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Old 10-14-2009, 05:59 AM   #11
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Old 10-14-2009, 07:15 AM   #12
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Old 10-14-2009, 08:55 AM   #13
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Thank yall for reading my story!!
Im glad yall like it..
Here’s some more…
Tell me what yall think



The next day Abby woke up... it was really early in the morning… she got ready for school... She attended “Jules Private University” she had one more year to get her degree in Business... Following her fathers’ footsteps to one day taking over the family company!!

It was super hott outside so she wore some skinny jeans and a cute top… she put her hair up in a ponytail and put some sandals on… she grabbed her back pack and went to the dinning room!! Her Nana was fixing up the breakfast!!

A- good morning Nana
N- oh lord me asustaste Nina!!
A- lol… yummy pancakes!!
N- let me serve you some
A- oh no its ok.. im running late
N- no no.. come on at least one…
A- your gonna make me get fat!!
N- I just don’t want u to get hungry later…
A- I know thanx Nana!!!

I ate my food... man was it delicious!!
I was finishing up and getting ready to go when I heard my dad on the phone…

A- Buenos dias papi!!
Dad- hola mi amor!! Ready for school?!
A- Of course!! Lol ill see you later!! Love ya
Dad- alright.. make me some A’s!!!
A- always lol… Alright love yall and ill see yall later!!

Nana- Mr. Altamira, what would you like for breakfast?
MR.A- Please don’t call me Mr. I don’t know how many times I have to tell you.. your family.. just call me Gustavo…
N- I know Gustavo Im just so used to calling you by Mr. lol

A little history on Nana…
Nana has been around since Abby was born!! They are extremely close!! Almost like a 2nd mother to her!! They love each other very much!! She helps Abby in whatever she can and is respected by the family!! She is the staff manager for the Altamira residence!!


Back with Abby..

I decided to take my BMW … I drove off and finally got to school.. ugh I was already late 10 minutes.. I hated being late… especially cuz my professor was a total douche!!
I parked in my usual spot and grabbed my books.. I walked off in a hurry.. I must have not paid attention where I was going… I bumped into some guy and I dropped all of my stuff!!
A-UGH great!! Im sorry I wasn’t watching where I was going!!
Guy- not its ok its my fault.. I shoulda paid more attention…
A- oh.. seems we were both distracted…
Guy- here let me help…
A- umm thanks…

I wasn’t paying attention… I realized I was too late to even go to class… damnit!! What a bad start to my day…

Guy- hey you ok…
A- Huh... Umm oh yeah im fine!!
Guy- you going to class?
A- ahh im deliberating.. Im super late so yeah you know how they are…
Guy- yeah I know... hey you wanna go have a cup of coffee.
A- ahh yeah sure why not… lol
Guy- cool… well we can go somewhere off campus or we can just have starbucks in the commons!!
A- The starbucks here is fine…
Guy- ok cool…

We walked off to the commons…. I finally realized how hott the guy was!! My gosh!!
He was tall dark haired… brown eyes mmm amazing!! He was wearing black slacks with a black dress shirt.. he was very nicely dressed!! Very professional!!

Guy- you ok..
A- Yeah... oh btw im Abigail... but they call me Abby
Guy- nice to meet you Abby… my name is Eduardo
A- Oh nice meeting you too… you know with you knocking my books and all…
E- Me no you.. Miss I don’t pay attention to where im going!! Lol
A- whatever… lol
E- well let me go get us some coffee…
A- ok cool..

He left to get the coffee.. man this was funny and cute.. he also seemed very mature.. there was something about him that drew me to him… idk what it was.. he finally came back…

E- Hope you like it..
A- Im sure I will thanx…
E- So what class are you supposed to be in..
A- Umm business administration 2304 and you?
E- That’s a tough class… oh me I just came to say hi to a friend of mine; she works in the Technology department… I graduated from here about 2 years ago..
A- Wow really.. what did you major in…
E- Business… lol
A- Really.. that’s my major too!!
E- Maybe I can tutor you if u ever need help…
A- Not to seem cocky but im pretty smart lol..
E- Yeah ur cocky!! Omg whatever lol…

The rest of the time we talked and flirted!! He was soo different... from what he told me he had his own house... a degree, single... And wealthy... My dad would love him!! Lol I was getting way ahead of myself... lol

A- Well I have to get to my next class..
E- Oh yeah…
A- yupp so I guess ill see you around…
E- ahh yeah.. Actually can I have ur number maybe we can have dinner or lunch sometime!! If you would like to of course...
A- umm yeah sure that would be nice…

We exchanged numbers and said our goodbyes!!
I was kinda happy/excited.. the rest of my day was great!! I was in a great mood!!

-------------------------------------Eduardo----------------------------------------------------------

E- Its not gonna be soo tough…
D- What did you think about her..
E- She’s aight…
D- aight?? Fukk no you know shes fine as fukk!!
E- Look at you all sprung over some some bitch!!
D- Admit it.. shes prettier then what you thought!!
E- Fine... she’s gorgeous… but it doesn’t change anything…
D- mmmm… sucks huh
E- No … too bad she has to pay for dads mistakes!! And trust me he will pay… he will feel soo much pain when I take his baby girl away!!!
D- You scare me sometimes…
E- Ha.. Abigail thinks she’s soo smart... she doesn’t even know what’s in store for her…





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Old 10-14-2009, 11:12 PM   #15
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Old 10-15-2009, 05:56 AM   #17
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