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Old 11-12-2009, 07:55 PM   #1
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Post ***UNFORGETABLE LOVE***

WUZZUP... AIIGHT WELL THIS IS MA FIRST STORY ON HERE SO BE SURE TO LEAVE SOME LOVE SO I CAN KNOW WEATHER TO POST MORE O K AIIGHT. AND HEADS UP I THINK IT GETS WAY MORE BETTER, BEGININ A LIL SLOW AIIGHT....

MARi- Aka DREAMER 14yrs old, 5'1, Nice body Big Boobs, Nice Azz(but not too much) Light tone skin, brown hair-medium lenght, light brown eyez, real koo and easy to get along with.

DEISY- Aka LA SILENT 14yrs old, 5'0, Real skinny with just enough boobs and azz lol medium tone skin, dark brown hair-medium lenght, brown eyes, real quiet and only really talked to Dreamer.

NICOLE- Aka MORENA lol 13yrs old, 5'1, Nice body just a lil thick more azz than boobs, dark tone skin, dark brown hair-long lenght, dark brown eyes. Best Friends with Dreamer since forever.

***UNFORGETABLE LOVE***

<phone call between Dreamer and La Silent>

DREAMER- NAW I KNOW ITS NOT RIGHT BUT IM JUST GOING TO LET IT GO, NO SE K HACER!

LA SILENT- MAN GIRL I THINK YOU SHOULD TELL SOMEONE ABOUT THIS.

DREAMER- NAW AY K DEJARLO ASI

LA SILENT- YOU DONT CARE O K???

DREAMER- SHYT I DO CARE, BUT I RATHER STAY AWAY AND JUST AVOID SEEING HIM THAN TO CAUSE MY MOM PAIN.
(As she was sayin this silent tears began gliding down her cheeks)

LA SILENT- I DONT THINK YOUR DOING THE RIGHT....

DREAMER- JUST FORGET I TOLD YOU, DROP IT!

LA SILENT- DREAMER.... YOU....

DREAMER- NO... LEAVE IT ALONE.

<days later at the Junior HIgh>

MORENA- MAN DREAMER HURRY UP WE HAVE TO GO TO CLASS!

DREAMER- CALM DOWN... SHYT IM NOT IN A HURRY...

MORENA- DAMN GIRL COME ON YOU WALKIN LIKE WE HAVE TIME LOL

DREAMER- LOL AY VENGO! STOP RUSHING ME BEFORE....
(Before she could finish what she was going to say... she got interrupted by this girl that was walkin all fast and bumped into her)

DREAMER- WATCH WHERE THE FUK YOUR WALKING BITCH!!!

BITCH- MAN FUK YOU BITCH!
(The bitch just turned around and kept walking and Dreamer got even more pizzed off. The only thing she hated more than fake azz people, were disrespectful bitches like this one)

DREAMER- WHAT THE FUK DID YOU JUST SAY

(Morena was a lil far from Dreamer but she knew that Dreamer was really fukin mad)

MORENA- O SHYT, SHE FUKED UP NOW
(she whispered to herself)

BITCH- YOU HEARD ME! SHYT YOU THINK IM SCARED OF YOU, YOU AINT EVEN MEXICAN WHAT MAKES ME THINK YOU GOT HANDS!!!!

DREAMER- BITCH YEA I WAS BORN N RAISED IN HOUSTON BUT ALL I HAVE RUNIN THROUGH MY VAINS IS SANGRE MEXICANA PUTA!!!

BITCH- MAN FUK YOU
(she just turned around again and kept walking. Dreamer got so fukin pizzed off and just charged at her and caught up to her, she didnt wana throw a cheap shot so she got her attention)

DREAMER- HEY BITCH LOOK AT ME!!!! I WANT YOU TO SEE MY FUKIN FIST BEFORE I FUK YOU UP!!!!

(Dreamer beat the fuk out of her and MORENA kept on tryin to get her to stop but Dreamer had way too much anger stored inside and had just been waiting on some stupid bitch like that to fuk with her. Then someone ran up behind her)

PRINCIPAL- MR. YURCH 6'2, HUGE LOL 4REAL, White, 29yrs old. Basically put.. Hated Mari aka Dreamer!!!

MR. YURCH- MARI STOP IT NOW
(He yelled as he grabbed her and pulled her off the bitch. Dreamer was still tryin to get to her but the principal was super tall and fukin strong, so she couldnt get loose. The bitch was trying to stand up but she was bleeding alot and got punched on her right eye so hard she couldnt even open it up.)

(The principal pulled Mari to his office and called the schools cop)

MR. YURCH- MARI, IVE BEEN PUTTING UP WITH REPORTS FROM YOUR TEACHERS, STUDENTS AND OTHER STAFF... THEY ALL HAVE COMPLAINED ABOUT YOUR ATTITUDE AND ABOUT HOW MUCH YOUVE BEEN RUDE! YOUVE BEEN LATE TO ALL YOUR CLASSES YOU HAVE HAD OVE 20 D-HALLS AND HAVE BEEN PLACED IN SAC OVER 10 TIMES AND YOU DONT SEEM TO CARE. I DONT WANT THIS BEHAVIOR IN THIS SCHOOL ANYMORE, IM SENDING YOU TO A.E.P.

DREAMER- FUK IT IF THATS WAHT YOU FEEL LIKE YOU NEED TO DO THEN DO IT!

MR. YURCH- DONT TALK TO ME IN THAT....
(Mari got up from the chair she was sittin on and walked towards the door)

DREAMER- MAN IF IM NOT WANTED IN THIS FUKIN SCHOOL IM FUKIN LEAVIN!!! FUK YOU AND YOUR SCHOOL!
(she walked out and down the hall)

<At the front desk a lady was talkin to the receptionist>

LADY- HI, IM MARI'S MOM I BARLEY GOT A CALL....
(she was interrupted by someone yelling through the hall)

DREAMER- WHY DO YOU WANA KEEP ME HERE I GOT NO REASON TO BE HERE!!!! DAMN!

MR. YURCH- TAKE A SEAT AND WAIT FOR YOUR PARENTS TO ARRIVE MARI!!!!

(Maris mom saw it was her daughter doin all the yellin so she walked up. Mari saw her mom standing there so she just walked out of the school. Mr. Yurch was about to chase her when her mom got in the way.)

MOM- aka Esmeralda Ramirez, 5'0, DID NOT LOOK 35 AT ALL, LOOKED VERY YOUNG, Blond long hair, light tone skin, worked at the same place for many years

ESMERALDA- IM HERE, SHE CAN GO WAIT FOR ME OUTSIDE... NOW WHATS THE PROBLEM.

MR. YURCH- MRS. RAMIREZ DO YOU SEE THAT GIRL STANDING THERE TALKING TO THAT OFFICER???

ESMERALDA- YES, I SEE HER

MR. YURCH- OK, MARI DID THAT TO HER
(Maris mom wasnt surprised she had seen her do worse... she didnt agree with it but she was always to late to stop it)

ESMERALDA- WHAT... ARE YOU GOING TO KICK HER OUT FOR A COUPLE OF MONTHS OR KEEP HER IN???

MR. YURCH- NO, I WANT HER OUT OF THIS SCHOOL, IM SORRY I HAD TO HEAR COMPLAINS ABOUT HER, SHES HAD 2 FIGHTS IN THIS SCHOOL ALREADY AND SHE HAS NO SELF CONTROL, IM SORRY.

ESMERALDA- SHE JUST....

MR. YURCH- IM SORRY, I CANT, AND IM NOT SENDING HER OUT FOR A COUPLE OF MONTHS, I DONT WANT HER BACK. SHE CAN START JANUARY AT HER NEARES HIGH SCHOOL FOR HER 9TH GRADE YEAR, BUT I DONT WANT HER BACK. NOW IF YOU DONT MIND THIS IS OFFICER BLAKE AND HE WANTS TO HAVE A WORD WITH YOU.

ESMERALDA- DO I HAVE A CHOICE???

OFFICER BLAKE- 6'0, HISPANIC, ACTUALLY CUTE FOR A COP! LOL

OFFICER BLAKE-UNFORTUNATLY YOU DONT _MS. RAMIREZ_

ESMERALDA- ITS _MRS. RAMIREZ_ THANK YOU.

OFFICER BLAKE- EXCUSE ME, MRS. RAMIREZ. MARI WILL NEED TO ATTEND COURT ON FEBRUARY 28TH AND HAS A TICKET OF $340 TO PAY IF YOU HAVE ANY QUESTIONS CALL THIS NUMBER OK.
(Officer Blake handed her a buissnes card. Her mom didnt even look at them anymore or said a word at all she just walked away and kept a straight face... even though she was so worried about all the trouble mari kept getting into)

<On the drive to back to Maris house>

ESMERALDA- MARI!!!! WHAT THE HELL WHERE YOU THINKING!!! DID YOU SEE HOW YOU LEFT THAT GIRLS FACE!!! WHAT HAPPENED???

DREAMER- MOM CHILL, YOU DONT EVEN KNOW WHAT HAPPENED... I JUST DID WHAT I HAD TO.

ESMERALDA- WHAT YOU HAD TO??? MARI DONT COME UP WITH THIS STUPID EXCUSES. COMO VOY A PAGAR ESTE PINCHE TICKET EH!!!! YOU THINK MONEY GROWS ON TREES!!!!!!

(Mari just stared out the window in anger. She always hated that skool and she wasnt going to miss shyt about it... exept her best friend MORENA. They had always been best friends and never fell apart for anyone or anything. and after that day little did she know her whole life was bout to change COMPLEATLY)

<In Maris Room>

(The next Friday Morning Mari just sat there on her bed thinking about how fast everything happened. then her mom walked in the room and handed her a paper)

ESMERALDA- THIS CAME IN THE MAIL FOR YOU. (and just walked out)
(Mari and her mom werent really connected, they just put up with eachother. Mari read the paped out loud to herself)

DREAMER- "MARI, WELCOME TO MADELLA'S ALTERNATIVE EDUCATIONAL PROGRAM (A.E.P) THIS PRIVATE SCHOOL IS DESIGNED TO HELP KEEP YOU OUT OF TROUBLE... YOU HAVE TO FOLLOW THE FOLLOWING RULES AND ATTIRE....
KAKHI PANTS
WHITE T'S
NO JEWLERY
NO SHARP OBJECTS
EVERYTHING YOU WILL NEED WILL BE PROVIDED FOR YOU.
DONT BE LATE MONDAY MORNING FOR YOUR FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL.
THANKS"

(Dreamer got up and sat in front of her mirror and just stared at herself)

DREAMER- GREAT, NOW I HAVE TO GO TO SOME STUPID AS SKOOL WITH PROBABLY A BUNCH OF DUMB FUKS ALL CUZ OF THAT DUMB HOE. I AINT NEVER EVEN SEEN HER IN THE SKOOL HOUSE!!! FUK IT, MAN ITS FRIDAY NIGHT... NOTHING TO DO....
(she paused and heard everyone outside being all loud and shyt)

DREAMER- FUK IT, IMA GO CHILL WITH THESE FOO'S
(she walked outside and sat down next to loKZ on the curb of her front yard)

LOKZ- aka Markaz, 5'7, kinda dark tone skin, 13yrs old, 6pak, worked out everyday!!!! Into football, always had a crush on Dreamer, light brown eyes, brown short hair, known Mari FOREVER LITERALY!!!

LOKZ- SUP

DREAMER- NOTHIN JUST BORED... YOU???

LOKZ- SAME, BUT SHYT LOOK AT GRUMPY AND FLACO! LOL

(GRUMPY AND DRE WERE RUNING AROUND ALL OVER THE STREET TRYING TO HIT EACHOTHER)

STEPHANIE- AKA GRUMPY, DREAMERS LIL SISTER, 10yrs old, BOUT 5'0, LIGHT TONE SKIN, DARK LONG HAIR, BROWN EYES, THICK WITH BIG BOOBS, "TOMBOY" AND GRUMPY AS HELL!!!! LOL

DRE- AKA FLACO LOL, 11yrs old LOKZ BEST HOMEBOY ALWAYZ TELL EACHOHTER EVERYTHIN, 6'0, LIGHT BROWN EYEZ, REALLY SKINNY, FAST AS HELL, HAD A BIG HEAD! CARMEL SKIN HE WAS BLAKSICAN(mexican and black lol)

GRUMPY- WELL THEN FUK YOU BITCH!!!

FLACO- FUK YOU!!!! SHYT COME DO SOMETHING!!!!!

(As soon as Flaco said that Lokz and Dreamer got up)

DREAMER- YOU AINT GOIN TO TALK TO MA BABY SIS LIKE THAT LIL BITCH LOL

MARKAZ- HELL YEAH,, COME HERE FOO

(Dreamer, Lokz and Grumpy started runin towards Flaco to kick his azz lol)

FLACO- MAN FUK YALL, YALL CHEATIN LOL ONE ON ONE FOO LOL

(Damn ever since Dreamer was 9 it had always been Dreamer and Lokz and Grumpy and Flaco. They were koo with almost everyone on the block (exept crak head steave) but mainly it was them 4)

(After they had bullshyted around Lokz and Dreamer were just chillin while Grumpy kept beatn the shyt out of Flaco)

LOKZ- DAMN LIL GRUMPY DONT GET TIRED HU LOL

DREAMER- HELL NAW LOL THATZ MA BITCH

LOKZ- SO WHAT YOU GOT A VATO???

DREAMER- LOL WHAT THE HELL YOU ASKIN THAT FOR LIL KID!!!!

LOKZ- DREAMER, WHY YOU ACK LYK YOU GROWN N SHYT!!! YOUR ONLY ONE YEAR OLDER THAN ME!!!

DREAMER- OK SO WHAT YOU GONNA DO....
(she said as she got up and slapp[ed the back of his head and started to back up)

LOKZ- O OK, SHE WANA PLAY, YOU BOUT TO GET IT NOW GIRL, COME HERE!!!

DREAMER- SHYT, YOU AINT GOIN TO CATCH ME!!!
(she yelled as she took off runing.... Lokz caught up to her, grabbed her from behind and picked her up holdin tight to her waist)

DREAMER- LOKZZZ!!! (she yelled and she was closing her eyes really tight)

LOKZ- O MA BAD CHULA
(He had forgotten that she was scared of hights, even if that shyt was only 3 or 4 feet up. He put her down turned her around and stared her right in her eyes. They had this occuard silent moment for a quick second untill.....)

FLACO- UHHHH WHAT!!! LOKZ BOUT TO GET THAT BOOTY!!!
(Flaco yelled from the middle of the street)

DREAMER- HELL NAW YOU TRIPPIN BIG HEAD!!!!

(grumpy walked up and slapped markas lol (TOUGH LOVE LOL))

GRUMPY- BITCH MOVE THATS MY AZZ LOL

(They were all fukin crakin jokes n shyt. And after all the fukin around Dreamer just got tired and chunked the duce.)

DREAMER- AIIGHT YALL

LOKZ- YOU IN???

DREAMER- HELL YEAH

FLACO- ALRIGHT DREAMER(shook her hand) AIIGHT BABY(he said lookin at Grumpy up and down)

GRUMPY- WHATEVER FOO!!!
(she liked to be tough all the time, lol but knew damn well she liked it)

(Dreamer and Grumpy just called it a night. The rest of the weekend was pretty much boring but the whole Sunday night she stayd up till late on the phone with MORENA)

<phone call between Dreamer and Morena>

DREAMER- DAMN ESA, IM GOIN TO FEEL SO FUKIN WEIRD AND IF ONE OF THOSE WANABE ALL HARD BITCHES IN THERE GIVES ME AN ATTITUDE, MAN YOU ALREADY KNOW IM NOT JUST GOIN TO SIT THERE.

MORENA- DAMN GIRL JUST TRY TO CHILL YOU CANT BE GETTIN IN TROUBLE ALL THE FUKIN TIME, JUST CUZ YOUR MAD ABOUT WHATEVER ELSE!!!!

DREAMER- MAN YOU DONT GET IT!!!!

MORENA- THEN MAKE ME UNDERSTAND GIRL, IM TRYIN TO BE YOUR DOWNAZZ HOMEGIRL, SHYT YOUVE ALWAYZ BEEN THERE FOR ME, WHY CANT YOU TELL ME.

DREAMER- ..... YOU KNOW WHATS A BITCH.

MORENA- WUZZZUP???

DREAMER- I CANT WEAR JEWLERY TO THAT SKOOL! AND YOU KNOW I'LL DIE WITHOUT MY EARINGS!!!!

MORENA- LOL YEAH, WHATEVER BITCH!!!

DREAMER- YOU KNOW ITS TRUE!!! LOL

MORENA- BUT IM SAYN WHATEVER BITCH... CUZ YOU THINK YOUR SLICK AND THINK I DIDNT NOTICE HOW YOU DROPPED THE SUBJECT.

DREAMER- LOL WHATEVER. WELL IMA CALL IT A NIGHT AIIGHT.

MORENA- ORALE, TE LA LAVAS!!!!

DREAMER- LOL ALWAYS MIJA!!!

<Monday Morning in Dreamers Room before A.E.P>

(Dreamer put on some Kakhi dickies all white cortezez and her white Tee. She did her make up really nice and a lil chola lookin. Her hair was all straight and her dickies were tight and showin her nice azz, and you could see her big boobs with that white tee on her. She looked in the mirror twice)

DREAMER- SHYT SOMETHIN DONT FEEL RIGHT (she thought for a quick second and finally sighed)...... FUK IT (she said as she grabbed some really nice thick silver hoops and put em on)..... LOL HELL YEA, NOW THERE AINT SHYT MISSIN!!!

<Outside A.E.P>

(It was about 7:15am when Dreamers Mom dropped her off at the school.)

ESMERALDA- TRY NOT TO KILL ANYONE.

DREAMER- DAMN IT WAS ONLY TWICE AND NOW YOU WANA ACT LIKE I KILLED SOMEONE.
(She said as she walked off actin like she was about to walk inside the school. When she saw her mom was gone she walked to the curb and just sat there... day dreaming about all kinds of shyt.)

VATO1- SAY WUZZUP MIJA....
(Dreamer didnt even look up at first)

DREAMER- WHAT???

VATO2- MAN SHE AINT TRYN TO TALK TO YOUR BAD AZZ, WUZZUP MAMAZ, YOU CAN CALL ME MEMPHIS.

MEMPHIS- MEDIUM TONE SKIN, ABOUT 5'9, MUSCULAR BUILT, SEXY AZZ FACE, LIGHT BROWN EYEZ, KRAZY AZZ!!!! 18yrs old, born in MEMPHIS!!! LOL DRESSED GANGSTA

DREAMER-O WUZZUP (She got up and answered him, but her eyes were set on that otha foo)

VATO1- WELL SHYT LET DREAMER HERE DECIDE IF SHE WANTS TO TALK TO MY "BAD AZZ" OR WHAT (He said as he handed out his hand waiting for her to say wuzzup)

DREAMER- .... WUTZ GOOD??? (She did the handshake with him and just starred right at him)

VATO1- CHILLIN MA, MY NAMES.... WELL JUST CALL ME SOLO... AIIGHT DREAMER.

SOLO- HELLA FINE!!! 6'0, HAZEL EYEZ 17yrs old, MUSCULAR BUILT, LIGHT TONE SKIN (WHITE AND MEXICAN BUT LOOKED STRAIT UP MEXICAN) DARK HAIR, SEXY AZZ SMILE!!!! DRESSED CHOLO
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Old 11-13-2009, 04:36 PM   #2
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ALRITE WELL YALL SHOULD SHOW SUM LOVE YA KNOW SO I CAN KNOW IF YALL LIKE IT OR WHAT.... CUZ THIS IS GOING TO BE A FINISHED STORY NOT LIKE ALOT OF UNFINISHED ONEZ I SEE.
K SHOW SUM LOVE
I'M GOIN TO POST A LIL MORE JUST IN CASE YALL WERENT FEELIN THE BEGINING AND LIKE THE REST MORE AIIGHT.
FOR THOSE WHOVE READ THE STORY THANKS AND SHOW SUM LOVE NEXT TIME!!!


AIGHT HERES SUM MORE WHERE I LEFT OF......>>>>
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Old 11-13-2009, 04:46 PM   #3
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DREAMER- ORALE, WELL HOW'D YOU KNOW THEY CALL ME DREAMER???

SOLO- ITS NOT THAT HARD TO FIGURE OUT... I JUST SEEN YOU SITIN THERE IN YOUR OWN LIL WORLD, IT SAYS IT ALL K NO???
(His eyes steady kept on her, and she couldnt help but smile with a vato lookin so damn fine like that lol)

DREAMER- YEAH I GUESS

SOLO- SO YOU BOUT TO WALK UP IN THIS HOE OR WHAT MIJA???

DREAMER- DO I HAVE A CHOICE??? LOL

SOLO- SHYT WE CAN DITCH THIS HOE AND HEAD DOWN TO MI CASA... SO WUZZUP.... YOU WANT TO????
(As solo was sayn this he looked at her up and down and licked his lips, he knew she was feelin him because when he asked he got closer and she didnt step back)

ORALE WELL THERES THIS LIL PART OF THE REST... SHOW SUM LOVE SO I CAN POST SUM MORE AIIGHT, AND IF NOT JUST LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK... OR WHAT YOU THINKS GOIN TO HAPPEN!!!!
THANKZZZ!!!
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Old 11-13-2009, 06:04 PM   #4
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damn girl i like your story....keep it cumin..watz gonna happen nxt...come on lol
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I like it keep it cuming...i wanna see wat this nigga all about lol
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AIIGHT HEREZ SUM MORE.... LONG POST TO MAKE UP FOR THE SHORT ONE LOL

(Dreamer got a lil more closer to him and leaned in to tell him something, she had on this sexy azz smile that made him get all exited)

DREAMER- LOL NAW MIJO…. YOU WISH….
(She answered him a lil low, but Memphis still heard, after that she just took off to the front doors of the school. Solo just waited for her to walk past him and put on a big azz smile, he was smiling cuz she teased the fuk out of him and because… he liked it)

MEMPHIS- DAMN VATO… COMO SE DICE…. O YEAH.... YOU GOT DISSED HOMIE!!!!!! LOL
(He was makin fun of Solo as he followed behind Dreamer)

SOLO- SHYT ABOUT TIME I FIND A HYNA THAT’S NOT AN EASY FUK…
(He whispered out loud to himself)

SOLO- O ITS LIKE DAT LOL
(He said because he seen Memphis and Dreamer already heading towards the metal detectors inside and left him behind lol. By the way The metal detectors didnt work for shyt, people always ended sneaking shyt into the school, wheather it was drugs or weapons)

LADY- EXCUSE ME CAN YOU TAKE OFF YOUR SHOES???

DREAMER- WTF HELL NAW, I CANT TAKE OFF MY SHOES, FOR WHAT???

LADY- WELL SWEETY YOU HAVE TO... ITS PROCEDURE....

DREAMER- WELL THEN "SWEETY" YOU CAN TAKE YOUR PROCEDURE AND SHOVE IT UP YOU FUKIN AZZ!

(Everyone was lookin and Memphis had on a face that read...WTF! lol...)

LADY- EXCUSE ME!!! COME WITH ME!

(Dreamer couldnt even believe she was in that damm skool in the first place and couldnt even stand being there. Literaly the damn skool looked like a fukin mini police station)

DREAMER- MAN FUK THIS...
(She said as she was about to walk out of the skool until some black cop got in her way)

COP- COME ON DONT DO THIS.

DREAMER- WHAT ARE YOU TALKIN ABOUT THAT BITCH IS TRIPPIN...

COP- COME WITH ME AND CALM DOWN

DREAMER- WHAT, NO, WHY??? IF YOUR GOING TO GIVE ME SOME DUMB TICKET JUST DO IT BUT THAT LADYS TRIPPIN...

COP- CHILL, YOUR GOOD, NOW COME WITH ME SO WE CAN TALK ABOUT ALL THIS SHYT.

(Dreamer was surprised about the way the cop started talkin... Then he looked behind her a little and then looked at her again)

COP- COME ON...

(Dreamer looked behind her and saw some white cop going their way and understood what he meant by that look. Cops were fukin racist in their area. So she just shook her head alright. The cop walked ahead and she followed straight into an office. she sat across from him in a old azz chair while he sat behind the desk that separated them in a BIG AZZ comfortable chair. Dreamer didnt say anything and neither did he, they both had a serious face... until the cop broke the silence when he smiled.)

COP- YOU ARE SO CRAZY MS.....???
(he waited for her to complete the question with her name but Dreamer just kept a straight face and didtnt answer.)

COP- AIIGHT LETS TRY THIS AGAIN A DIFFERENT WAY.... IM OFFICER CHAMBERS, WHATS YOUR NAME???

OFFICER CHAMBERS- BLACK, 5'9, BUILT, 29YRS OLD, TALKED LIKE A YOUNGSTA BECAUSE HE USED TO DEAL ALOT WITH GANGS AND YOUNG KIDS AS WELL AS GROWN GANG MEMBERS AND ALWAYS TRIED TO CUT A DEAL WIT THEM AS LONG AS THEY WERE HONEST WIT HIM.

DREAMER- MARI...

CHAMBERS- NO NICKNAME????
(He asked that because around there they only used nicknames... it was a sign of respect)

DREAMER- .... DREAMER.

CHAMBERS- ALRIGHT... SO WHAT HAPPENED DOWN THERE??

DREAMER- THAT LADYS A TRIP... SHE WAS TALKIN BOUT... "TAKE YOUR SHOES OFF" WHAT KINDA SHYT IS THAT??? ISNT THIS SUPPOSED TO BE A FUKIN SKOOL?

CHAMBERS- THATS THE WAY THEY DO IT HERE, THEY TRY TO KEEP THESE STUDENTS FROM BRINGING IN ANYTHING THAT MIGHT HARM SOMEONE. MOST KIDS HERE CANT CONTROL THEIR TEMPERS AND ITS NOT SAFE FOR THEM TO JUST GO OFF. LOL SHYT YOUR LUCKY SHE WAS GOING TO LET YOU IN DA SKOOL WITH THEM HOOPS... USUALLY JEWLERY IS THE FIRST THING THEY BITCH ABOUT.

(Mari thought about what he said and touched her left hoop with her right hand for a quick second)

DREAMER- WELL IM NOT USED TO ALL THIS DUMB SHYT... SO ARE YOU GOIN TO GIVE ME ANOTHER TICKET???

CHAMBERS- ANOTHER???

DREAMER- YEAH, I OWE A TICKET FROM THAT FIGHT THAT GOT ME HERE. I DONT EVEN KNOW HOW WERE GOING TO PAY THAT HOE.
(Dreamer looked down and started feelin bad cuz she knew her mom was goin to have to pay $340 just cuz of her mistake)

CHAMBERS- PROMISE ME YOU'LL TRY TO KEEP YOUR KOOL AS LONG AS YOUR IN DIZ SKOOL...

DREAMER- MAN IM NOT GOIN TO...

CHAMBERS- YES YOU WILL

DREAMER- WHO DO YOU THINK YOUR TALKINK TO LIKE...

CHAMBERS- YES YOU WILL BECAUSE IF YOU PROMISE ME THAT YOU DONT HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT THAT FIRST TICKET...

DREAMER- YOUR LYEN... HOW ARE YOU GOING TO DO THAT????

CHAMBERS- YOU JUST WORRY ABOUT GOIN THROUGH WITH THAT PROMISE ALRIGHT....

DREAMER- ARE YOU SERIOUS??? BECAUSE IF YOU BULLSHYTN THAT SOME MESSED UP SHYT TO BE PLAYN ABOUT.

CHAMERS- LOL NAW IM SERIOUS. IM TRYN TO HELP YOU MAR.... DREAMER. I DONT WANT TO SEE A YOUNG LADY LIKE YOURSELF END UP LIKE THESE FOOS IN HERE. AND I CAN SEE YOU CAN DO BETTER.

(Dreamer didnt say anything)

CHAMBERS- ALRIGHT NOW GO TO THE WAITIN ROOM WHERE EVERYONE IS AT, CLASSES DONT REALLY START TILL 9AM AND ITS 8:38AM.

DREAMER- THEN WHY DO WE HAVE TO GET HERE BEFORE 7:30???

CHAMBERS- EVERY MORNIN EVERYONE MEETS UP IN THE FIRST CLASSROOM ON THE RIGHT SIDE AND THE MAIN TEACHERS AND PRINCIPAL ASSISTANTS GO OVER ALL THE RULES AND CONSEQUENCES FOR NEW STUDENTS AND TO GET IT THROUGH THE CURRENT STUDENTS HEADS!!!LOL

DREAMER- O I GUESS, SO I GO TO THE FIRST CLASSROOM FROM THE FRONT DOORS???

CHAMBERS- YES MAMM.

(Dreamer was already walkin out and on her way out she murmered "THANX")

CHAMBERS- WHAT WAS THAT???

DREAMER- NAW NOTHIN

(Chambers waited for her to leave and then answered to himself "YOUR WELCOME")

(As she walked through the long hallway towards the long hallway towards the front doors she looked straight at some vato that was walkin into the skool, and as she got a lil closer he looked straight at her too. They starred at eachother for a minute until she looked away and slowly walked into the class.)

TEACHER1- NEW STUDENT???

(As she asked everyone turned to look at her. Bitches were already hatin and vatos were already droolin. Memphis looked at Solo and that Vato was starrin hard)

DREAMER- YEAH

TEACHER1- SIT ON THE FAR RIGHT END OF THE CLASSROOM.

DREAMER- AIIGHT

(As she walked to the back she heard sum foo whistle but she ignored it(Memphis krazie AZZ!!!lol). When she sat down she saw the vato she had seen in the hallway walked in the class.)

TEACHER1- JUAN!!! WELCOME BACK! BARLEY 2 WEEKS OUT OF EHRE AND YOUR ALREADY BACK?? YOU MISSED US THAT MUCH???
(The teacher told him puttin him on the spot but he didnt give a fuk he had on a serious face and the teacher noticed he wasnt bout to talk to her loud azz)

JUAN- 18YRS OLD, 5'8, SWOLL BODY, DARK TONE SKIN, FADED UP, LIGHT BROWN EYES, TROUBLE MAKER BUT SMART, DIDNT GIVE A FUK BOUT FEMALES, HAD A DIFFRENT RUKA EVERY WEEKEND. FIRME AZZ VATO

TEACHER1- GO AHEAD AND SIT ANYWHERE ON THE LEFT SIDE.

(He just walked through the second row goin towards an empty seat in the back.)

SUM BITCH- DAMN MIJO, YOU STILL LOOK FYNE AZZ FUK..(she said that bittin her bottom lip and lookin at his muscles. She could see some of his vains down his fore arm from working out and she got turned on)

(He walked past her and had a grin on his face, but didnt give a fuk bout that hoe. When he sat down he looked to his left and looked at Dreamer for a second. She could feel him lookin at her but she didnt wana make it look obious)

MEMPHIS- EY VATO CALMATE, YOU STARRIN TOO MUCH, THATS RUDE HOMIE LOL
(Memphis KrazY azz always HAD TO ruin the moment lol)

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DAMN DREAMER YOU GOT NIGGAS GOIN CRAZY FOR YOU...hmmm i wonder who she gone be wit 1st memphis or juan?? maybe both
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THANX FOR SHOWIN LOVE EVERYONE!!!! AND FOR THE REST OF YOU ALL DONT FORGET TO START REPLYIN ON WHAT YALL THINKS GOIN TO HAPPEN OR JUST TO TELL ME HOW THE STORYZ GOIN!!!... AIIGHT HEREZ A LIL MORE IF YALL SHOW SUM LOVE I'LL CONTINUE IT.....

JUAN- NAW VATO YOU TRIPPIN LOL.

SOLO- SHE LOOK GOOD HU???

JUAN- FUK YEAH, LOOK AT THAT FACE....

MEMPHIS- LOL SHYT LOOK AT THAT BODY HOMIE, I WOULD TAP THAT AZZ WITHOUT A DOUBT SERIO. JUST KISS HER ALL UP ON THAT SEXY FACE AND GRAB ON THEM BIG AZZ TITTIES AND JUST SUCK ON THAT...

SOLO- DAMN ESE WTF LOL

MEMPHIS- O SHYT MA BAD FOO LOL

(Juan wasnt even really payn attention he was jus thinkin bout how beautiful she was)

JUAN- YOU KRAZIE VATO
(He turned and glanced at her one more time)

TEACHER2- EVERYONE ON THE LAST 3 ROWS COME WITH ME.

(Dreamer got up and followed everyone out the class. Juanz eyes followed her all the way out. But she knew he was lookin so she wanted to catch him lookin lol so right before she walked out she looked to her right. They starred at eachother for a lil and she gave him this lil sexy smile and looked away. DAMN HE FUKIN LOVED IT!)

MEMPHIS- DAMN HOMIE YOU REALLY FEELIN THAT RUKA K NO???

(As he asked solo overheard and looked at juan jus waitin to hear his answer...)

JUAN- K TRAIS ESE, I DONT EVEN KNOW HER.

MEMPHIS- BUT YOU WANT TO GET TO NO HER... O NO????

JUAN- .... SHYT, SHE AINT TRYN TO TALK TO A VATO LIKE ME, DID YOU SEE HER??? SHES BEAUTIFUL AND STRAIGHT UP SHE LOOK A LIL STUCK UP.

SOLO- NAW ESE, SHES STRAIGHT, SHE DONT EVEN ACT LIKE THAT, NOT FROM THE LIL I KNOW BOUT HER.

MEMPHIS- WELL HOMIE... YOU WANT ME TO INTRODUCE YOU TO HER??? SHYT YOU KNOW I'LL DO IT LOL.

(When solo heard that he didnt know why but he got a lil mad, he had already been thinkin bout seein wuzzup with her... and was jus thinkin to himself..."WTF IS WRONG WITH MEMPHIS TRYIN TO BE CUPID AND SHYT" But he felt realief to hear Juanz answer)

JUAN- YOU TALKED TO HER????

MEMPHIS- ENOUGH TO INTRODUCE HER TO YOU. YEAH.

JUAN- NAW ASI DEJALO.

MEMPHIS- DAMNN.... LOL YOUR LOSS.

<In the class Dreamer walked into>

(Dreamer walked in and noticed the desks were all separated so no students could see eachother, there was only and empty space in the middle so no matter were you sat you could see the teacher and she could see you. Everyone was being assigned their seats... And damm all the seats were fukin full exept one behind Dreamers. They started off by doin some easy azz worksheet. She even felt stupid as she was workin on it lol. But she ended up concentrating on it and didnt even notice someon had sat in the empty seat behind her. And then some one broke her concentration lol)

VATO- DAMN MIJA WERED YOU GET ALL THEM SEXY AZZ CURVES FROM??? ID SURE LIKE TO RIDE ON THAT! (He was sayn this wit a big azz smile and lookin at her big titts and at how nice and just right her body was)
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oh shit keep it comming!!!!
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