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Old 10-15-2009, 06:51 AM   #21
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The rest of the day was good.. I was tired and hungry… school was a major pain!!
I got in my car and drove off.. I was listening to Carrie Underwood… she was a pretty good singer!!
I grabbed my phone and called Mikeala..

M- hey
A- whatcha doing?
M- nothing.. Starving.. I just got out of class
A- oh im hungry too … wanna have lunch?
M- umm yeah sure.. Where at?
A- I feel like Mexican food .. Don Carlos?
M- oh yeah that sounds good.. Meet ya there in 30
A- ok cool…

I headed to the restaurant… When I finally got there I got a table and waited for Mikeala.. Always late lol.. I checked my phone and I had a txt from Eduardo.. Hmmm

E- hey how about some dinner tomorrow?
A- are you asking me out on a date?
E- Do you want to go on a date with me?
A- are you asking?
E- yeah I am.. Is that a yes?
A- hmm lol.. Yeah sure..
E- Cool where would you like to go?

I didn’t reply.. Mikeala had just gotten to the table..

M- sorry im late
A- mmhmm like always lol jk foo
M- ahh lets order…

We ordered the food and it was really good!!
We talked and o told her all about Eduardo…

M- omg does he have muscles?
A- umm idk I didn’t see him naked.. But he looked like he had a nice body!!
M- oh my…
A- as a matter of fact he txt me asking me out on a date…
M- oooh…good..
A- yeah I know..

I finally txt him back..

A- hmm take me wherever… lol
E- anywhere?
A- to eat yess.. Lol
E- haha ok ok.. Cool..

We finished having dinner and talked about our day…
I finally got home and called it a night.. My dad was in his office talking business like always and my mom was still on vacation.. I was pretty lonely.. Eduardo was on my mind!! I was crushing on him waaay too fast totally unlike me!!

I laid down and tried to sleep… that is until my cell rang… omg it Eduardo!!

E- hey ..
A- hey!!
E- did I wake you?
A- umm no not at all..
E- I gotta make a confession!!
A- omg your married?
E- haha no.. lol..
A- then
E- I cant stop thinking about you?
A- liar.. You hardly know me
E- no lie.. But I also think ive been on your mind a lot!!
A- umm no you haven’t lol.. Jk just a little..
E- lol ahh I knew it…well I just wanted to say I had a goodtime hanging out with you today!!
A- same here…

We kept talking a little longer on the phone.. We finally hung up around 1am…
I could literally talk to him about anything!!


im glad yall are likin the story!!
heres a lil more!!


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Old 10-15-2009, 08:37 AM   #22
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dam kitty you write so dam organized and neat!! its trippy! hahaha

pero,yea your story sound pretty good so far mija

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Old 10-15-2009, 09:22 AM   #23
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what a freakin creeper lol
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Old 10-15-2009, 02:07 PM   #24
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Old 10-15-2009, 07:24 PM   #25
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man I second my cpmpatriota shadow... ur stories are so good and easy to read... love them!!
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I like this story, keep it coming.!
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Old 10-15-2009, 09:33 PM   #27
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WAITIN FOR SOME MORE I HOPE SHE MAKE EDUARDO FALL FOR HER BAD KEEP~IT~COMIN
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i need more

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More!!I love it!!
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