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Old 11-01-2009, 07:56 PM   #1
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Default Sweet Bitterness

I'm surrounded by pictures locked up in this room
All I am seeing are faces of doom
If you can hear me please open the door
I've cut myself deep now my bloods on the floor
Why must I cry for things I cannot change
Reaching out to my God but he seems out of range
I tried yesterday to make myself feel
But everything felt like nothing was real
I took a trip to the depths of my soul
Tried to take back what the Devil had stole
If I'm alone then I can't explain
Those shadowy figures calling my name
Everyone moves but I seem to stand still
The World's passing by with the time that I kill
Follow me now won't you please hold my hand
I'm afraid of the dark and the beast of the land
I won't regret what I've already lost
They crucify for my hand on this cross
I'll say goodbye and I'll leave you to be
This road to nowhere is starting with me.
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Old 11-03-2009, 12:11 AM   #2
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Default Re: Sweet Bitterness

That's beautiful!
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Old 11-03-2009, 12:25 AM   #3
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wow! felt the emotion in that..

deep, sad, yet beautiful..
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