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Old 09-30-2008, 04:01 AM   #21
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Old 09-30-2008, 05:44 AM   #22
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Guy: For what?
Melissa: Mijo I need you. *crying*
Guy: iight I’m on my way.

Melissa left to the Lincoln park and waited for him there. When he pulled up he wasn’t alone he was with some hood rat.

Guy: What do you want?
Melissa: Damn Omar its gonna be like that?
Omar: Que quieres?
Melissa: sabes que fuck you.

Omar grabbed her by the wrist and stopped her.

Omar: No now you tell me.
Melissa: Para que you don’t give a fuck.
Omar: Hey Tu get in the car.*looking at the bitch*
Melissa: Nah just forget it I’m sorry to have wasted your time. *walking away to the car*
Omar: Hey mija what’s wrong seriously en buen plan.
Melissa: *breaks down crying* everything.
Omar: Come on lets go sit down on the bench.
Melissa: okay

They go and sit down on the benches.

Omar: Okay so what’s wrong?
Melissa: Joker is dead.
Omar: Huh when did he die?
Melissa: he got killed.
Omar: who killed him?
Melissa: Gato.
Omar: Fucken Puto.
Melissa: Ugh I fucken hate that puto. He still had the nerve to ask me out today.
Omar: What you say?
Melissa: I said yes. But that’s cuz I’m gonna kill him.
Omar: Orale now you’re a killer.
Melissa: Shut up.
Omar: When’s the funeral?
Melissa: Tomorrow.
Omar: wanna go together?
Melissa: yeah I’d like that.
Omar: Mija its okay *hugs her tight*

Melissa loved Omar. He knew she did and still treated her like shit. She never said anything because she wanted to be around him. But he was still there for when she need him.

Melissa: I think you should go you don’t want your girl getting mad now do we?
Omar: Ruby? Nah she’s aint my girl. That only your spot. *winked at her*
Melissa: *smiling* I guess si tu dices.*thinking only if that were true*
Omar: ya vas a enpesar?
Melissa: What?
Omar: Olvidalo.
Melissa: whatever.

It started to rain. I mean thunder storm really bad. It was getting really late.

Ring…

Ring…

Melissa: What?
Justin: Come get me.
Melissa: Okay ay voy.

CLICK.

Omar: Who was that?
Melissa: Justin he wants me to go pick him up at the hospital.
Omar: What’s he doing at the hospital?
Melissa: Dreamer is hospitalized
Omar: Why?
Melissa: Gato.
Omar: Damn I’m gonna kill that fool.

Omar walked Melissa to the car and grabbed her by the chin and kissed her. They went at it for about 2 minutes when Melissa pulled away.

Melissa: I gotta go. Thanks for everything.
Omar: No problem mija.
Melissa: Bye
Omar: Bye

She drove off. Omar when to his car and Ruby was there really pissed.

Omar: Hora tu que chingados trais?
Ruby: you fucken leave me here waiting for you for an hour. While you go and kiss and hug that bitch.
Omar: hey hey hey. She aint no bitch. And what bitch don’t trip you aint my girl.
Ruby: Fuck you Omar:
Omar: No that’s what I have your ass for. lol

Omar drops her ass off at her house and leaves.

Omar 18 yrs old. Super sexy ass Mexican. Tall, morenito skin tone with a sexy 6 pack. Could have any girl he wanted. He’s a Senior in high school. Has a kid. Doesn’t believe in love. Lives alone. He’s a Sureño he’s in Justin’s crew.

With Melissa she went and picked up Justin.

Justin: donde fuiste?
Melissa: I was with Omar?
Justin: Oh. What he say?
Melissa: Nah he’s clueless.
Justin: He didn’t know about none of this?
Melissa: Nope.
Justin: Damn.
Melissa: Where you wanna go?
Justin: Lets just got home.
Melissa: yeah

They went home and there parents were pissed off at them.

Dad: Donde estavan?
Justin: chill dad we were at the hospital?
Mom: Porque?
Justin: Ama Carlos (Joker) se muero y Estevan (Dreamer) esta en el hospital.
Mom: ay Dios mio que paso? *worried*
Melissa: nadie sabe ma *looking at Justin*
Justin: Si ama nadie sabe lo que les paso.

Justin and Melissa hated lying to there parents. But then again they couldn’t tell them everything that was happening. They knew that they knew there parents would kill them if they knew.

Melissa: Well I’m gonna go to sleep its getting late.
Mom: Si mija andale go. You have a long day tomorrow.
Melissa: Yeah I know mom. Goodnight Daddy
Dad: Goodnight mija.

She went to her room and started to pack some more stuff into boxes.

Melissa: damn I don’t wanna move.
Voice: Well then stay here with me.
Melissa: *jumped* who’s there?
Voice: Chill its me.
Melissa: Fucken dumbass you scared me.
Voice: Calm your ass down. *laughing*
Melissa: How the hell did you get into my room?
Voice: Your window.
Melissa: your fucken stupid Chuy.
Chuy: Like that huh?
Melissa: Like what?
Chuy: Why don’t you come and give daddy a kiss?
Melissa: Fuck you.
Chuy: Come fuck me then.
Melissa: Your sick.
Chuy: Changing subject.. Are you going to the funeral?
Melissa: Si y tu?
Chuy: yeah. Are you leaving with Justin?
Melissa: No Omar is coming to pick me up.
Chuy: why you always gotta go with him. He doesn’t even love you like I love you..
Melissa: *looked away* You don’t know that.
Chuy: Oh really by now don’t you think he would have told you he loved you?
Melissa: Whatever
Chuy: I’m out bye
Melissa: Adios.

Melissa knew that what Chuy had said was true. Omar didn’t love her what was she kidding about. She started to cry but pushed the tears away. She ended up falling a sleep around 11 P.M.
In the morning…

Melissa got up brushed her teeth then shower. She went to her closet and pulled out some black dress pants and nice black top she put on her black flats to go long with what she was wearing. She dried her hair and straightened it. She didn’t pull on no make up.

Justin: Are you done?
Melissa: Yeah.
Justin: Okay well hurry up Omar’s here.
Melissa: Okay.

Melissa went downstairs and they all headed off to the place for the funeral.

Melissa: Mama como se ciente?

Everybody called Silent and Joker’s mom, Mama because she was loved by everybody.

Silent’s Mom: Como crees mija me mataron a mi Carlitos. *crying*
Melissa: damn mom I’m so sorry you know we all loved Carlos. *hugging her*
Silent’s Mom: Yeah I know.
Melissa: Is there anything I can do for you?
Silent’s Mom: can you just hug me please.
Melissa: yeah!
They both started crying. The homies where carrying Joker’s coffin to the cemetery.

Priest: He was a good person. Always went to church on Sunday. But now the Lord has called him to his side. He’s in a better place now.

They lowered the coffin in and Silent was there being strong for both his mom and him. All the homies were crying there were gonna miss Joker a hell of a lot.

Con el Gato..

Guy: do you think they know you did it?
Gato: Hell no. I’m good like that.
Guy: wait till Melissa finds out she’s gonna hate you.
Gato: she’ll never find out.
Guy: what if she does?
Gato: by then ella sera mi mujer. *smiling*
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Old 09-30-2008, 05:58 AM   #23
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DAMN THATS FUCKEN SAD...
SHIT AND IF GATO ONLY KNEW WHATS COMING TO HIM...
KEEP IT COMING!!!
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Old 09-30-2008, 06:50 AM   #24
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o shit bt i think he will die b4 anything keep postin
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Old 10-01-2008, 12:25 AM   #25
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grrr...
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gato needs 2 die sooon...
kee it coming girl..
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Old 10-01-2008, 12:39 AM   #26
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keep it coming......wonder when she is going to kill him?
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Old 10-01-2008, 04:21 AM   #27
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Gato 19 years old. Stuff ass vato. He’s Mexican with a lil white in him. He was very light skinned. With black hair and black eyes. He was a scary buff person. Everybody was scared of him. He belonged to the other side of town and was the leader of the Bishops. He’s UGLY!!! And liked Melissa.

It was late in the afternoon when she was at Silent’s house. She was there to help Silent’s mom around the house.

Silent’s Mom: Mija thank you so much.
Melissa: Your very welcome mom.
Silent’s Mom: Were going to miss you so much when you leave to California.
Melissa: And I’m going to miss you so much.
Silent’s Mom: What would I do with out you?
Melissa: I don’t know.
Silent’s Mom: Mija remember this you’ll always have a place in my heart.
Melissa:…..ugh see you always make me cry! *smiling*
Silent’s Mom: I make myself cry.
Melissa: I love you!
Silent’s Mom: I love you too mija! *hugs Melissa*

Silent’s Mom’s name is Lorena. She’s a tall lady. She has a caramel skin tone. That goes really nice with her big brown eyes, she has long brown hair. Really pretty around the age of 40. Super nice. Always helping out people no matter what kind of person they were. Taught her sons well. Never had a daughter and consider Melissa that daughter. Her husband died when Joker was 10.

Silent walks in.

Silent: Como se ciente ama?
Lorena: Un poco mejor. *looking at Melissa*
Silent: Que bueno. Hey Melissa can we talk outside?
Melissa: Yeah. Hey can you take me home I have to get home and finish packing.
Silent: Yeah I’ll take you.
Melissa: *kisses & hugs Lorena* Bye mommy I love you. Call me if you need anything.
Lorena: Okay mija!

Silent and Melissa walked outside.

Silent: We’ll talk on the way to your house.
Melissa: Okay.

In the car.

Melissa: So what’s the deal.
Silent: You’re still going to do it right?
Melissa: Hell yeah.
Silent: When are you going to kill him?
Melissa: I don’t know maybe tonight.
Silent: nah today is to soon.
Melissa: Entonces?
Silent: today is Tuesday wait till Friday to come up with a plan.
Melissa: Okay then.

They arrive at her house.

Melissa: thank you.
Silent: Any time.
Melissa: Bye
Silent: Hey call me and tell me what happens in the date.
Melissa: Okay
Silent: Bye

Melissa went inside and started to pack some more. And pulled out something sexy for the night since she was going to go out with Gato she had to look good so that he would fall even more. She got in the shower and then stepped out in just a towel. Looking in the mirror…

Melissa: Damn why did you have to die Joker. I fucken need you bro. *crying*

She wiped the tears when her phone started ringing.
Ring….

Ring….

Melissa: Hello
Guy Voice: hey chula?
Melissa: Oh Hi Gato. *surprised*
Gato: So what’s the plan where does my baby girl wanna go?
Melissa: Umm lets go to the movies then park.
Gato: Sounds good ma. I’ll pick you up in 1 hour.
Melissa: Ok I’ll be waiting.

CLICK…

Ring…

Ring…

Melissa: hey Silent I’m in the date is tonight were going to the movies then park.
Silent: What time?
Melissa: Umm around 8-8:30
Silent: Ok I’m gonna go and just follow along and bump into you guys “accidentally” say shit to and then pretend like you arent rolling with us anymore iight.. That way he thinks your on his side.
Melissa: iight. Be at Great Escape.
Silent: Orale anratoz mija. I’m gonna call some of the homies.

CLICK..

Melissa went back to getting ready. She put on a jean skirt with a strapless brown shirt, brown jacket that went with the shirt, and brown flip-flops. She dried her hair and straighten it. She put on only eyeliner and perfume.

Melissa: Damn I look good. Lol

Beep
Beep.

Text message:
Gato: Ready?
Melissa: Yeah.
Gato: Okay I’m on my way.
Melissa: Okay
Gato: I’ll call you when I’m in front of your crib.
Melissa: Okay
Melissa calls Silent.

Ring..

Silent: What?
Melissa: He’s coming.
Silent: Damn already?
Melissa: Yeah.
Silent: Ok remember the plan.
Melissa: I wont.
Silent: Your brother is coming along to.
Melissa: What?
Silent: Yeah. Hey you might have to kill him.
Melissa: What I thought that Friday.
Silent: Sorry mija change of plans.
Melissa: Y con que lo mato?
Silent: I put some polvo in your purse that’s so you can put him to sleep.
Melissa: Okay.
Silent: I’ll text you and let you the rest later

BEEP..

Melissa: hey he’s calling I’ll talk to you later.
Silent: iight cuidado.
Melissa: I know.

Switched over to the other line.

Melissa: Hello
Gato: I’m outside.
Melissa: Okay let me just grab my purse.
Gato: Okay

Melissa Grabbed her purse and walked out of her room. Her parents weren’t home and Justin already knew what she was up to. So she walked out and locker her door.

With Gato he was outside waiting for her next to the passenger seat.

Gato: Damn your look so good I would eat you all up.
Melissa: *smiling* I bet you would.
Gato: Shit I know I would. *opening the door for her.*

Melissa got in and Gato went around to his side.

Melissa: Gato before we leave instead of the movies can we just go out to the park and then my house?
Gato:*confused* Why?
Melissa: I really don’t feel like going to the movies.
Gato: okay then.. And mi reina wants!

At the park Melissa sends a text to Silent.

Text Messages…

Melissa: hey sonso were at Lincoln Park I’m gonna get rid of the BG and take him to my house hid in my room iight.
Silent: Orale. What time?
Melissa: In 30 minutes.
Silent: Okay I’ll be in your room okay .
Melissa: okay

Melissa and Gato get out.

Gato: so why did you really want to come to the park at this time?
Melissa: Because its all quiet and lonely.
Gato: Oh I get it.
Melissa: Yeah! *smiling*
Gato: OOO so you’re a freaky girl now?
Melissa: Your such a pervert. No I just wanted to talk.
Gato: oh..
Melissa: *looking back* are they going to follow us all night?
Gato: you don’t like him huh?
Melissa: It annoys me to have somebody follow me.
Gato: oh I’m sorry. What me to get rid of them?
Melissa: would you plz? *thinking haha this is going to be easier then I thought*
Gato: of course.

Gato turns back and goes to where the bodyguards were..

Gato: hey leave.
Guy: pero jefe
Gato: pero jefe nada leave if I need you I’ll call you.
Guy: esta bien *looking at the rest of the guys* hey come on were leaving.

Melissa and Gato were left alone in the park and they just walked around and talked. It had been an hour an Melissa gets a text.

Text:

Silent: Now.
Melissa: Okay

Melissa: gets getting late can you take me home?
Gato: yeah come on.
Melissa: *thinking no sabes lo que te espera puto* ….

They went to the car and he took her home. At her house. The lights were off.

Melissa: you wanna come in?
Gato: wont your brother get mad?
Melissa: he wont if he if doesn’t find out.
Gato: damn I love your attitude!
Melissa: I’m glad you like

Gato kissed her.

Gato: damn you kiss good.
Melissa: thanks!
Gato: orale pues lets go inside.
Melissa: okay

Melissa pulled out her keys and then opened the door. She turn on the lights.

Gato: damn your house is very nice.
Melissa: thanks.
Gato: yeah. Why is there boxes?
Melissa: were moving right after school is over.
Gato: what where to?
Melissa: California
Gato: Oh
Melissa: hey want something to drink?
Gato: yeah
Melissa: okay is coke okay?
Gato: yeah.
Melissa: okay well you can watch T.V I’ll be right back
Gato: Okay

Gato started to watch T.V and Melissa went into the kitchen to get the drinks. She pour a lil for herself and then pour his and add the polvo to put him to sleep. She stir it and then went back to the living room.

Melissa: here you go.
Gato: thank you.
Melissa: your welcome.
Gato: damn mija thanks for the nice night I had today.
Melissa: oh trust me this is nothing there’s more to come.

Silent, Justin, and Omar were upstairs listening to them talk. Gato started to get touchy with Melissa. Melissa didn’t stop him just because she needed him to drink up all the coke. 5 minutes later he was done with the coke. After 10 minutes he started to get drowsy.
He was dead sleep in 15 minutes. Melissa went up stairs.

Melissa: hey
Justin: what
Melissa: First step has been made! *smiling*

If i feel better later on i'll post again and that post will have the killing of Gato!
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Old 10-01-2008, 04:39 AM   #28
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yes try to feel better like that i can read it lol
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DAMN I CANT BELIEVE SHES GONNA DO THAT...
FUCK IT KEEP IT COMING!!!
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keep postin hope u feel better
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