FOR YOUR SORRY ASS...(FIRST POEM I POST PLEASE COMMENT) - Page 2

la ojos verdes · 09-25-2009, 05:05 PM

look gurl i feel u im like this right noe i have a man dat treats me like shit he has always cheated on me and he always says dat hes going to change but he never does im tired of this but i kant let go dont noe y but i want to he goes out with gurl and comes to my house with haters all over his fuken neck and i dont do nada about it ifeel u and i noe dat this really hurts cuz im going truh all of this right noe

MARIPOSA_EYES · 09-25-2009, 09:18 PM

I HAVEN'T WRITTEN ANY POEMS IN A WHILE SO I'M A LITTLE RUSTY...BUT ANYWAY THANX FOR THE COMMENTS...AVER CUANDO HAGO POST SOME OF MY OLD WRITINGS...PARA QUE HAGAN COMPARE

"LA OJOS VERDES"

YEAH IT WAS TOUGH TO GO THROUGH BUT SOME HOW I GOT PAST IT AND NOW IM MOVING ON FROM THAT..YOU DESERVE BETTER BUT JUST HAVE TO KNOW WHEN TO LET GO..I AIN'T SAYING ITS EASY BUT IT IS POSSIBLE.

*kRzy*beAuTiful* · 09-26-2009, 06:42 AM

props ma dats hella firme dats how i use to feel pero it will get easier ma time does kill da pain some times just not all of it just enough to survive pos dats how it was for me and i hope your pain will get better.....

morena~020309 · 11-06-2009, 08:11 PM

DAyM MUCh PROpS FOR tHiS
i CAN tRULy RElAtE tO tHiS
SAME StORy All AROUNd
BUt FUCk it liFE GOES ON ....qUE NO...
MUCh lOVE ANd RESpECt<3

babydoll69 · 11-06-2009, 10:49 PM

props qirl sounds really firmes

MARIPOSA_EYES · 11-09-2009, 02:25 PM

thanxs for the feedback..

Heavyheartedsoul81 · 11-10-2009, 08:06 PM

I used to feel the same way but give yourself some time, dont give up because there is someone out there who wont treat you like this other guy did!! Good poem!

$^$=TrAvIeZa=$^$ · 11-12-2009, 10:48 PM

I like it reminds me so much of ummm dat guy i once was crushed and wow its exacly the same he promised. I too was hoping for change i even went to church pryed and prayed for the best in him. nothing always nothing. People learn to move on even if it hurts. Hes locked up at the moment i care because i saw the best in him sometimes but he made his own destiny and well i cant change much on that.

MARIPOSA_EYES · 11-17-2009, 03:28 PM

thanxs for the feed back....most guys never really keep promises and if there is a guy who can well then "I'm surprised"

A B U S A D O R A · 11-17-2009, 04:01 PM

wow i can really relate to this ma... nice poem i really likd it.guys need to start appreciating wut they got until its gone forever...i really likd it..

besos NENA