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Old 11-11-2009, 04:58 PM   #1
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Thumbs up Through the thunder & sunshine

Okay BP here is my 2nd story, let me know what you think, you know the deal R & R. hope you guys like it



Sitting on my balcony looking over to the ocean, listening to some old school jams. As I’m relaxing on the lounge chair drinking my pina colada I start remembering the old days before I moved to Cozumel, Mexico. I start to remember when I lost everything and here I’ am starting all over; my eyes begin to form tears, not because im upset but because I was stupid. Sigh

*Flash Back*

Earlier on Friday Morning- Chicago

(I didn’t work because my husband had forbidden me too I was a stay at home wife, but I worked at a day care, part time, he never knew. I saved up my money just like my mom said “ Mija when you get married, member to always have your stash, because you never know.”)

I wake up at 6am same routine Monday- Friday. I made my husband some breakfast and place it on the table and leave to take a shower. I go upstairs, into my bathroom and undress and step in the shower.
“I’ll be home at 7, we are needing to discuss some things tonight Cassandra.” Javier yells
Okay honey (thinking in my head that’s weird he never calls me that unless it’s something bad. Don’t tell me we are moving again) I start to sing in the shower
I finish up put a towel around me and go in our room. I look in my closet to find something cute to wear for today and for tonight J I grab some fitted jeans, with black boots, a pink sweater. Hmm I say that will look so cute. I lay it on the bed. I walk over to my other closet and open it up and see all my dresses “hmmm what should I wear at dinner?” I say to myself
I look and look and see a red dress (strapless fitted around my chest and flares out on my waist, with some black hells and diamond earrings) I lay it on my bed as well. I walk over to my mirror and start to curl my hair, with a pink head band, I apply mascara, and lip gloss and change into my clothes I head downstairs- grab my purse, keys and jacket and walk out the door.
I get in my blue BMW 4 door drive off to the mall.
“Shakira hips don’t lie goes off” I search in my purse as I’m driving and see its my best friend Elizabeth.
Liz: Hey girl!
Cass: Hey ma, Are you ready?
Liz: Yea I have been waiting for you like an hour already
Cass: Whatever girl, you know that Javier needs to leave before I do
Liz: I know, I know ma I’ll be waiting
Cass: I’m 5mins away, bye
I arrive to Liz house and honk
Liz: What it do homegirl
I laugh and playfully hit her arm
We go to the mall and shop around
Liz: Hey girl!
I go over to her
Cass: what’s up
Liz: Look at that mija lets get it, it will go good with that present you got Javier
I smile and go in the store to buy it
We head to the food court, and see a bunch of guys eating at this round table.
Cass: it’s Friday ma, aint people suppose to be working
Liz: ok, it’s a holiday to day girl, memorial day duh girl
Cass: well that’s weird…………………………..stay tuned

i promise BP that the story WILL GET BETTER, please reply so i know its a okay or good story thanks

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Old 11-11-2009, 08:19 PM   #2
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Yay first reply i like it

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Old 11-11-2009, 10:13 PM   #3
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yay! u r my first play ur the only one who likes it but i still wanna see more replies )
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Old 11-12-2009, 12:45 PM   #4
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aww no one likes my story, atleast if you dont like reply and tell me to stop
Liz: what
Cass: Javier went to work today, well at least that’s what he said to me
Liz had an upset face “ Mija, we already been down this road”
Cass: Liz just stop it, lets go!
I get up and walk off, Liz stays behind she knows I need to cool down. I walk over to Spencer’s and look around. I’m lost in my thoughts about what Liz told me, when I bumped into this guy and I stumble back knock something’s over and fall on my ass.
“shit” I say to myself
“I hear a guys voice “
guy: I’m so sorry mija, are you aight?
Cass: Yes, sorry I should of watched were I was going.
He extends his hands towards me to help me up, I grab his hands and say thank you and begin to pick up the crap that fell off the shelf.
Guy: here let me help it was part my fault to.
Cass: Thanks. (as we finish picking up the stuff, I finally look up at him) wow I say outloud.
Guy: excuse me he says as he smiles
Cass: oh nothing, my name is Cassandra- Cass for short (in my head I was thinking he is so sexy- hazel eyes, full lips, dimples, thin side burns, short-faded hair, muscular, about 5’9, had on black pants with some white converse, white polo shirt, he looked good and smelled good)
Guy: well Cass my name is Joel. (in his head he is thiking she is gorgeous- long dark brown hair, got the curves in the right places, dark brown eyes, long lashes, dimples, with puffy lips and a big ass damn!)
Cass: well Joel I better get going, my friend is probably looking for me.
Joel: alright mija, um you think I can get your number?
Cass: um IDK
Joel: alright well it was nice bumping into you he says with his sexy smile.
(Remembering what Liz had said earlier “we already been down this road Cass”)
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hey no one likes my story i promise that it is good but im sad now (
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Old 11-13-2009, 12:07 AM   #6
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Awww I like it

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thanks for those replied

here is more

Cass: Hey Joel
Joel turns around: Yeah
Cass: well can I have… your number?
Joel: yeah, ***-***-****
Cass: well mijo ill call you sometime, bye
Joel (dang she is FINE she got that natural beauty instead of that clown shit girls got on there face) he walks back to his friends
Liz: Hey mija, where you been? I thought you left me.
Cass: Naw girl I aint that mad at ya, I say smiling and all happy.
Liz: why you happy ma?
Cass: I meet this guy, and he was sexy, girl if I wasn’t married I would be calling him. I say with a sad look
Liz: mija whats wrong?
Cass: well….we haven’t been doing so good lately you know, he has been drinking so much when he gets home I thought he quit but every night we argue, he is always leaving coming home at 3 in the morning. Im tired of it mija I want things to be like the old times, I wanna be happy again I wanna live happy. I say through my tears
Liz just holds Cass while she pours her heart out
People are passing by starring; Liz is jus mean mugging everyone
Liz sees a guy stopping right in front of them and kneels down to Cass:
Guy: baby girl, are you okay?…
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Cass looks up and sees Joel’s worried face (inside she is happy to see him): I’m okay (I say forcing a smile.) Joel this is my best friend Liz, Liz this is the guy I told you about. They both say hi to each other. Liz tells Joel that she would leave us for a min.
Joel: Mami, IDK wat you are going through, but I’m here for you, you can call me anytime day or night, I’ll hear you out. He lifts my chin up and says no matter what you always keep your head up babygirl.
Cass: Thanks, mijo. I better get going ill call you and take you up on what you said sometime.
I start to walk towards Liz
Liz: Oh my gosh girl he is C-U-T-E!!!
I laugh as we get in my car
I drive to drop her off, as im driving back home I see…………..stay tune

my husbands leaning on his car talking to some women who was skinny as can be, with a black short dress she had curly short hair.
I say to myself: oh that must be that new company he is going to buy.

I finally get home, make dinner and start to get ready. I place a black box on his side of the table with an engraved watch. I wait and I look at the time it was 8pm I sit on the couch and wait, I hear the front door open. He walks in.
Javier: Hey you ready to talk
Cass: Why did you get home late, you said 7pm honey.
Javier: Don’t start with me. Sit on the couch. We need to talk.
Cass sits on the couch and has this ugly feeling at the bottom of her stomach.
Javier: There is no other way to say this, but I don’t love you anymore.
Cass was stunned at what he said I didn’t wanna believe my ears so I said: You don’t love me anymore that’s what we needed to talk about, you couldn’t come up with a better start.
Javier: Cass just pack up your things and go.
Cass: Not only do you not love me but now your kicking me out!!! Are you fucking serious!!!
Javier: Cass I have not been happy over a year and a half already, I have been with someone else, who had my twin sons, I was only with you because we were high school sweethearts.
Cass: I’m stupid I should of seen this coming, my friends were right about you Javier, you have been cheating on me and I was to blind to see that because I WAS IN LOVE.
Javier: Look we tried to make it work, we went to counseling we forced this marriage we were young and stupid we made a lot of mistakes!
Cass: We have been together since I was 15 you are throwing 6years away for some hoodrat.
Javier comes up to me and slaps me across the face leaving his handprint on my face: She is the love of my life do not talk about here that way
Cass: I have been here putting up with your shit, I have stopped talking to my mom for months for you, I gave up our child for you, I have stopped doing things for you and you are kicking me out of OUR house.
Javier: Cassandra it is mine and Julia’s house you are out of here!!! He grabs me by my arms and starts to go towards the front door.
Cass WAIT I yell: I’m pregnant Javier!!!!…


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omg. dat niggas wrong. k.i.c
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