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Old 10-12-2009, 11:50 PM   #1
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Im working on a new story!!
hope yall like it..
let me know what yall think

Her name is Abigail… loved my many secretly hated by few... Everyone around her isn’t what it seems to be...

Abigail is 21 years old… she has a gorgeous face that will literally leave you captivated she has a nice tan… she has long brown hair… beautiful green eyes… the perfect figure you can almost say Abigail is flawless. She is a very nice person… money doesn’t really matter to her although she does indulge herself on shopping sprees. Abigail is devoted to her family, she tries to please everyone. She has never fallen in love; she has dated here and there but nothing serious.

Mikaela is 21 years old has grown up with Abigail since they were babies; have been inseparable since. Mikaela is very beautiful, she has light brown eyes, tanned, very nice figure, she has long black hair. Mikaela is sweet she also comes from a wealthy family. She has fallen in and out of love several times, but she always seems to fall for the wrong guys!!

Family history:
Her familys fortune hasn’t been honestly earned.. her father is a powerful and ruthless man who doesn’t care what he has to do to get what he wants unfortunately the consequences for his actions Abigail will pay.


A-okay guys’ im going to the gym with Mikaela Ill see yall later!!

Abby drove off in her white Porsche Cayenne.
She drove off listening to “Abusadora by Wisin y Yandel”

She was all into her song when she noticed a black Range Rover pull up next to her…
She looked over and she saw this really cute guy starring at her...
His stare was soo intense Abby felt chills…
She pulled up her windows and drove off…

She finally got to the gym…
She was wearing a black and hot pink gym outfit… she walked in and saw Mikaela waiting for her.. she was wearing almost the same thing Abby was except in all black!!

A- Damn copycat…
M- me never.. you lol
A- pssh whatever.. omg so tell me why this guy kept starring at me while I was at a light.. I mean he was starring hard…
M- hmm was he cute lol…
A- oh god.. well yeah he was…
M- lets hope you see him again no cres..
A- umm no ill pass…

We went about our business and did some cardio and whatnot…

I walked by the weightlifting area and I felt that same intense sensation..
I looked around me and it was him… starring at me… wtf how was he here.. psycho perhaps.. lol.. he smiled at me.. I smiled back.. the way he looked at me made me feel soo weird.. idk how to explain it…

I walked off and went towards the pool.. I needed a swim.. I dove in and the water felt soo good.. I swam for a while.. for some reason that guy kept popping in my head.. why did he stare at me like that? Did I know him? Whatever… I went to the locker room and showered, I got dressed and waited for Mikaela…

M- ok im ready..
A- damn ya era tiempo lol…
M- im hungry can we go have dinner plz…
A- we just worked out loser
M- sooo plzzz
A- ok ok lol…

We walked towards the exit.. that is until I felt someone pull on me…

A- ouch!!
Guy- umm sorry.. I didn’t mean to hurt you
A- well you did.. can I help you
Guy- I just wanted to tell you that well I have never seen such a beautiful girl in my life!!





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Old 10-13-2009, 02:45 AM   #2
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Old 10-13-2009, 05:30 AM   #3
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Keep postin
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Old 10-13-2009, 06:27 AM   #4
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keep it comin...like it so far... its different
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Old 10-13-2009, 07:37 AM   #5
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sorry so short!!
heres some more.. ill post more later...

A- umm ok thanx I guess
Guy- my name is Daniel
A- oh ok.. Nice meeting you
D- and your
A- oh im Abigail
D- well nice meeting you too..
A- thanx
D- see ya around!
A- mmkay

A-omg how weird was that…
M- omg are you stupid he was soo sexy!! Soo delicious!! Those muscles mmmm
A- your gross…

I couldn’t help but think of this Daniel he was cute… but I didn’t feel that idk spark..
I was overanalyzing the situation waaay too much!! I went to dinner with Mikaela.. We talked and enjoyed our dinner!! We called it a night!! I went home and had a long and nice bubble bath!! I eventually went to sleep!!

------------------------------------------with daniel-------------------------------------------

D- hey I finally met her…
Guy- and…
D- you know she seemed like a really nice girl..
Guy- I don’t care.. I don’t pity her or her family!!
D- its really not fair though…
Guy- shut the fukk up!! What they did will not go unpunished!!
D- damn so young y tan amargadoo
Guy- cayate.. You just don’t know what I saw.. What I felt!!
D- mmm all im saying is when you meet this girl you better be careful and not fall for her.. Shes a hottie!! No lie.. She has a nice body and those eyes mmmm esta bien Buena!!
Guy- calmate guey!!
D- so when are you gonna casually bump into her..
Guy- tomorrow.. At her school..
D- mmm… and do you really think shes gonna fall for you?
Guy- I have yet to meet a girl who hasn’t!!
D- calm down cocky ass!!
Guy- it’s the truth!1
D- well this chick don’t seem like them other girls you have talked too…
Guy- all bitches are the same!! They are all hoes.. Abigail is no exception!!
D- well we shall see…

Guy- his name is Eduardo.. He is 24 years old.. Nice built body!! Brown eyes.. Dark hair.. Nice caramel skin tone.. Verrry rich!!! Used to having any girl whenever he wants!! He was in love once.. But his gf died.. He wasn’t a bad person.. But life was tough on him and his mom!! He lost his father at a young age… Abigails father is to blame for his death!! Lived only to fulfill his revenge against Abigails family!!





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Old 10-13-2009, 03:13 PM   #7
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i lyk it
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WOW!! sounds gewd keep it kumin
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OMG i love it!!!
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Old 10-14-2009, 03:49 AM   #10
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NEW STORY YEAH!!! IM ALREADY LIKIN IT K.I.C.
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