maniac:*looking up* he still does

Soldier:Yea ese

Maniac: Damn well i hope he makes it ese


THEY ALL JUST PUT THEiRS HEAD DOWN
AN HOUR LATER THE DR COMES OUT


Dr:the family of edward salas

Maniac:we are his family*walking up to the dr*

Dr:*looks at him weird* ok well he got 2 gunshot wounds 1 in his arm and the other in his side he lost a lot of blood but he will recover..*puts his hand on maniac shoulder* if the bullet would of went just an inch deeper your friend wouldn't have made it..he is a very lucky young man

Maniac:thank you so much dr. what room is he in

Dr:in room 204 but only 2 at a time ok

Maniac: ok thanks again*walks off*hey sis you and smiley go first ok

Giggles: ok *hugging him tight*im glad he is ok

Maniac:me too sis


GiGGLES AND SMiLEY WALK TO THE ROOM
THEY KNOCK AND WALK iN


Cuete:*turn to look at them*Smiely didn't i tell you i was going to be ok

Smiley:yes you did mijo im glad that you are*tears rolling down her face*

Cuete:yea me to but don't cry mija im still here*looking over at giggles*hey mija im glad to see you

Giggles:how are you feeling

Cuete: ok just in pain

Giggles:im so happy that your still here mijo*eyes getting watery*

Cuete:mija come here

GiGGLES WALKS OVER TO CUETE
AND HE GRABS HER HAND


Cuete:mija don't cry im here and alive it wasn't my time to go yet..mija just remember ill be in your heart always and forever

Giggles:*crying now*mijo i love you

Cuete:i love you too mija*looking into her eyes*(thinking to himself)only if i could still be with you mija

HE REACHES UP AND WiPES HER TEARS


Smiley:you guys ok

Giggles & cuete:yea

Smiley:you want me to leave ya 2 alone *smiling*

Giggles:no its ok we should go so the homeboys can come in

Smiley:alright well cuete we will see you tomorrow and you hang in there alright homeboy

Cuete:alright thanks smiley

Giggles:bye mijo *giving him a kiss on the cheek*

Cuete:bye mija

SMilEY AND GiGGLES BOTH WALK OUT THE ROOM
AND BACK iNTO THE WAiTiNG ROOM


Loc:how is he *standing up*

Giggles:he's ok

Loc:traviesa are you going to in with me

Traviesa:yea ill be back ok don't leave without me

Smiley:we won't *sitting down*


SMiLEY AND GiGGLES BOTH SiT DOWN NEXT TO EACHOTHER
GiGGLES PUTS HER HEAD ON SMiLEY'S SHOULDER AND SiGHS


Smiley:you ok

Giggles:yea mija


10 MiNUTES LATER LOC AND TRAViESA COME OUT


Traviesa:are ya ready to go

Smiley:yea *standing up*

Giggles:alright maniac we are going home

Maniac: ok sis ya be careful and call me if ya need anything ok

Giggles:alright love ya

Maniac:love ya too sis


TRAViESA SMiLEY AND GiGGLES LEAVE THE HOSPiTAL AND GO HOME
WHiLE MANiAC AND THE HOMEBOYS STAY AT THE HOSPiTAL WiTH CUETE


Edward aka Cuete:17 yrs old,light brown eyes,3 tatoos,built a lil,faded up,cholo,norteno,down ass vato,hella fine,didn't have no family