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Old 09-18-2009, 08:12 PM   #1
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u said to me forever but even u couldn't come thru
i thought u were the one but now i know that what i thought wasn't true.
you broke my heart in two, and for that i hate you.

you will never know what you want, u will roam this earth until it stops.
what did i do to deserve this heartache because even in my dreams i can't seem to forget about you.
your cheating heart u believe gives u pride but when realy all it does is eat you up inside.

i loved u once, twice was enough, it was my mistake and never more will i ever trust.the way u were i already knew but like a fool i believed that u could change, if even for a second for the love u said u wanted to save.

u are a sorry version of a man, wait not even a man u are a boy, a boy who comes around and goes around only thinking of him self and not the people around.ur sorry name doesn't compare to ur dishonesty and crualty,

your nothing,
and that you will always be.
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Old 09-19-2009, 06:36 AM   #2
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props

love can be a bitch, but someone will come and show you all those tears was worth the pain and wait

never forget, it never rains forever and there is always rainbow afterwards
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Old 09-20-2009, 07:40 AM   #3
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Dayum, that's exactly tha same way i feel now..i can really relate but much respect loved it.!
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Old 09-20-2009, 10:16 PM   #4
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ii GiiVE YU PR0PS.SAME ST0RY H3R3 ...GUYS JUST DNT SEE WHAT DEY G0T.DEY THiiNK iiTS GAMES.WEN DEY DNT REALiiZE DEY HURTiiN US.
MUCH RESPECT.
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Old 09-20-2009, 11:01 PM   #5
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much respect!
and yeah love is blind!
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Old 09-21-2009, 06:04 AM   #6
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props mija i used to be lik dat but i found true luv wit ma grl n u will find da 1 4 u neva give up n dnt let da tearz fall 4 sum1 who dnt deserve dem
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Old 09-22-2009, 02:56 PM   #7
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Muchas gracias por los comments, I had to get out lo que tenia en mis pensamientos y ojala con eso sija adelante...I will post another soon and hope its good and get feedback...thanx again
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Old 09-22-2009, 05:05 PM   #8
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firme lines

tru love is blind but at times so r we
we dnt see its hurting us till its to late
some choose not to see cuz they can handle the pain
but times heals all
have a pain for weeks maybe months
or be in pain for the rest of ur life cuz ur still with that person
that makes u shed tears from the heart
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Old 09-25-2009, 06:59 AM   #9
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Nice Lines
I know its hard. Been Dere B4.
But Yeah Give time sum Time.
Keep Droppin Those lines.
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Old 09-25-2009, 07:52 AM   #10
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Default Re: FOR YOUR SORRY ASS...(FIRST POEM I POST PLEASE COMMENT)

Pretty generic poem, not going to lie.

Gotta start somewhere though.

Try being a bit more creative.
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