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Old 10-27-2009, 03:21 PM   #101
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keep it kumin mija but i hope he don't do nada bad to
her and he falls for her coz it ain't her fault
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Old 10-27-2009, 06:23 PM   #102
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Old 10-29-2009, 05:42 AM   #103
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Hey everyone I have yalls next post ready but now I'm having issues with my laptop... I'm currently on my itouch so if I can get it to work on my laptop then I'll post it asap...
Sorry for the wait!!!
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Old 10-29-2009, 06:09 AM   #104
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Old 10-29-2009, 06:50 PM   #105
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hope yall like it..

The next day was a drag!! I woke up super late, so I didn’t go to school…

I took a shower and put my robe on… I went to garden I wanted to have breakfast outside…
I let Nana know I wanted some French toast, coffee and fruits…

N- how are you this morning
A- im tired… I hate waking up so late
N- well if you need anything let me know ok
A- will do

I ate my breakfast… it was good… I was kinda avoiding my Dad I knew he would start bitching on how I didn’t go to school and how I was home waay too late… As soon as I finished I went to my room… I picked out some shorts and a polo shirt and some sandals… I straightened my hair and did my make up..

I called Mikeala, I hadn’t spoken to her which was odd… I wanted to go shopping

M- hey stranger!!
A- lol.. Watcha doing?
M- nothing barely waking up
A- well get ready I wanna go shopping
M- ooohh ok ill be ready in 30 minutes
A- cool… ill go pick you up!!
M- kay

We hung up… I went downstairs… My dad was gone already… well at least I wasn’t going to deal with him right now…

A- Nana can u tell my mom im going shopping with Mikeala!! Plzz
N- no worries ill let her know
A- thank you Nana!!

I went and got in my Bmw… I headed over to Mikealas…


-------------------------------Eduardo-----------------------------

E- what are u doing here…
D- nothing… damn bad mood
E- no..
D- yeah u are… you didn’t get laid
E- bitch I knew she wasn’t gonna give me any… but soo far I got her where I want!!
D- mmm… I guess… and her best friend?
E- shes just a good fuck… she will come in handy later…
D- so what now?
E- I wait… patience my friend…
D- I suppose ur right
E- I know im right…
D- well ill see you later gotta go to the office
E- aight.. Btw tell lisa I reviewed the contract and it’s a go!!
D- the Fuentes account?
E- yup…
D- arent they Abby’s father clients?
E- were his clients!!
D- ha.. See ya
--------------------------Abby-----------------

I finally got to her House… I txt her and told her I was outside… she finally came outside…

M- well you got here quick…
A- I was bored at home…
M- soo whats new
A- well I have a boyfriend now!!
M- omg tell me everything!!
A- lol

I drove off to the mall….
I told her everything about Eduardo and how I was falling for him and how I had never felt anything like this before for anyone!! She was very happy for me!!

We eventually got to the mall and shopped till we dropped!!

M- im hungry!1
A- me too… what shall we eat hmmm
M- sushi?
A- sounds good….

My cell rang it was Eduardo…

A- heyy!!
E- hey babe… wat are you up to/
A- umm nothing shopping with Mikeala…
E- oh yeah…
A- yup.. I cant wait till you meet her!!
E- me too….
A- what are you doing?
E- im gonna go help a friend close out a deal…
A- oh congrats!!
E- thank you… well ill let you get back to shopping!!

The rest of the day I hung out with Mikeala we had lunch and went to the gym!! Such a relaxing day!!


--------------------5 MONTHS LATER----------------------

Everything was going great… Eduardo and I were still together and very serious!! We still hadn’t done anything beyond kissing… we wanted more but I told him I wanted to wait… he understood and I loved him for it!!! I knew I had found the man of my dreams!! My dad was still very skeptical about him… we would argue about him sometimes… My mom liked him and so did everyone else!! I introduced Mikeala to Eduardo and they seemed to get along!!! Although Mikeala and I didn’t hang out very much… something had changed between us… I tried fixing the situation but it didn’t work… I figured she would come around… I was soo happy!!! Eduardo and I had talked about getting married and I now knew I would marry him if he asked me too!!! I had one more semester to get my degree in Business!!! Life was good!! I was blessed to have such great ppl in my life… My best guy friend Josue was coming back to town!! I was sooo happy!! I couldn’t wait to introduce him to Eduardo!! I met Eduardos Moom she was the sweetest person!! I couldn’t contain how happy I was with him!! My life was perfect!!




W/EDUARDO….
5 months have passed and now I was more sure then ever that I had Abigail where I wanted!! I was starting to influence her every thought and action… her father noticed and for that reason i knew he didn’t like me… but that didn’t matter… everyone else in her family “loved me” and as long as Abby was with me I was in charge!!

Mikeala I had wrapped around my finger… she started to hate Abigail… it wasn’t hard to convince her to stay quiet about us… I controlled her… Abigail felt like she had lost her best friend and she was right…
Who woulda thought Mikeala would turn out to be such a hoe!!!

I was more focused then ever know to go through with my vengeance!! They would pay!! They would lose Abby and all their fortune!!

As for Abby and I we got along great… she was a smart girl but her love towards me blinded her… she depended on me… and of course I took advantage of that… she was sweet and loyal to me… shes everything I look for in a girl… but she wasn’t the one for me….

My plans were at a peak… I planned on proposing for her 22nd bday which was only 2 weeks away!!!
I knew she would accept… and once we were married… my vengeance would begin!!


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Old 10-30-2009, 05:17 AM   #107
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hmm keep it coming.
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Old 10-30-2009, 05:45 AM   #108
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New reader!!!!!!!! Love da story I just hope he has a change of heart n won't hurt her cuz fuck it wasn't her fault n shit for wat her jefe did pero k.I.c ma
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Old 10-30-2009, 08:15 AM   #109
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keep it comin
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Old 10-30-2009, 01:46 PM   #110
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OMG hes evil... damn keep it coming mija its a great story!!!
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